Comments received on poems by ooznozz
FRAYED ANGEL HAIR (A TANGLED MESS)
lysistrata said:
There are some interesting thoughts within the Mess of this Mass.
July 19th, 2016 11:07
lysistrata said:
There are some interesting thoughts within the Mess of this Mass.
July 19th, 2016 11:07
FRAYED ANGEL HAIR (A TANGLED MESS)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OOZNOZZ ~ Thanks for a very powerful and personal first poem. It is without rhyme but not without reason and it resonates with the horrors of you mind and your spirit "Woe is me for I am becoming undone !" Some statements very true to our own experiences ~ from time to time. "But inside (me) there's an invisible world not far away in which there's human suffering ~ Can this drama ~ the supreme embodiment of the human condition ~ possibly be OK ? It's all scary !" Very powerful statement ~ BUT ~ in the end we are masters of our own destinies ~ BUT ~ with a little help from our friends (and GOD ?) we can and must survive. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OOZNOZZ ~ Thanks for a very powerful and personal first poem. It is without rhyme but not without reason and it resonates with the horrors of you mind and your spirit "Woe is me for I am becoming undone !" Some statements very true to our own experiences ~ from time to time. "But inside (me) there's an invisible world not far away in which there's human suffering ~ Can this drama ~ the supreme embodiment of the human condition ~ possibly be OK ? It's all scary !" Very powerful statement ~ BUT ~ in the end we are masters of our own destinies ~ BUT ~ with a little help from our friends (and GOD ?) we can and must survive. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:15
