July 18th- 2015
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME KHOLE ~ Thanks for a very personal and powerful first poem. Sounds like you found your soulmate ! Love the contrasts ~ ride through Hell ~ journey through Heaven ~ charming and vengeful ~ terrifying and exciting ! Love the final couplet ~ "I no longer resent him for breaking me ~ Instead I thank him for changing me". Seeing yourself as a Filly to be broken (and accepting it) is a very exciting concept ! Thanks for sharing an elegant and revealing poem ~ BRIAN

July 19th, 2016 05:24