Comments received on poems by MelancholyMe
Short Poem No. 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem. Nice structure rhyme & rhythm and a reflective topic for a Young Man ! As you say tempus fugit so we have to make each day count. Time goes faster as you get older ~ so stop sitting and start selling (or whatever !). Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 17:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem. Nice structure rhyme & rhythm and a reflective topic for a Young Man ! As you say tempus fugit so we have to make each day count. Time goes faster as you get older ~ so stop sitting and start selling (or whatever !). Yours BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 17:08