Jade
Justsomegeeze said:

Your 6th stanza is amazing! Powerfully emotive throughout

July 21st, 2016 17:29

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ravage said:

It is interesting how connected I am with this poem..

July 21st, 2016 10:27

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME CHARLIE ~ Thank for an excellently penned (rhyme & rhythm) first (love) poem ! Sadness tinged with resolution. I'm old enough to have had such an experience and it is very very hard to bear ! Experientially i empathise with your repeated resolve "All that's left is love and lust ~ I don't care ~ I just want her !" Thanks forr sharing and caring ~ BRIAN

July 21st, 2016 06:51