Comments received on poems by baby3
Tomorrow we will see
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BABY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ full of resolve ~ for TOMORROW. Love the structure of the poem and the single rhyming pattern ...... E E ~ for all seven perfect lines. JESUS loves you and values you just as you are ~ JESUS is the same Yesterday ~ Today ~ TOMORROW ~ Forever. Love yourself ~ be free ~ graduate and everything will fit into God's perfect pattern for you ! There is a degree of SADNESS but my category would be HOPE. Thanks for sharing ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN.
July 23rd, 2016 00:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BABY ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ full of resolve ~ for TOMORROW. Love the structure of the poem and the single rhyming pattern ...... E E ~ for all seven perfect lines. JESUS loves you and values you just as you are ~ JESUS is the same Yesterday ~ Today ~ TOMORROW ~ Forever. Love yourself ~ be free ~ graduate and everything will fit into God's perfect pattern for you ! There is a degree of SADNESS but my category would be HOPE. Thanks for sharing ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN.
July 23rd, 2016 00:49