Comments received on poems by karmakills
Tarnished
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KARMA ~ Love the flow in this prose-poem it is relentless augmenting the meaning of every word & phrase. I am 30+ so I can empathise with your feelings. All the memories trapped in our subconsciousness come bubbling to the surface ~ especially those that are tarnished. For me today is a new day ~ I try to forget the tarnish of the past and press on to what the future has in store ~ but it's not easy ! Thanks for sharing ~ it is helpful for me and I trust cathartic for you ! BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 01:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KARMA ~ Love the flow in this prose-poem it is relentless augmenting the meaning of every word & phrase. I am 30+ so I can empathise with your feelings. All the memories trapped in our subconsciousness come bubbling to the surface ~ especially those that are tarnished. For me today is a new day ~ I try to forget the tarnish of the past and press on to what the future has in store ~ but it's not easy ! Thanks for sharing ~ it is helpful for me and I trust cathartic for you ! BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 01:01
