Comments received on poems by custardcube
A Lifetime Record
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CC ~ Thanks for a very interesting first poem. Elegant structure Quatrains with rhyming couplets gives it form and flow ~ a "proper poem" ! The subject is also elegantly presented "A Lifetime Record". The moving hand doth write and having writ moves on ~ Nor all thy piety nor wit can lure it back to cancel half a line ~ Nor all thy tears wash out a word of it ! I often reply mine ~ sometimes with laughter ~ sometimes with tears ~ but i have to live and die with it ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 09:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CC ~ Thanks for a very interesting first poem. Elegant structure Quatrains with rhyming couplets gives it form and flow ~ a "proper poem" ! The subject is also elegantly presented "A Lifetime Record". The moving hand doth write and having writ moves on ~ Nor all thy piety nor wit can lure it back to cancel half a line ~ Nor all thy tears wash out a word of it ! I often reply mine ~ sometimes with laughter ~ sometimes with tears ~ but i have to live and die with it ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 09:17
