Comments received on poems by PeachSlap



Lethal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI PEACH ~ We were all born to LOVE and to respond to LOVE ~ Every aspect of LOVE. You touch on the problem in you poem ~ we all are so so responsive to LOVE ~ that we accept the good with the bad the sweet with the toxic and the true with the false. I love the closing doublet "Darling ~ you are lethal ~ nothing more ~ nothing less" AWESOME ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN

July 26th, 2016 17:08

Lethal
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..

July 26th, 2016 14:55

Lethal
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..

July 26th, 2016 14:54

Simply a Dream
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PEACH ~ Thanks for your lovely but sad ode ! You say it all in just 17 words ~ almost a Haiku. I like it because it is something that those of us (just) over 30 can empathise with. I often share my dreams with ephemeral Ladies who never where and (probably) never will be mine ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

July 24th, 2016 03:06