Comments received on poems by PeachSlap
Lethal
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PEACH ~ We were all born to LOVE and to respond to LOVE ~ Every aspect of LOVE. You touch on the problem in you poem ~ we all are so so responsive to LOVE ~ that we accept the good with the bad the sweet with the toxic and the true with the false. I love the closing doublet "Darling ~ you are lethal ~ nothing more ~ nothing less" AWESOME ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 17:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI PEACH ~ We were all born to LOVE and to respond to LOVE ~ Every aspect of LOVE. You touch on the problem in you poem ~ we all are so so responsive to LOVE ~ that we accept the good with the bad the sweet with the toxic and the true with the false. I love the closing doublet "Darling ~ you are lethal ~ nothing more ~ nothing less" AWESOME ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
July 26th, 2016 17:08
Lethal
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..
July 26th, 2016 14:55
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..
July 26th, 2016 14:55
Lethal
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..
July 26th, 2016 14:54
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Straight up to the point. Men are lethal at times. Women are leviathans when they wanna be..do. You win in the end either way..lol.nice job..
July 26th, 2016 14:54
Simply a Dream
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PEACH ~ Thanks for your lovely but sad ode ! You say it all in just 17 words ~ almost a Haiku. I like it because it is something that those of us (just) over 30 can empathise with. I often share my dreams with ephemeral Ladies who never where and (probably) never will be mine ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME PEACH ~ Thanks for your lovely but sad ode ! You say it all in just 17 words ~ almost a Haiku. I like it because it is something that those of us (just) over 30 can empathise with. I often share my dreams with ephemeral Ladies who never where and (probably) never will be mine ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 24th, 2016 03:06
