Comments received on poems by Lee-Paul
master of time
rrodriguez said:
Time is relative. It does not wait. Continues is ever slow trek, but ironically it fast pace. Enjoyed your poem. Consider putting it in stanza format, it makes it more rhythmical and give it more flow.
July 31st, 2016 08:57
rrodriguez said:
Time is relative. It does not wait. Continues is ever slow trek, but ironically it fast pace. Enjoyed your poem. Consider putting it in stanza format, it makes it more rhythmical and give it more flow.
July 31st, 2016 08:57
master of time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEE ~ Thakns for your first poem. As you say Time (and Tide) waits for no man ! Th moving hand doth write and having writ moves on ............. ! However GOD (Creator and Sustainer of th e Universe) is independent of time ~ The past present and future are all the same to HIm ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 31st, 2016 08:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LEE ~ Thakns for your first poem. As you say Time (and Tide) waits for no man ! Th moving hand doth write and having writ moves on ............. ! However GOD (Creator and Sustainer of th e Universe) is independent of time ~ The past present and future are all the same to HIm ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 31st, 2016 08:35
