Comments received on poems by Emotionlesswreck
Drugs. (a haiku poem)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EW for a perfect set of HAIKU all about the upper and downers and in-betweeners that help you though your day ! Prozac ~ Hash ~ Cocaine ~ Ecstasy ~ LSD ~ they all seem to be in there somewhere ! BUT take care Sweetheart you are much too young and beautiful to die. I work with young people and those on drugs are happiest (and healthiest) when it is THEY who are in control and not the DRUG ! Thinking of you and praying for you ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 01:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks EW for a perfect set of HAIKU all about the upper and downers and in-betweeners that help you though your day ! Prozac ~ Hash ~ Cocaine ~ Ecstasy ~ LSD ~ they all seem to be in there somewhere ! BUT take care Sweetheart you are much too young and beautiful to die. I work with young people and those on drugs are happiest (and healthiest) when it is THEY who are in control and not the DRUG ! Thinking of you and praying for you ~ BRIAN
August 16th, 2016 01:59
He Beat Her
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EW ~ Thanks for a well written first poem (it flows) but with a very very depressing message. However it happens everyday all over the World especially in big cities. Ladies are beaten and abused and there are only two way out. ONE ~~ you kill your abuser TWO You kill yourself ! Either one has dire consequences Depression is a KILLER ! Thanks for caring and shsring ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EW ~ Thanks for a well written first poem (it flows) but with a very very depressing message. However it happens everyday all over the World especially in big cities. Ladies are beaten and abused and there are only two way out. ONE ~~ you kill your abuser TWO You kill yourself ! Either one has dire consequences Depression is a KILLER ! Thanks for caring and shsring ~ BRIAN
August 14th, 2016 16:03
