Comments received on poems by fateonfire



know yourself
Cheeky Missy said:

It is very fascinating for all the images your metaphors create....a very intriguing perspective on life and oneself. I don't quite make sense of it all but it is very interesting. Thanks for sharing. Your use of consonance(?) made it reminiscent of end-rhyming, lending a rhyming quality to it, which was enjoyable.

January 20th, 2011 21:58