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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome MARYLIN ~ Thanks you for your First Poem ~ The beauty of its STRUCTURE ~ Rhyme & Rhythm and flow ~ perfectly contrasts ~ The POIGNANCY of its SUBJECT. MPS is a very empathetic site and many will be able to share and understand the experiences. Cutting is a release and a Cri de Coeur ~ Suicide is a Shout of Despair. Life in the 21st C (for the majority) has led to an increase in the Number of People totally stressed out which leads to self harm & suicide. I\'m 35 and I share my Site with my Fiancee Angela (30) who is on a Work Exchange in New Zealand ! We have have found the LOVE we have for each other ~ and the opportunity to be married in 2020 ~ keeps us SANE ~ OK Please check our site ~ thanks for sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. MPS works by reading and commenting on others Poems. You can also build up a group of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK !
October 4th, 2018 18:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome MARYLIN ~ Thanks you for your First Poem ~ The beauty of its STRUCTURE ~ Rhyme & Rhythm and flow ~ perfectly contrasts ~ The POIGNANCY of its SUBJECT. MPS is a very empathetic site and many will be able to share and understand the experiences. Cutting is a release and a Cri de Coeur ~ Suicide is a Shout of Despair. Life in the 21st C (for the majority) has led to an increase in the Number of People totally stressed out which leads to self harm & suicide. I\'m 35 and I share my Site with my Fiancee Angela (30) who is on a Work Exchange in New Zealand ! We have have found the LOVE we have for each other ~ and the opportunity to be married in 2020 ~ keeps us SANE ~ OK Please check our site ~ thanks for sharing Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. MPS works by reading and commenting on others Poems. You can also build up a group of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK !
October 4th, 2018 18:07
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G84 said:
Wow ... such a sad but poignant write yet I rhymed so easily which tells me these words were already structured into poem just never written until now.
This would be very simple to transfer to song
Good write
October 4th, 2018 10:26
G84 said:
Wow ... such a sad but poignant write yet I rhymed so easily which tells me these words were already structured into poem just never written until now.
This would be very simple to transfer to song
Good write
October 4th, 2018 10:26
