Comments received on poems by Akamykowski
A kind intension
lysistrata said:
I appreciate your intension,but I thought frogs were hiding/sleeping during the winter?!🐸
August 21st, 2016 03:02
lysistrata said:
I appreciate your intension,but I thought frogs were hiding/sleeping during the winter?!🐸
August 21st, 2016 03:02
A kind intension
TheLonelyArtist said:
A beautiful poem from the heart, thank you for writing this :)
August 21st, 2016 02:57
TheLonelyArtist said:
A beautiful poem from the heart, thank you for writing this :)
August 21st, 2016 02:57
A kind intension
Meghan_star said:
This was amazingly written, i actually felt the anger in the pit of my stomach as you described it!
August 20th, 2016 19:19
Meghan_star said:
This was amazingly written, i actually felt the anger in the pit of my stomach as you described it!
August 20th, 2016 19:19
A kind intension
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AKA ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Nice struture with lots of internal rhyme and rhythm as befits a poem whose main character is a FROG ! Frogs are one of God's great jokes in Nature (along with OWLS) to convince us he has a sense of humour ~ after all he created Man & Woman ! The content of this poem (as Rodriguez has pointed out) is not to restrict Children in their pursuit of knowledge and nature. The frog has the last laugh ~ he gets inside Momma's blouse (WOW) and the chided child is in hysterics ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 17:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AKA ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem. Nice struture with lots of internal rhyme and rhythm as befits a poem whose main character is a FROG ! Frogs are one of God's great jokes in Nature (along with OWLS) to convince us he has a sense of humour ~ after all he created Man & Woman ! The content of this poem (as Rodriguez has pointed out) is not to restrict Children in their pursuit of knowledge and nature. The frog has the last laugh ~ he gets inside Momma's blouse (WOW) and the chided child is in hysterics ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
August 20th, 2016 17:00
A kind intension
rrodriguez said:
This is a beautiful poem with a moral message about letting children explore and learn as they play about. Nicely done!
August 20th, 2016 16:32
rrodriguez said:
This is a beautiful poem with a moral message about letting children explore and learn as they play about. Nicely done!
August 20th, 2016 16:32
