Comments received on poems by Adamwilliam
Ruined
Mads said:
I have done the same exact thing and I really wish I didn't. great poem!
August 29th, 2016 17:13
Mads said:
I have done the same exact thing and I really wish I didn't. great poem!
August 29th, 2016 17:13
Ruined
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADAM ~ Thanks for a very passionate first poem dripping with angst. We've all done it Adam so we can empathise. We always hurt the one we love with a hasty word we can't recall ! The structure of your poem is excellent (despite the sad content !) it is replete with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
August 29th, 2016 17:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADAM ~ Thanks for a very passionate first poem dripping with angst. We've all done it Adam so we can empathise. We always hurt the one we love with a hasty word we can't recall ! The structure of your poem is excellent (despite the sad content !) it is replete with rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ BRIAN
August 29th, 2016 17:04
