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LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Wow..I'm in awe over how brilliant what I just read was..you are an amaxing writer.


g writer..

September 3rd, 2016 01:10

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Tony36 said:

Very well written poem love it

September 2nd, 2016 12:54

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JANE ~ Thanks for a very enigmatic first poem. The structure (quatrains) and rhythm are excellent and it is replete with rhyme. The subject is intriguing ! Our bodies do get invaded by Evil Spirits which we try to exorcise and Good Spirits (like the Holy Spirit) which we seek to cultivate ! As a mere man it also occurred to me that the poem could be about BEING PREGNANT ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

September 2nd, 2016 10:07