Comments received on poems by kasap89
The Melted Clock
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Enjoyed the play on words and the blending of nightmares and daydreams. U write nicely in freeverse.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too.
November 17th, 2016 01:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Enjoyed the play on words and the blending of nightmares and daydreams. U write nicely in freeverse.
U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too.
November 17th, 2016 01:55
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KASA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the modern "free verse" structure which gives it dynamism and flow ! All our yesterdays are replete with misfortunes but (while we live) we all have HOPE ! Your poem suggests that those who should be supportive not only gloat at our misfortunes but also "clot" our inspirations ? Perhaps this is always so ? I'm only 33 not yet old enough to be a Master or Architect and certainly not a GOD ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem PENELOPE ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2016 10:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KASA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the modern "free verse" structure which gives it dynamism and flow ! All our yesterdays are replete with misfortunes but (while we live) we all have HOPE ! Your poem suggests that those who should be supportive not only gloat at our misfortunes but also "clot" our inspirations ? Perhaps this is always so ? I'm only 33 not yet old enough to be a Master or Architect and certainly not a GOD ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Yours BRIAN Please check my latest poem PENELOPE ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2016 10:04
