Comments received on poems by SoFull ofClarity

The Longevity in Seconds

WELCOME SFOC ~ Thanks for your opening poem (more please) we don't get many SECS poems on here so it was a nice change ~ too many poems are sad. Loved the structure ~ continuous "free verse" but plenty of rhythm which complemented the subject. 60 secs in a minute would be OK for a rabbit but too much for me ~ even though I'm in my prime (33) ! Love all the innuendos ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my latest poem ~ PENELOPE ~ _ also have fusion poem (you have to click developing) on COLOR. Yours BRIAN

September 5th, 2016 18:49