my regret
Cheeky Missy said:

Excellent!!!!! The end-ryming is pleasant and it flows fairly well rythmically, while beautifully expressing the heart's bittersweet reflections and impossible regrets. Ah, you make me wish with you for what might have been. You told the story so sweetly and touchingly. And while it concludes hopelessly, the heart still wonders impossibly whether being on the world-wide web, the eyes it is for, might not just accidentally stumble across it and change it from regret, but that's a wild dream.

January 23rd, 2011 17:46