Comments received on poems by zack16
Voices
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZACK ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem (free verse). We all experience these feelings some days ~ Voices in our Heads ~ Treading water ~ Flitting thoughts (like Hos !) ~ too too much competition for verything ~ Too much faighting ~ what happened to ~ HAVE A GOOD NIGHT ! Thanks BRIAN ~ Please check my poem DICTIONARIES ~ Thanks B
September 10th, 2016 09:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZACK ~ Thanks for a very powerful first poem (free verse). We all experience these feelings some days ~ Voices in our Heads ~ Treading water ~ Flitting thoughts (like Hos !) ~ too too much competition for verything ~ Too much faighting ~ what happened to ~ HAVE A GOOD NIGHT ! Thanks BRIAN ~ Please check my poem DICTIONARIES ~ Thanks B
September 10th, 2016 09:31