Comments received on poems by Rosie904
Fall
Augustus said:
Tribute to the beauty and destructive powers of Mother Nature.
October 4th, 2016 11:21
Augustus said:
Tribute to the beauty and destructive powers of Mother Nature.
October 4th, 2016 11:21
Unheard Cries of the Ill
Adara said:
Wow -- an incredibly powerful and moving poem! It brought tears to my eyes. I'm so sorry for your loss..I have dealt with loss as well, but not in the same way, nor have I had the same emotions. Xx
October 1st, 2016 10:52
Adara said:
Wow -- an incredibly powerful and moving poem! It brought tears to my eyes. I'm so sorry for your loss..I have dealt with loss as well, but not in the same way, nor have I had the same emotions. Xx
October 1st, 2016 10:52
Dont Remember Myself
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ROSIE ~ Thanks fro a well written poem with a saluatary message. I'm 20 years older than you but well meaning people try to change me (I'm stll single !). The BIBLE says "Dont let your friends or the Worlds Systems squeeze you into their MOLD" God made you a FREE SPIRIT ~ stay young and silly as long as you can ! Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ROSIE ~ Thanks fro a well written poem with a saluatary message. I'm 20 years older than you but well meaning people try to change me (I'm stll single !). The BIBLE says "Dont let your friends or the Worlds Systems squeeze you into their MOLD" God made you a FREE SPIRIT ~ stay young and silly as long as you can ! Yours BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:18
Unheard Cries of the Ill
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HONEY ~ Thank you for a very personal first poem. I find it very sad but also helpful because I have faced painful death of loved ones (I'm 33) and will again. I trust you found writinf it cathartic ~ I found it helpful. Terminal illnes and its "symptoms" is hard to deal with and you are frank about this. This is your beloved Father and he is acting differntly. You held your daddy's hand but he seemed not to know you. I've read it again and now I'm crying ~ you were very brave and doubly brave for sharing sharing. I'm praying for you ~ BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HONEY ~ Thank you for a very personal first poem. I find it very sad but also helpful because I have faced painful death of loved ones (I'm 33) and will again. I trust you found writinf it cathartic ~ I found it helpful. Terminal illnes and its "symptoms" is hard to deal with and you are frank about this. This is your beloved Father and he is acting differntly. You held your daddy's hand but he seemed not to know you. I've read it again and now I'm crying ~ you were very brave and doubly brave for sharing sharing. I'm praying for you ~ BRIAN
October 1st, 2016 06:09
Unheard Cries of the Ill
Jeff said:
Death is an unfortunate reality we all must face...some deal with it in strength and faith...while other cant seem to accept the inevitable....never realizing the pain and heartache the family must endure even after said death. This is an excellent poem...very well done.
October 1st, 2016 05:44
Jeff said:
Death is an unfortunate reality we all must face...some deal with it in strength and faith...while other cant seem to accept the inevitable....never realizing the pain and heartache the family must endure even after said death. This is an excellent poem...very well done.
October 1st, 2016 05:44
Dont Remember Myself
Adara said:
Love it Rosie! Excellent rhythm and I didn't want to stop reading it! You're very talented -- keep up the good work 😊 and don't give into peer pressure just to make someone else happy..you are so right! The poem has a great message to it.
September 30th, 2016 23:03
Adara said:
Love it Rosie! Excellent rhythm and I didn't want to stop reading it! You're very talented -- keep up the good work 😊 and don't give into peer pressure just to make someone else happy..you are so right! The poem has a great message to it.
September 30th, 2016 23:03
