Comments received on poems by pastaclouds



Selfish Touch
SilentLaugh said:

This is great. The rythim of the whole poem flows awsomely. Continue to do what your doing! ;D

October 18th, 2016 12:51

Selfish Touch
JohnThomas said:

Very nice pastaclouds. The yearning and desire. The lust for connection. Well done. 😎

October 17th, 2016 15:53

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Tony36 said:

Great write

October 15th, 2016 12:42

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks PC ~ When love is sweet ~ its very sweet ! For me the love of a LADY tastes and scents like Honey ~ Molasses ~ Maple Syrup so sweet so sugary ! Cookies ~ Ice cream ~ Florida sun ~ I\'m in love ~ I;m in Paradise ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN

October 15th, 2016 10:51

Please Knock Next Time
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

FOOLS PUSH IN ~ ANGELS (& Gentlemen) ALWAYS KNOCK ~ WELCOME PC ~ Thanks for sharing. Like you I am always very careful to whom I give a KEY ~ But some gain entrance in spite of that. Love your description of uninvited attention ! AND YOU LEFT ME TO BROIL ~ A ROD FORCED THROUGH MY BODY AND TWISTED ME ON A STICK ! A well penned poem ~ surrealist and shocking. Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN

October 15th, 2016 02:11