My Words
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME AW ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem in five neat stanzas. Love the content it carries the ring of truth. Stanzas 1 & 2 talk of the pretty portic things poets love to encapsulate in verse ~ BUT (as you say ) We don\'t feel it when we speak (recite) it ~ don\'t cry when we write it ! BUT ~ what would you write ~ from your heart ? More please ~ thank you ~ BRIAN

October 17th, 2016 12:47