Comments received on poems by Jyquan
The Grail Land
Augustus said:
Actually says quite a bit. Thanks for sharing.
October 25th, 2016 18:55
Augustus said:
Actually says quite a bit. Thanks for sharing.
October 25th, 2016 18:55
The Slaves Cave
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME QUAN ~ Thanks for sharing you first poem ~ short but very thought provoking ! There is no more humiliating task than having to dig your own grave ~ then being shot and falling in it ~ horrible. Thanks BRIAN. lease check my poems ~ Thanks B
October 24th, 2016 17:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME QUAN ~ Thanks for sharing you first poem ~ short but very thought provoking ! There is no more humiliating task than having to dig your own grave ~ then being shot and falling in it ~ horrible. Thanks BRIAN. lease check my poems ~ Thanks B
October 24th, 2016 17:56
The Slaves Cave
Augustus said:
We work hard all our lives for what? A hole in the ground? Got to be a better way. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 17:36
Augustus said:
We work hard all our lives for what? A hole in the ground? Got to be a better way. Nicely done.
October 24th, 2016 17:36
