Comments received on poems by Zwitterion



When She Left.
Garry said:

The storm after the calm perhaps.

March 30th, 2017 06:27

I Miss You As....
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

January 30th, 2017 15:45

I Want Someone.
WriteBeLight said:

We are here for you! Great poem!

January 10th, 2017 14:14

I Want Someone.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 10th, 2017 09:03

Come Back Home.
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed

January 4th, 2017 10:29

Come Back Home.
willyweed said:

This is very good son! ww

January 4th, 2017 10:15

Come Back Home.
WriteBeLight said:

Sad and true and an excellent job.

January 4th, 2017 06:13

You Are The Wait.
Zwitterion said:



January 3rd, 2017 15:49

You Are The Wait.
JerryBolton said:

Kickass write, Zwitterion. Brutal, in your face . . . er . . . Kickass write!

January 3rd, 2017 10:58

You Are The Wait.
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

January 3rd, 2017 10:14

Stop the Night.
Augustus said:

Wow. Food for thought. I\'ve been on dates that I did not want the dawn to interrupt. Thanks for a great read.

December 31st, 2016 00:13

Stop the Night.
willyweed said:

don\'t ya hate when you wake from a dream. I do. short&sweet&good. ww

December 30th, 2016 14:16

We\'ll Give To It The Name Of Love.
WriteBeLight said:

Lovely metaphors!

December 24th, 2016 10:50

Grains of Sand.
willyweed said:

in the end we are one. nice poem. ww

December 22nd, 2016 10:52

Grains of Sand.
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very nice...I can relate for sure..it\'s personal to u I know, but still I really felt you here....beautiful work ...thx for sharing

December 22nd, 2016 07:08

Grains of Sand.
WriteBeLight said:

Beautiful poem.

December 22nd, 2016 04:56

Melting.
Augustus said:

Perhaps the beginning and end of a relationship. Nicely done.

December 16th, 2016 14:55

Melting.
Daniel said:

A great piece on how pain over time will break us, great poem!

December 16th, 2016 10:26

Melting.
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 16th, 2016 08:24

Premonition.
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 5th, 2016 14:18

Softness.
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2016 11:03

Softness.
Augustus said:

Oh, that moment when your lover whispers in your ear and your knees weaken. Lovely poem.

November 9th, 2016 10:15

Tired Waves.
Christina8 said:

Beautiful imagery! I never thought of the waves like this. Great job!

November 1st, 2016 19:07

Tired Waves.
Christina K said:

I love the imagery in this! Great work!

November 1st, 2016 15:43

I Did Not Know.
Christina8 said:

Welcome to the site. Awesome first poem.

October 31st, 2016 20:30

I Did Not Know.
scorchedwings said:

Really great!

October 31st, 2016 19:42

I Did Not Know.
paddy68 said:

rather sweet

October 31st, 2016 18:33

I Did Not Know.
Augustus said:

Welcome. Great first poem.

October 31st, 2016 11:56

I Did Not Know.
Tony36 said:

Awesome Awesome write, love it

October 31st, 2016 07:45