Comments received on poems by Efthimios William Cornelius



my first awakening
burning-embers said:

If u want to put it to music i have a banjo you could borrow. Interesting use of grammar


July 16th, 2017 16:47

come on to the morning
Augustus said:

Dreams help to resolve conflicts. Dream on brave soul. Kudos.

May 29th, 2017 19:40

come on to the morning
Confused kid said:

Pretty nice, I known the feeling of wanting to see someone every morning but they aren\'t there anymore

May 29th, 2017 09:24

only someday we only know.
Efthimios William Cornelius said:

thank you all for the comments


May 28th, 2017 14:42

only someday we only know.
Augustus said:

\"I can feel the echo\'s breeze\"- terrific.

May 28th, 2017 14:38

only someday we only know.
Augustus said:

\"I can feel the echo\'s breeze\"- terrific.

May 28th, 2017 14:38

only someday we only know.
IAmBeu said:

Very beautiful

May 28th, 2017 08:00

what beautiful is.
Augustus said:

Men have written about beauty for ages, trying to find it and describe. It appears you have found it for yourself and describe it well. Hugs.

May 27th, 2017 10:40

In my arms tonight
Laydii said:

Splendid :\'D

February 19th, 2017 10:17

Miles from my eyes
Cheeky Missy said:

Aw, this is prettily heart-wrenching with an excellent bit of a refrain. Yazza, I\'ll second Robert and if you do add a melody, me would love to hear it sung. Thanks for sharing. A bittersweet angle on this Valentine\'s Eve and spot-on.

February 13th, 2017 21:47

Lost in a dream
Efthimios William Cornelius said:

Thank you and yes there is


February 12th, 2017 11:50

Only the good we set free
Efthimios William Cornelius said:

wow thank you so much

February 5th, 2017 16:20

Little sparrow sing
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 4th, 2017 08:57

Motionless
Tony36 said:

Sad yet beautiful write

February 2nd, 2017 17:09

I wanna grow old with you
Efthimios William Cornelius said:

Thank you all for the nice comments


January 23rd, 2017 19:32

I wanna grow old with you
Tony36 said:

Beautifully written excellent write

January 23rd, 2017 19:30

I wanna grow old with you
Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem! Who doesn\'t want someone they can grow old with? Great job!--Christina

January 23rd, 2017 18:18

No greater
Fay Slimm. said:

A well-crafted comforting letter of love - - a heart-touching read.


January 21st, 2017 17:45

I’m so sorry my dear
Efthimios William Cornelius said:

your welcome

January 19th, 2017 13:00

I’m so sorry my dear
Francesco said:

A sad, yet beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing.

January 19th, 2017 10:02

Merry go round
Augustus said:

That your prayers be answered.
Nicely done.

January 4th, 2017 22:44

Merry go round
Augustus said:

That your prayers be answered.
Nicely done.

January 4th, 2017 22:44

Merry go round
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2017 15:41

More of you
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 28th, 2016 14:35

Its like deja vu.
Shee said:

Exactly mi situation... Love it great writtens...

December 18th, 2016 21:00

Its like deja vu.
rebecca0830 said:

I love this and can relate!

December 18th, 2016 20:08

Its like deja vu.
Augustus said:

Nicely done.

December 18th, 2016 16:56

Deliverance
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 25th, 2016 08:32

The Ghost inside me 1.0
SabreLi said:

I really enjoy writing lyrics myself and am impressed by your style. I love the theme, as I do anything dark and somewhat ghostly. I look forward to reading more of your work :) xx

November 24th, 2016 15:59

The Ghost inside me 1.0
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 24th, 2016 09:36

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