Comments received on poems by maryann kousarieh



The chair
Augustus said:

Sad well written piece.

November 10th, 2016 19:27

The chair
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 10th, 2016 08:59

The chair
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhhh MARYANN ~ another sad poem ~ You really need someone to love and cherish you ! Thinking of your 24/7 BRIAN

November 10th, 2016 06:20

Shall I
Augustus said:

I like the bars on the face line. Hugs.

November 9th, 2016 22:55

Shall I
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2016 17:45

Shall I
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MARYANN (lovely name) surely it can\'t really be that bad. The structure of your poem is elegant pulsating with rhyme and rhythm ! BUT the content is rock bottom ! The line at the end is very haunting and terminal I AM EMPTY JUST BONE AND BLOOD SITTING ON A CHAIR ~ WITH EMPTY EYES THAT DOES NOTHING BUT STARE ! If it is personal ~ I hope you found sharing the poem cathartic ! You will find MPS is a very empathetic site ! Yours BRIAN

November 9th, 2016 16:08