Comments received on poems by fauxsabotage
Chasing The Dragon
2781 said:
Out of the frying pan, into the fire. Just took me low, when I needed higher.
March 3rd, 2023 22:21
2781 said:
Out of the frying pan, into the fire. Just took me low, when I needed higher.
March 3rd, 2023 22:21
[Everlasting Hypnotism]
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FS ~ Thanks you fora very challenging first poem ! It happens we do allow ourselves to be hynotised by another person ~ Especially MEN by LADIES ~ they are so hypnotic. Love the advice in the last line ~ if we are mesmerised by someone ! YOU\'VE GOT TO WAKE UP ! Love the structure of the poem ~ rhyming couplets and full of mesmerising rhythm ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ YOURS BRIAN.(UK)
November 19th, 2016 05:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FS ~ Thanks you fora very challenging first poem ! It happens we do allow ourselves to be hynotised by another person ~ Especially MEN by LADIES ~ they are so hypnotic. Love the advice in the last line ~ if we are mesmerised by someone ! YOU\'VE GOT TO WAKE UP ! Love the structure of the poem ~ rhyming couplets and full of mesmerising rhythm ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my poems ~ YOURS BRIAN.(UK)
November 19th, 2016 05:12
[Everlasting Hypnotism]
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great way to enter this site , with a very well written piece of work....look forward to more
November 18th, 2016 23:48
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Great way to enter this site , with a very well written piece of work....look forward to more
November 18th, 2016 23:48
[Everlasting Hypnotism]
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Awesome first poem. Thanks for sharing!
November 18th, 2016 22:06
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Awesome first poem. Thanks for sharing!
November 18th, 2016 22:06
[Everlasting Hypnotism]
Elegant_Style said:
:) :) this is an awesome first poem.... happy writing
November 18th, 2016 19:19
Elegant_Style said:
:) :) this is an awesome first poem.... happy writing
November 18th, 2016 19:19
