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The Seasons of the Sun
Tony36 said:

Welcome to MPS. Awesome write

November 23rd, 2016 17:41

The Seasons of the Sun

WELCOME MARI ~ Thank for a Poem of the highest quality and erudition in both structure and subject ! GOD as you say is both Transcendent and Immanent in the Universe ~ \"I do know that GOD is watching over us .............. and everything\" Everything Past ~ Preseny ~ Future is under His control. We do ry to ascend \"The Hill of the Lord\" to enhance our Spiritual understanding ~ but Satan also has power to deflect us from the Truth. The APOCALYPSE is coming but we must be prepared. This is a very philosophical and powerful poem. I can\'t attempt to Analyse it ~ I will just absorb its truths and enjoy it. Thanks for caring ~ Please check my Poetry ~ Yours BRIAN

November 23rd, 2016 15:32

The Seasons of the Sun
Yorke said:

I like this very much indeed. Very enjoyable reading.

November 23rd, 2016 15:23