Comments received on poems by UncleShrew



Writing Before I Dream
sylviasearcher said:

Oh the land of fancy!
Fly me there on your wings of poesy! 💜

August 7th, 2018 03:32

Cadavers
onepauly said:

and death shall have no dominion.

July 9th, 2017 01:56

A Meeting
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 17th, 2017 19:18

The End of the Tunnel
Discreation said:

Great poem. At the end, that\'s all you can do. Even when nothing matters, the fact that you tried does. Again, great poem.

March 30th, 2017 22:47

Signs
elchupacabra said:

Thanks for sharing!

January 5th, 2017 22:54

Signs
Deebs said:

That was incredible bravo thanks for sharing

January 5th, 2017 22:03

This Room Tonight
WriteBeLight said:

I have no negatives, just positives. Very good!

November 28th, 2016 08:51

This Room Tonight
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Nice work...You captured a lot for just laying there in a dark room...so, if you can do that in a dark room, I can imagine a very vivid imagery in your future work...don\'t stop writing....no matter what criticism you may get, you have it in you to be an awesome poet...this site is perfect for you to get your feet wet if that is, indeed, what you are doing....best wishes


November 28th, 2016 04:32

Voyage
Simple-Man87 said:

I loved it. I\'m currently writing a short story using ship and captain as metaphor. You\'re very talented. I\'d love to hear the meaning sometime.

November 25th, 2016 23:49

Voyage
LeoDB said:

Way to start out! Touching and relatable, I really enjoyed it. Good work!

November 25th, 2016 21:41