Comments received on poems by William Siemering
At the beginning of her last month
Tony36 said:
Welcome to MPS. Great write
November 28th, 2016 15:57
Tony36 said:
Welcome to MPS. Great write
November 28th, 2016 15:57
At the beginning of her last month
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLIAM ~ Thanks you for a very challenging first poem. It happens but in life (and love) it\'s very hard to bear ! I\'ve been to TIJUANA (I even had a meal) so i can visulise it. I rust you found sharing the poem CATHARTIC. Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
November 28th, 2016 15:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLIAM ~ Thanks you for a very challenging first poem. It happens but in life (and love) it\'s very hard to bear ! I\'ve been to TIJUANA (I even had a meal) so i can visulise it. I rust you found sharing the poem CATHARTIC. Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
November 28th, 2016 15:14
At the beginning of her last month
Christina8 said:
Welcome to Mps. Great first poem. So sad. I love the last line, \"giving a flash of her once great beauty\". Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
November 28th, 2016 14:45
Christina8 said:
Welcome to Mps. Great first poem. So sad. I love the last line, \"giving a flash of her once great beauty\". Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.
November 28th, 2016 14:45
At the beginning of her last month
WriteBeLight said:
I like the effen jackal line. Guy deserved it and worse. Sad but well written.
November 28th, 2016 12:46
WriteBeLight said:
I like the effen jackal line. Guy deserved it and worse. Sad but well written.
November 28th, 2016 12:46