Comments received on poems by William Siemering



At the beginning of her last month
Tony36 said:

Welcome to MPS. Great write

November 28th, 2016 15:57

At the beginning of her last month
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME WILLIAM ~ Thanks you for a very challenging first poem. It happens but in life (and love) it\'s very hard to bear ! I\'ve been to TIJUANA (I even had a meal) so i can visulise it. I rust you found sharing the poem CATHARTIC. Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

November 28th, 2016 15:14

At the beginning of her last month
Christina8 said:

Welcome to Mps. Great first poem. So sad. I love the last line, \"giving a flash of her once great beauty\". Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

November 28th, 2016 14:45

At the beginning of her last month
WriteBeLight said:

I like the effen jackal line. Guy deserved it and worse. Sad but well written.

November 28th, 2016 12:46