Comments received on poems by markctaylor96
Window Panes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARK ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem ~ but (as you say) ~ with a sad subject. Life (even in a Democracy) like the UK get harder day by day. Brexist ~ lower wages ~ longer hours and people too busy to be nice and no time to welcome new members (to MPS) or comment on their poems (I\'m in my lunch hour !). We all find something for release ~ drugs ~ drink ~ self harm etc I am fortunate that I have GF to love and who loves me ~ and Faith in God to keep me focused. In the end alcohol destroys ~ so you last line gives me some consolation ! \"He stands ~ out of his chair ~ once more !\". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
December 13th, 2016 07:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARK ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem ~ but (as you say) ~ with a sad subject. Life (even in a Democracy) like the UK get harder day by day. Brexist ~ lower wages ~ longer hours and people too busy to be nice and no time to welcome new members (to MPS) or comment on their poems (I\'m in my lunch hour !). We all find something for release ~ drugs ~ drink ~ self harm etc I am fortunate that I have GF to love and who loves me ~ and Faith in God to keep me focused. In the end alcohol destroys ~ so you last line gives me some consolation ! \"He stands ~ out of his chair ~ once more !\". Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
December 13th, 2016 07:11
