Comments received on poems by Thumping Heart
The Seamlessness of True Life
Quemis said:
All of your work goes way over my head.
I hope that saying so is a compliment.
I understand that your trying to say something about the nature of time, divinity and determinism in a few of your works, but, despite my best efforts, I am not well versed enough to understand some of your metaphors and overall meaning.
I have noticed that all of your works have this same formula.
Are they all some kind of Tai Chi thing?
My lack of understanding almost makes your works seem lovecraftian and cultish to me, which while I think is really cool, I am pretty sure you were not trying to convey.
I would like to say however, that not every piece has to be a means to an end. I commend you on your structure and word choice. It is vast and interesting and surprising.
Keep up the good work, maybe one day I will get it. When I learn more.
Good job!
January 11th, 2017 13:00
Quemis said:
All of your work goes way over my head.
I hope that saying so is a compliment.
I understand that your trying to say something about the nature of time, divinity and determinism in a few of your works, but, despite my best efforts, I am not well versed enough to understand some of your metaphors and overall meaning.
I have noticed that all of your works have this same formula.
Are they all some kind of Tai Chi thing?
My lack of understanding almost makes your works seem lovecraftian and cultish to me, which while I think is really cool, I am pretty sure you were not trying to convey.
I would like to say however, that not every piece has to be a means to an end. I commend you on your structure and word choice. It is vast and interesting and surprising.
Keep up the good work, maybe one day I will get it. When I learn more.
Good job!
January 11th, 2017 13:00
