Comments received on poems by WillowTree1414
One More Glance
Lorna said:
Good imagery - seeing your reflection in her........
February 21st, 2018 04:32
Lorna said:
Good imagery - seeing your reflection in her........
February 21st, 2018 04:32
Shattered
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem,
Believe me when
I say this, being
Young can bloody
Suck.. my childhood
Was about as worst
As you can get.
Evil step father
Being racially abused
Every day at school,
Literally no where to
Go and find peace.
How I got through
It all was I took the
Negatives as fuel.
Became someone
Non of them thought
I could....but I would
Bet my life there\'s people
Worst off than i was.
It may not seem it now
But it can get better
As you grow...only you can
Do it.....sorry for preaching..
Really good poem!!!!!
December 20th, 2016 18:39
P.H.Rose said:
Great poem,
Believe me when
I say this, being
Young can bloody
Suck.. my childhood
Was about as worst
As you can get.
Evil step father
Being racially abused
Every day at school,
Literally no where to
Go and find peace.
How I got through
It all was I took the
Negatives as fuel.
Became someone
Non of them thought
I could....but I would
Bet my life there\'s people
Worst off than i was.
It may not seem it now
But it can get better
As you grow...only you can
Do it.....sorry for preaching..
Really good poem!!!!!
December 20th, 2016 18:39
Shattered
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLOW ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ First let me say it has great structure ~ and (although so so tragic) an important subject ~ about a broken Spirit. If I had a KID who got a C in Science I would buy them a GIFT and tell all he NEIGHBOURS ! Did you MOM ever do Science and if so i bet she got a D ! Moms can be so so cruel when it comes to GRADES. What does she expect you got her GENES ! And TEACHERS are even worse ~ what do they teach them at Teacher College to TORTURE the Kids and break their Spirits. My PARENTS encouraged me ~ even when i got a D which i often did. Teachers should be ENCOURAGERS ~ not SPIRIT BREAKERS ~ You tell them that next time they put you down ! Thanks for sahring ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 20th, 2016 17:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME WILLOW ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ~ First let me say it has great structure ~ and (although so so tragic) an important subject ~ about a broken Spirit. If I had a KID who got a C in Science I would buy them a GIFT and tell all he NEIGHBOURS ! Did you MOM ever do Science and if so i bet she got a D ! Moms can be so so cruel when it comes to GRADES. What does she expect you got her GENES ! And TEACHERS are even worse ~ what do they teach them at Teacher College to TORTURE the Kids and break their Spirits. My PARENTS encouraged me ~ even when i got a D which i often did. Teachers should be ENCOURAGERS ~ not SPIRIT BREAKERS ~ You tell them that next time they put you down ! Thanks for sahring ~ BRIAN. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
December 20th, 2016 17:57
Shattered
SilentLaugh said:
I know how you feel. Im always blamed for my parents problems! I almost moved to my grandmothers house. But I worked mine and my parents problems but showing how I felt. I talked to my family and formulated a solution, now we are stronger that ever. how old are you. If you are 16 you may be able to leave if you want to. Hope you fell better! :P
December 20th, 2016 12:50
SilentLaugh said:
I know how you feel. Im always blamed for my parents problems! I almost moved to my grandmothers house. But I worked mine and my parents problems but showing how I felt. I talked to my family and formulated a solution, now we are stronger that ever. how old are you. If you are 16 you may be able to leave if you want to. Hope you fell better! :P
December 20th, 2016 12:50
