Comments received on poems by Reyon18
Unloved
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Why o why
To myself, I ask am I so unlovable?
Am I that horrible of a person?
You want each thought to be a new sentence do that the reader knows when to stop and continue on...it takes a minute to learn your own style of writing...I always freehand my originals then piece them together later..you dr not want to stop yourself when you write..let it flow and never hold back...that\'s my advice...read my manuscript ..it may give you some inspiration or whatever..lol. dont give up
December 21st, 2016 06:20
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Why o why
To myself, I ask am I so unlovable?
Am I that horrible of a person?
You want each thought to be a new sentence do that the reader knows when to stop and continue on...it takes a minute to learn your own style of writing...I always freehand my originals then piece them together later..you dr not want to stop yourself when you write..let it flow and never hold back...that\'s my advice...read my manuscript ..it may give you some inspiration or whatever..lol. dont give up
December 21st, 2016 06:20
Unloved
Reyon18 said:
O I see but I don\'t really know what a stanza is or how my poetry is supposed to flow sorry if I am bn slow this horse is a bit harder to saddle again lol
December 21st, 2016 01:23
Reyon18 said:
O I see but I don\'t really know what a stanza is or how my poetry is supposed to flow sorry if I am bn slow this horse is a bit harder to saddle again lol
December 21st, 2016 01:23
Unloved
Reyon18 said:
Please feel free to give me advice or critique its been awhile since ive written
December 20th, 2016 22:03
Reyon18 said:
Please feel free to give me advice or critique its been awhile since ive written
December 20th, 2016 22:03
