Comments received on poems by beeutiful519
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willyweed said:
I really like your story/poem. albeit a very sad tale.
I wanted to thank you for saving my poem as a favorite.
And also me as a fav poet. I really appreciate it. Welcome to MPS
and I hope to read more from you. I wish you a Merry Christmas and
a happy new year. peace ww
December 24th, 2016 09:26
willyweed said:
I really like your story/poem. albeit a very sad tale.
I wanted to thank you for saving my poem as a favorite.
And also me as a fav poet. I really appreciate it. Welcome to MPS
and I hope to read more from you. I wish you a Merry Christmas and
a happy new year. peace ww
December 24th, 2016 09:26
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEEUTIFUL ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! Beautifully structured ~ perfect rhyming couplets (my favorite) and pulsating with rhythm ~ BUT ~ with such a sad sad subject. In the UK many Young Girls (and Boys) suffer physical & mental abuse (often in the home) and cut themselves to ease the pain ~ AND ~ sometimes take the only way out when it gets unbearable. This poem makes us all think about our Neighbours and especially about Young People (M & F) who may be suffering abuse. Thank for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN
December 24th, 2016 05:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BEEUTIFUL ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! Beautifully structured ~ perfect rhyming couplets (my favorite) and pulsating with rhythm ~ BUT ~ with such a sad sad subject. In the UK many Young Girls (and Boys) suffer physical & mental abuse (often in the home) and cut themselves to ease the pain ~ AND ~ sometimes take the only way out when it gets unbearable. This poem makes us all think about our Neighbours and especially about Young People (M & F) who may be suffering abuse. Thank for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN
December 24th, 2016 05:22
