Unexpected my dear
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BREBRE ~ Thank you for a very Beautiful & Passionate first poem ~ UNEXPECTED MY DEAR ~ RESULTS OF THE WAY IT IS ! The Air & Grass ~ The Fire & Ice ~ forces of nature that engender change and then in the last two stanzas (verses) focussing all that on love ~ This is classic poetry ! AND ~ Repetition of your title and key phrase UMR ~ ROTWI! ~ Perfection. I found so much in this pom to like ~ more please. Thank you for sharing ~ BRIAN ~ UK

December 26th, 2016 03:34