Comments received on poems by Projectbeing



One life
The Invisible said:

Wow, I love the message it gives out. Or at least how I interpret the poem but still overall a good poem.

June 12th, 2017 19:45

One life
elchupacabra said:

Beautiful message, love the flow too

April 16th, 2017 18:48

There is only God
Projectbeing said:

Thanks for commenting, just trying to tap into whats real and eternal

January 20th, 2017 20:59

There is only God
Pintu Mahakul said:

God is real and truth. Rest of the things which we see here are nothing but illusion. We all should be conscious about only God. Very nice and thoughtful poem is shared.

January 20th, 2017 20:35

The Storm\\\\\\\'s Eye
Projectbeing said:

Thanks for the comment augusta, I was thinking of a well defined eye

January 8th, 2017 01:09

The Storm\\\\\\\'s Eye
Augustus said:

The eye of a storm may be well or ill defined surrounded by destruction. I don\'t know where I was going with this thought other than you got me thinking.

January 7th, 2017 22:02

The Storm\\\\\\\'s Eye
Tony36 said:

Awesomely written and expressed Great write

January 7th, 2017 17:01

The Storm\\\\\\\'s Eye
Projectbeing said:

Thanks again willy,

January 7th, 2017 16:03

The Storm\\\\\\\'s Eye
willyweed said:

Lovely Poem! That\'s what clever king said.

January 7th, 2017 15:41

Bird Free
Projectbeing said:

Thank you, just trying to capture that sense of freedom

January 7th, 2017 13:28

Bird Free
Francesco said:

Before I read your description I assumed this was a love poem. It works equally well either way, but knowing it is actually about caged birds gave it an extra edge of sweetness and tenderness.
Very nice!

January 6th, 2017 06:25

Bird Free
Projectbeing said:

Thank you, I\'m equally passionate about caged animals

January 3rd, 2017 00:30

Bird Free
Deebs said:

Great idea a compassionate feeling for those trapped I really enjoyed thanks for sharing.

January 3rd, 2017 00:29

Bird Free
Augustus said:

Welcome. I always feel sad for the animals in cages. Especially so when they are recently captured and fight with all their might. I like the sanity taking flight line.

January 3rd, 2017 00:25

Bird Free
Tony36 said:

Living on a farm I always enjoy watching birds in the sky. Great write

December 31st, 2016 21:13

Bird Free
Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! Yes I too love seeing a bird out in flight rather than in a cage. Great first poem! Happy New Year!--Christina

December 31st, 2016 15:24

Bird Free
Projectbeing said:

Thank you, happy new year to you too

December 31st, 2016 13:55

Bird Free
willyweed said:

lovely sentiment in this well crafted poem. happy new year ww

December 31st, 2016 13:53