Comments received on poems by AmayahShalan
Hurt
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Writing is the greatest and most perfect liberator. Expressive writing, at least momentarily, will free you, it will elevate you above that which seeks to chain you to the ground. I know the hurt maybe not your hurt but the hurt I know. \"The Beat Goes On\" was my, is my cure. I know you know the feeling the \"Publish\" button produces; the serotonin rush. Keep writing, keep publishing -
April 30th, 2017 17:32
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Writing is the greatest and most perfect liberator. Expressive writing, at least momentarily, will free you, it will elevate you above that which seeks to chain you to the ground. I know the hurt maybe not your hurt but the hurt I know. \"The Beat Goes On\" was my, is my cure. I know you know the feeling the \"Publish\" button produces; the serotonin rush. Keep writing, keep publishing -
April 30th, 2017 17:32
Hurt
Phoenix8523 said:
You describe it well. Those who don\'t get it, won\'t til they\'re in it. To hurt so much inside that your outside can feel it. -- phoenix
January 8th, 2017 11:38
Phoenix8523 said:
You describe it well. Those who don\'t get it, won\'t til they\'re in it. To hurt so much inside that your outside can feel it. -- phoenix
January 8th, 2017 11:38
Hurt
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AMAYAH (Beautiful Name) ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ Elegantly penned but with a painful message ~ PAIN. A HURT which prevents you getting on \"normally\" with your Life and Love. Your name means \"Close to God\" and in my case (see my latest poem) my relationship with GOD eases the PAIN and lessens the HURT ! Thanking of you ~ praying for you. Your last line is very emphatic and could be the first step on your recovery. Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 8th, 2017 04:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AMAYAH (Beautiful Name) ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ Elegantly penned but with a painful message ~ PAIN. A HURT which prevents you getting on \"normally\" with your Life and Love. Your name means \"Close to God\" and in my case (see my latest poem) my relationship with GOD eases the PAIN and lessens the HURT ! Thanking of you ~ praying for you. Your last line is very emphatic and could be the first step on your recovery. Yours BRIAN (UK)
January 8th, 2017 04:55