Clouds
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SERENITY ~ Thanks for your first poem which is elegantly penned ~ Three perfect quatrians (with consistent abab cdcd etc rhyming) and a culminating doublet. The subject matter is divine and takes one by the hand and sweeps one through time and space as restless and free as the clouds ~ awesome poetry and one of the most mind expanding I have read on MPS in the last year. SO ~ I visited your BLOG it is a descriptive masterpiece of here there and every where an beautifully illustrated ! Alabama ~ Siberia (Lake Baikal) ~ Rome _ Venice ~ Moscow ~ Georgia ~ Seasons ~ Brodsky ~ Spirit & Soul etc etc ! I have been to Alabama (awesome people) ~ Rome ~ Venice and (to pay my homage to Mother Russia) St Petersburg ~ so I can empathise and see somethings through you eyes ! Back to the poem: It is frenetic (as become a Globetrotter) and your use of language is as elegant as your are ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Love in Poetry ~ BRIAN (UK)






January 10th, 2017 09:44