Comments received on poems by Quiet45
Suicide
Aislinn Wilson said:
Compelling, it does cause me to think even if I can\'t say I agree
January 18th, 2018 11:12
Aislinn Wilson said:
Compelling, it does cause me to think even if I can\'t say I agree
January 18th, 2018 11:12
Happiness
FineB said:
Thank you Quiet45 that was awesome and beautiful.
Happiness in a person is a sign of great beauty.
It\'s important to be happy. Not always easy to achieve at times Happiness.
Keep writing
FineB
January 16th, 2018 17:53
FineB said:
Thank you Quiet45 that was awesome and beautiful.
Happiness in a person is a sign of great beauty.
It\'s important to be happy. Not always easy to achieve at times Happiness.
Keep writing
FineB
January 16th, 2018 17:53
This Love
Corey said:
I enjoyed this. It\'s like a love\'s journey into maturity, becoming stronger and more sure of itself. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2017 02:27
Corey said:
I enjoyed this. It\'s like a love\'s journey into maturity, becoming stronger and more sure of itself. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2017 02:27
Suicide
berdnt_victoria said:
I have thought of suicide many.. many times.. I still think of it.. I\'m trying to get better but its hard to.. if it wasn\'t for my friends.. family.. boyfriend.. his family.. I wouldn\'t even be here anymore.. your right suicide isn\'t always bad.. people cause people to want to kill themselves.. but if you kill yourself.. you won\'t see the pain that you cause everyone around you.. especially the people who care about you..
January 16th, 2017 11:49
berdnt_victoria said:
I have thought of suicide many.. many times.. I still think of it.. I\'m trying to get better but its hard to.. if it wasn\'t for my friends.. family.. boyfriend.. his family.. I wouldn\'t even be here anymore.. your right suicide isn\'t always bad.. people cause people to want to kill themselves.. but if you kill yourself.. you won\'t see the pain that you cause everyone around you.. especially the people who care about you..
January 16th, 2017 11:49
Trust
Phoenix8523 said:
Nicely written! So hard to trust...not easily given out, from now on they must earn it. -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:32
Phoenix8523 said:
Nicely written! So hard to trust...not easily given out, from now on they must earn it. -- phoenix
January 14th, 2017 17:32
Unspoken Words
Phoenix8523 said:
Oh, the horrible things we tell ourselves. I enjoyed reading this poem based on such a sad fact. -- phoenix
January 11th, 2017 02:24
Phoenix8523 said:
Oh, the horrible things we tell ourselves. I enjoyed reading this poem based on such a sad fact. -- phoenix
January 11th, 2017 02:24
Suicide
neharocks said:
Please don\'t think its a good thing. I can\'t forget my brother. I can\'t forget him. Every single day I realize how much i loved him. Life is hard but its beautiful also. Once you finish it. Everything will finish. I still feel its not at all good thing. Please live every single day of your life. Trust me i lost my brother. It\'s really kills me every day. I still Searching for the answer why he committed suicide. Please don\'t think about anything like this. Don\'t stop you life. Please think about people who loves you. I really liked your poem skills and i can also feel emptiness in it. Please read my poem. Be fearless. Just forget all of your sorrow and write anything you love. I pray for you. May you live long. Trust me i have faced very worst time. But time always change. You will get your share of happiness and sorrow. Please don\'t think of leaving this world. Your poetic skill may famous you. Why don\'t you try writing poems professionally. If you kill someone its a crime similarly suicide is also a sin crime. Live your life fully.
January 10th, 2017 22:50
neharocks said:
Please don\'t think its a good thing. I can\'t forget my brother. I can\'t forget him. Every single day I realize how much i loved him. Life is hard but its beautiful also. Once you finish it. Everything will finish. I still feel its not at all good thing. Please live every single day of your life. Trust me i lost my brother. It\'s really kills me every day. I still Searching for the answer why he committed suicide. Please don\'t think about anything like this. Don\'t stop you life. Please think about people who loves you. I really liked your poem skills and i can also feel emptiness in it. Please read my poem. Be fearless. Just forget all of your sorrow and write anything you love. I pray for you. May you live long. Trust me i have faced very worst time. But time always change. You will get your share of happiness and sorrow. Please don\'t think of leaving this world. Your poetic skill may famous you. Why don\'t you try writing poems professionally. If you kill someone its a crime similarly suicide is also a sin crime. Live your life fully.
January 10th, 2017 22:50
Suicide
Phoenix8523 said:
It can be impossible to see the sunshine from so deep within the hole. I feel it. Lately I\'ve met so many who have lost loved ones this way.. I\'ve become so much more aware of the pain it can cause. -- Thank you for sharing... -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 16:01
Phoenix8523 said:
It can be impossible to see the sunshine from so deep within the hole. I feel it. Lately I\'ve met so many who have lost loved ones this way.. I\'ve become so much more aware of the pain it can cause. -- Thank you for sharing... -- phoenix
January 10th, 2017 16:01
Suicide
Kebiin said:
Your words ring with such truth I am amazed, and I\'m glad you chose something this powerful to write about, everyone should hear this when they think about suicide. Again well done
January 10th, 2017 14:04
Kebiin said:
Your words ring with such truth I am amazed, and I\'m glad you chose something this powerful to write about, everyone should hear this when they think about suicide. Again well done
January 10th, 2017 14:04
Suicide
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I think you said it best in your last lines. We don\'t get to see the pain that we cause (if we act on it) Hope you\'ll stay and keep writing, your first poem is great!
January 10th, 2017 13:28
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! I think you said it best in your last lines. We don\'t get to see the pain that we cause (if we act on it) Hope you\'ll stay and keep writing, your first poem is great!
January 10th, 2017 13:28
