Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Candlestick Removed
orchidee said:
Sorry I don\'t know all the background to this.
October 17th, 2024 02:22
orchidee said:
Sorry I don\'t know all the background to this.
October 17th, 2024 02:22
Candlestick Removed
sorenbarrett said:
This must have taken a bit of work. good write
October 15th, 2024 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
This must have taken a bit of work. good write
October 15th, 2024 19:53
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
NinjaGirl said:
The alliteration in the second half had me--butterflies have a special place in my heart. This poem is truly one of the best ones I\'ve ever read. You are quite the talented writer and it\'s amazing.
October 14th, 2024 21:09
NinjaGirl said:
The alliteration in the second half had me--butterflies have a special place in my heart. This poem is truly one of the best ones I\'ve ever read. You are quite the talented writer and it\'s amazing.
October 14th, 2024 21:09
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
NinjaGirl said:
The alliteration in the second half had me--butterflies have a special place in my heart. This poem is truly one of the best ones I\'ve ever read.
October 14th, 2024 21:09
NinjaGirl said:
The alliteration in the second half had me--butterflies have a special place in my heart. This poem is truly one of the best ones I\'ve ever read.
October 14th, 2024 21:09
The Hunters
sorenbarrett said:
Read the book and see the similarities. A most interesting rhyme scheme. A fun read
October 14th, 2024 17:42
sorenbarrett said:
Read the book and see the similarities. A most interesting rhyme scheme. A fun read
October 14th, 2024 17:42
The Hunters
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t often linger around for long poems, but this had me hooked. Great write.
October 14th, 2024 09:18
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t often linger around for long poems, but this had me hooked. Great write.
October 14th, 2024 09:18
Dark Hallways
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I read the poem several times. Each stanza painted vivid picture and the last stanza brought them together like pieces of a jigsaw puzzles falling in right places to make a whole. Loved it so much. Thanks for sharing Bhaskar
October 14th, 2024 03:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I read the poem several times. Each stanza painted vivid picture and the last stanza brought them together like pieces of a jigsaw puzzles falling in right places to make a whole. Loved it so much. Thanks for sharing Bhaskar
October 14th, 2024 03:50
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I won\'t make an attempt at using adjectives to describe my feelings while reading the poem - perhaps saying it drew me into the vortices of the torment would suffice. The combination of brevity and adornment and absence of artificial portrayal make this poem a hard hitter. Thank you for sharing. Regards Bhaskar
October 12th, 2024 22:47
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I won\'t make an attempt at using adjectives to describe my feelings while reading the poem - perhaps saying it drew me into the vortices of the torment would suffice. The combination of brevity and adornment and absence of artificial portrayal make this poem a hard hitter. Thank you for sharing. Regards Bhaskar
October 12th, 2024 22:47
Snow Globe
orchidee said:
Can we pinpoint just what, or who, are the basis of our fear, or fears? That\'s surely some step, or steps, to overcoming them.
It seems to me, it\'s like each time that snow globe is shaken, the fears shake up, are fluttered, etc, to agitate, disturb, cause us to be anxious.
We\'re getting psychological now!
October 12th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Can we pinpoint just what, or who, are the basis of our fear, or fears? That\'s surely some step, or steps, to overcoming them.
It seems to me, it\'s like each time that snow globe is shaken, the fears shake up, are fluttered, etc, to agitate, disturb, cause us to be anxious.
We\'re getting psychological now!
October 12th, 2024 11:24
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
orchidee said:
A personal write?
Bit of a silly aside, if it wasn\'t such a serious theme: I don\'t fancy experiencing \'torturous\', but I don\'t suppose any of us do!
October 12th, 2024 02:40
orchidee said:
A personal write?
Bit of a silly aside, if it wasn\'t such a serious theme: I don\'t fancy experiencing \'torturous\', but I don\'t suppose any of us do!
October 12th, 2024 02:40
Dark Hallways
Cheeky Missy said:
Inspired by Edgar Alan Poe indeed! The pit and the pendulum in a remarkably shortened version. My la! Fascinating and macabre, ghastly yet seeming half beautiful with excellent imagery and an appropriately horrifying poignancy.
October 9th, 2024 18:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Inspired by Edgar Alan Poe indeed! The pit and the pendulum in a remarkably shortened version. My la! Fascinating and macabre, ghastly yet seeming half beautiful with excellent imagery and an appropriately horrifying poignancy.
October 9th, 2024 18:59
Dark Hallways
Neville said:
Now hold on a minute .. is that really your bastard twin or your alter ego trying to grab the limelight .. come on, own up, spill the beans, I dubble dare\'s ya .. Dark Hallways indeed .. perfect for the fast approaching Halloween if you ask me .. and correspondingly enjoyed .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:26
Neville said:
Now hold on a minute .. is that really your bastard twin or your alter ego trying to grab the limelight .. come on, own up, spill the beans, I dubble dare\'s ya .. Dark Hallways indeed .. perfect for the fast approaching Halloween if you ask me .. and correspondingly enjoyed .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:26
Our Bitter End
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right, the cost of living is death. Pretty much all we can do is try to make the best of it, play with the cards we are dealt. Nice work here.
October 6th, 2024 23:58
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right, the cost of living is death. Pretty much all we can do is try to make the best of it, play with the cards we are dealt. Nice work here.
October 6th, 2024 23:58
Our Bitter End
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
October 6th, 2024 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
October 6th, 2024 19:05
Our Bitter End
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
Masquerade
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Masquerade
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
Masquerade
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
Black Onyx Eyes
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
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