Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
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arqios said:
Nor a spoke, which shares the weight with others, equally distributed... but the cog carries all that weight... going off on a journey of thought. Thanks for the first-class tickets, T! 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 09:23
arqios said:
Nor a spoke, which shares the weight with others, equally distributed... but the cog carries all that weight... going off on a journey of thought. Thanks for the first-class tickets, T! 🕊️🙏
November 8th, 2025 09:23
They
sorenbarrett said:
Machinery rusts and breaks down. A wrench in the works always works showing creativity to the jerks. We all are cogs like it or not in a society too full of moving parts. Good write my friend
November 8th, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Machinery rusts and breaks down. A wrench in the works always works showing creativity to the jerks. We all are cogs like it or not in a society too full of moving parts. Good write my friend
November 8th, 2025 08:30
The Lord\'s Despair
Paul Bell said:
Faith is great and anyone with god on their side, brill.
It\'s always been the opulence of the church that\'s got me.
It\'s like in total contrast to the contract of the poor shall inherit the earth.
November 8th, 2025 06:25
Paul Bell said:
Faith is great and anyone with god on their side, brill.
It\'s always been the opulence of the church that\'s got me.
It\'s like in total contrast to the contract of the poor shall inherit the earth.
November 8th, 2025 06:25
The Lord\'s Despair
Doggerel Dave said:
All hail to the first two lines - the rest an impressively poemed forgone conclusion.
A Lord\'s Prayer pastiche to remember, Tristan.
November 7th, 2025 18:38
Doggerel Dave said:
All hail to the first two lines - the rest an impressively poemed forgone conclusion.
A Lord\'s Prayer pastiche to remember, Tristan.
November 7th, 2025 18:38
The Lord\'s Despair
Bella Shepard said:
How did we become so smug and self possessed, a transformation that we have aided and abetted to our shame. A powerful and introspective take on a prayer taught us by the quintessential prophet of peace. Kudos!
November 7th, 2025 09:51
Bella Shepard said:
How did we become so smug and self possessed, a transformation that we have aided and abetted to our shame. A powerful and introspective take on a prayer taught us by the quintessential prophet of peace. Kudos!
November 7th, 2025 09:51
The Lord\'s Despair
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan. Making fun of ourselves is a lot of fun.
November 7th, 2025 08:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan. Making fun of ourselves is a lot of fun.
November 7th, 2025 08:38
The Lord\'s Despair
orchidee said:
A hymn-writer got it right in saying \'Til earth\'s proud empires fade away\'. This sounds like a fine prayer for hypocrites. But Ol\' Tom and Co. are true to their profession. What\'s their profession? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
orchidee said:
A hymn-writer got it right in saying \'Til earth\'s proud empires fade away\'. This sounds like a fine prayer for hypocrites. But Ol\' Tom and Co. are true to their profession. What\'s their profession? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 7th, 2025 08:37
The Lord\'s Despair
sorenbarrett said:
A blessing for bounty, a curse for those we hate, a prayer to begin and end the day. Satire in prayer poetically said a follower of Mark Twain and his prayers I suppose. Well done Tristan watch out for rabid religious nuts they have over populated and are looking for new pastures.
November 7th, 2025 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
A blessing for bounty, a curse for those we hate, a prayer to begin and end the day. Satire in prayer poetically said a follower of Mark Twain and his prayers I suppose. Well done Tristan watch out for rabid religious nuts they have over populated and are looking for new pastures.
November 7th, 2025 08:36
The Lord\'s Despair
arqios said:
Sad how that is how it is with far too many, the lord is their belly and vanity. It\'s so easy to make fools of ourselves in matters of faith. Perhaps it\'s tainted with delusion and such. 🙏🕊️
November 7th, 2025 08:23
arqios said:
Sad how that is how it is with far too many, the lord is their belly and vanity. It\'s so easy to make fools of ourselves in matters of faith. Perhaps it\'s tainted with delusion and such. 🙏🕊️
November 7th, 2025 08:23
Mission Impossible
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked this a lot, Tristan. Existential questions I definitely have no answer for......
November 6th, 2025 20:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked this a lot, Tristan. Existential questions I definitely have no answer for......
November 6th, 2025 20:16
Mission Impossible
arqios said:
One hears a cry of frustration about injustice, wasted chances, and the pain of trying to keep going in a world that feels broken, in a system that doesn’t care, where some are forgotten while others live in excess. The images of waiting for justice and carrying hidden pain hit hard, and that final question about whether to keep going or give up makes the whole piece linger. Both honest and powerful. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:19
arqios said:
One hears a cry of frustration about injustice, wasted chances, and the pain of trying to keep going in a world that feels broken, in a system that doesn’t care, where some are forgotten while others live in excess. The images of waiting for justice and carrying hidden pain hit hard, and that final question about whether to keep going or give up makes the whole piece linger. Both honest and powerful. 🕊️🙏
November 6th, 2025 19:19
Mission Impossible
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan. Somber and awakening.
November 6th, 2025 15:09
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan. Somber and awakening.
November 6th, 2025 15:09
Mission Impossible
NinjaGirl said:
A lovely poem about the end of freedom...so when are we free to end it on our own? Very interesting and very nicely written!
November 6th, 2025 12:26
NinjaGirl said:
A lovely poem about the end of freedom...so when are we free to end it on our own? Very interesting and very nicely written!
November 6th, 2025 12:26
Mission Impossible
orchidee said:
Yet Milton wrote \'Paradise Regained\' as well as \'Paradise Lost\' though I\'ve read neither. Doh!
Now we know it\'s a mission impossible for P to stop...... don\'t finish that sentence, but here\'s a hint: glug-glug. lol.
See, I\'ve reduced him to the letter \'P\' - well, sometimes anyway.
November 6th, 2025 10:44
orchidee said:
Yet Milton wrote \'Paradise Regained\' as well as \'Paradise Lost\' though I\'ve read neither. Doh!
Now we know it\'s a mission impossible for P to stop...... don\'t finish that sentence, but here\'s a hint: glug-glug. lol.
See, I\'ve reduced him to the letter \'P\' - well, sometimes anyway.
November 6th, 2025 10:44
Mission Impossible
Paul Bell said:
Yes, it\'s imperative you fit into your coffin now, so one must stay fit and slim.
The funeral parlours are weighing people now, and if you don\'t make the weight, they put your family on a diet.
Just dig out the rules for entering heaven now.
November 6th, 2025 10:39
Paul Bell said:
Yes, it\'s imperative you fit into your coffin now, so one must stay fit and slim.
The funeral parlours are weighing people now, and if you don\'t make the weight, they put your family on a diet.
Just dig out the rules for entering heaven now.
November 6th, 2025 10:39
Mission Impossible
sorenbarrett said:
Are we not indeed parasites on this earth that we suck dry of its resources. In Eden too were we not parasitic living without effort. A thought provoking read my friend.
November 6th, 2025 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Are we not indeed parasites on this earth that we suck dry of its resources. In Eden too were we not parasitic living without effort. A thought provoking read my friend.
November 6th, 2025 10:06
Mission Impossible
Bella Shepard said:
Would it were not so this state of life, that we make strides only to be beaten back so many timesr. But perhaps if we can advance just one step beyond the pale each time, we might one day make peace with life. A very compelling and thought provoking poem my friend.
November 6th, 2025 09:28
Bella Shepard said:
Would it were not so this state of life, that we make strides only to be beaten back so many timesr. But perhaps if we can advance just one step beyond the pale each time, we might one day make peace with life. A very compelling and thought provoking poem my friend.
November 6th, 2025 09:28
The Satan is in the System
orchidee said:
Oh no, P\'s got in - He says he wouldn\'t mind some Biaxial Parallax - but he doesn\'t know what it is! heehee.
November 5th, 2025 03:28
orchidee said:
Oh no, P\'s got in - He says he wouldn\'t mind some Biaxial Parallax - but he doesn\'t know what it is! heehee.
November 5th, 2025 03:28
The Satan is in the System
orchidee said:
Yet Jesus, as one source puts it, \'reserved His strongest condemnation for the hypocritical religious folk of the day, not for ordinary, humble folk\'. No need to \'Bible-bash\' ordinary \'common\' folk. Not that all religious leaders are hypocrites.
Similar to animal cruelty - there\'s huge amounts of good done to animals in contrast to the cruelty man does to them.
Or man\'s inhumanity to man - in contrast, there\'s huge amounts of good and does to fellow man
P says...... nope, not getting a word in here, P. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
Yet Jesus, as one source puts it, \'reserved His strongest condemnation for the hypocritical religious folk of the day, not for ordinary, humble folk\'. No need to \'Bible-bash\' ordinary \'common\' folk. Not that all religious leaders are hypocrites.
Similar to animal cruelty - there\'s huge amounts of good done to animals in contrast to the cruelty man does to them.
Or man\'s inhumanity to man - in contrast, there\'s huge amounts of good and does to fellow man
P says...... nope, not getting a word in here, P. lol.
November 5th, 2025 03:26
The Satan is in the System
Doggerel Dave said:
I really don\'t know how to phrase this, Tristan but please don\'t take it as an insult: I find peace in having no religion/faith. Your faith must be so much torture. Take care of yourself.
November 4th, 2025 18:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I really don\'t know how to phrase this, Tristan but please don\'t take it as an insult: I find peace in having no religion/faith. Your faith must be so much torture. Take care of yourself.
November 4th, 2025 18:28
The Satan is in the System
NinjaGirl said:
I do always like your poems written in this form--the contrast is very powerful!
November 4th, 2025 16:47
NinjaGirl said:
I do always like your poems written in this form--the contrast is very powerful!
November 4th, 2025 16:47
The Satan is in the System
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan am I deceived of does the form represent an S? Maybe I look too closely. Regardless it splits the two verses and evil and good are split and in a form mirror images. So true the message all scams represent themselves as legitimate and in your best interest. Well done my friend
November 4th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan am I deceived of does the form represent an S? Maybe I look too closely. Regardless it splits the two verses and evil and good are split and in a form mirror images. So true the message all scams represent themselves as legitimate and in your best interest. Well done my friend
November 4th, 2025 09:19
The Ghost of Babel
NafisaSB said:
agree with the first sentence wholeheartedly, the rest is greek and latin [or whichever language has been used - lol]
November 4th, 2025 03:08
NafisaSB said:
agree with the first sentence wholeheartedly, the rest is greek and latin [or whichever language has been used - lol]
November 4th, 2025 03:08
faith\'s psalm
NinjaGirl said:
The space before the word \"silence\" is everything! I love it a lot. The dashes too, so well-written.
November 3rd, 2025 22:44
NinjaGirl said:
The space before the word \"silence\" is everything! I love it a lot. The dashes too, so well-written.
November 3rd, 2025 22:44
faith\'s psalm
Paul Bell said:
God is good, says it on the packet.
Someday you will be rewarded with the key to the gate.
Now I know what you\'re thinking, and you would be right.
November 3rd, 2025 14:14
Paul Bell said:
God is good, says it on the packet.
Someday you will be rewarded with the key to the gate.
Now I know what you\'re thinking, and you would be right.
November 3rd, 2025 14:14
faith\'s psalm
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps faith is in the soul of the beholder, and silence the unspoken language of faith. Beautifully rendered dear friend!
November 3rd, 2025 14:09
Bella Shepard said:
Perhaps faith is in the soul of the beholder, and silence the unspoken language of faith. Beautifully rendered dear friend!
November 3rd, 2025 14:09
faith\'s psalm
orchidee said:
Has Popeye fallen silent again? Doubt it. He\'s still spinach-guzzling! lol. He\'ll haunt us in our dreams before long.
November 3rd, 2025 12:40
orchidee said:
Has Popeye fallen silent again? Doubt it. He\'s still spinach-guzzling! lol. He\'ll haunt us in our dreams before long.
November 3rd, 2025 12:40
faith\'s psalm
sorenbarrett said:
As a child I asked why a prayer said went unanswered and always was told it was God\'s will so I wondered why ask. (Why then the silence) a great ending to this piece. Loved it Tristan
November 3rd, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
As a child I asked why a prayer said went unanswered and always was told it was God\'s will so I wondered why ask. (Why then the silence) a great ending to this piece. Loved it Tristan
November 3rd, 2025 09:20
Silenced; Yet All Shall Be Well
orchidee said:
A sensible comment from me - almost. I\'m not familiar with that \'bit of French there - Nox, etc. This is bit cryptic for me, even apart from the \'French\'
What\'s worse, I think, is that those who are oppressing still carry on believing all will be OK. And some Jews had a superstitious belief in the Temple.
But - not now Popeye - heehee!
November 3rd, 2025 02:58
orchidee said:
A sensible comment from me - almost. I\'m not familiar with that \'bit of French there - Nox, etc. This is bit cryptic for me, even apart from the \'French\'
What\'s worse, I think, is that those who are oppressing still carry on believing all will be OK. And some Jews had a superstitious belief in the Temple.
But - not now Popeye - heehee!
November 3rd, 2025 02:58
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