Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Mirrors
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
Mirrors
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Mirrors
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding 🕊️🙏🏻
July 30th, 2026 07:58
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding 🕊️🙏🏻
July 30th, 2026 07:58
the pudding
David Wakeling said:
I also believe that rules were meant to be debated. Thoughtful piece here
July 29th, 2026 19:17
David Wakeling said:
I also believe that rules were meant to be debated. Thoughtful piece here
July 29th, 2026 19:17
the pudding
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write with an open end for the reader to ponder
July 29th, 2026 08:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write with an open end for the reader to ponder
July 29th, 2026 08:26
the pudding
orchidee said:
We know Popeye is making that spinach pudding, though when they have it they say \'Blleeeuuurrgghh!\' lol. Does Popeye invite Mr Hunt to dinner? heehee.
July 29th, 2026 08:25
orchidee said:
We know Popeye is making that spinach pudding, though when they have it they say \'Blleeeuuurrgghh!\' lol. Does Popeye invite Mr Hunt to dinner? heehee.
July 29th, 2026 08:25
the pudding
sorenbarrett said:
This one can be taken either way and that is its strength. I love when a poem leaves it up to the reader to decide the outcome. Nicely done my friend
July 29th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
This one can be taken either way and that is its strength. I love when a poem leaves it up to the reader to decide the outcome. Nicely done my friend
July 29th, 2026 08:17
The Great Delaware
Neville said:
This just hit me like an avalanche talk about floods .. it felt like I was being swept away by my own guilt .. talk about dark .. ▪️◾◼️⚫🐈⬛🐦⬛🏴🐧
July 28th, 2026 23:29
Neville said:
This just hit me like an avalanche talk about floods .. it felt like I was being swept away by my own guilt .. talk about dark .. ▪️◾◼️⚫🐈⬛🐦⬛🏴🐧
July 28th, 2026 23:29
The Great Delaware
David Wakeling said:
This is such a powerful piece amigo.As powerful as the mighty Delaware itself.I like the \"marching\" style text that commands the reader to pay attention.Well done a great piece
July 28th, 2026 22:33
David Wakeling said:
This is such a powerful piece amigo.As powerful as the mighty Delaware itself.I like the \"marching\" style text that commands the reader to pay attention.Well done a great piece
July 28th, 2026 22:33
The Great Delaware
Teddy.15 said:
There should never be guilt if one doesn\'t follow the other sheep, what a powerful piece, I almost want to rescue you Tristan, but I know you are a mighty force! 💜
July 28th, 2026 17:01
Teddy.15 said:
There should never be guilt if one doesn\'t follow the other sheep, what a powerful piece, I almost want to rescue you Tristan, but I know you are a mighty force! 💜
July 28th, 2026 17:01
The Great Delaware
arqios said:
People who commit wrongdoing blame others for their own corruption, but truth and justice will eventually surge through and wash everything clean, violently, inevitably, like a river in flood.
July 28th, 2026 15:57
arqios said:
People who commit wrongdoing blame others for their own corruption, but truth and justice will eventually surge through and wash everything clean, violently, inevitably, like a river in flood.
July 28th, 2026 15:57
The Great Delaware
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend, very much enjoyed
July 28th, 2026 12:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend, very much enjoyed
July 28th, 2026 12:30
The Great Delaware
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co cannot form such erudite comments - they\'re busy with spinach and stuff! But what stuff, WCAT!! Good write T.
July 28th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co cannot form such erudite comments - they\'re busy with spinach and stuff! But what stuff, WCAT!! Good write T.
July 28th, 2026 09:57
The Great Delaware
sorenbarrett said:
A sacrifical rite in this poem to atone and make right. It is the epitome of associational magic where synchronicity not causality becomes the method. Well written Tristan your formatting draws attention to the actions. Well done
July 28th, 2026 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A sacrifical rite in this poem to atone and make right. It is the epitome of associational magic where synchronicity not causality becomes the method. Well written Tristan your formatting draws attention to the actions. Well done
July 28th, 2026 09:35
The Great Delaware
Friendship said:
Your words are so powerful. Your poem delves into the complexity of human morality, the consequences of neglecting ethical standards, and the desire for justice amidst chaos. It juxtaposes moments of urgency (halt, stall, blast off) with the weight of moral failures, suggesting an urgent need for introspection and accountability. So much pain, my friend.🙏
July 28th, 2026 09:11
Friendship said:
Your words are so powerful. Your poem delves into the complexity of human morality, the consequences of neglecting ethical standards, and the desire for justice amidst chaos. It juxtaposes moments of urgency (halt, stall, blast off) with the weight of moral failures, suggesting an urgent need for introspection and accountability. So much pain, my friend.🙏
July 28th, 2026 09:11
wood you?
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
wood you?
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
wood you?
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
wood you?
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope you’re doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope you’re doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Marooned
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Frisbee Golf
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
Frisbee Golf
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
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