Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Us and the Void
Poetic Licence said:
To me a strong sense of asking us to look deep inside us to the darkness we all hold and have , where even some of us live. Some wonderful lines and a engrossing read
June 2nd, 2025 11:03
Poetic Licence said:
To me a strong sense of asking us to look deep inside us to the darkness we all hold and have , where even some of us live. Some wonderful lines and a engrossing read
June 2nd, 2025 11:03
Us and the Void
Teddy.15 said:
When I was a child I was convinced the sky would fall down.
There is no sky,
It cannot
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Wonderful poetry 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 09:50
Teddy.15 said:
When I was a child I was convinced the sky would fall down.
There is no sky,
It cannot
F
a
l
l
Wonderful poetry 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 09:50
Us and the Void
orchidee said:
I thought this might be titled \'Us and Popeye\'. lol. Good write Obi T.
June 2nd, 2025 09:40
orchidee said:
I thought this might be titled \'Us and Popeye\'. lol. Good write Obi T.
June 2nd, 2025 09:40
Us and the Void
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and deeply philosophical poem that asks us to look deep into ourselves. That void like a black hole that even light can not escape. I loved the lettering format that demonstrates the words being said. It is the meaning that captured me and gets a fave
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and deeply philosophical poem that asks us to look deep into ourselves. That void like a black hole that even light can not escape. I loved the lettering format that demonstrates the words being said. It is the meaning that captured me and gets a fave
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Us and the Void
Salvia.S said:
A haunting, thought-provoking poem that explores truth, illusion, and the vastness of both outer and inner space. I especially love the line break in \'There is no sky, it cannot fall\'—it feels like the very concept of sky is collapsing letter by letter. Well done!
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Salvia.S said:
A haunting, thought-provoking poem that explores truth, illusion, and the vastness of both outer and inner space. I especially love the line break in \'There is no sky, it cannot fall\'—it feels like the very concept of sky is collapsing letter by letter. Well done!
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Cats on a Pillar
Teddy.15 said:
I definitely see some seriously great lyrics in here, love your play on words 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:16
Teddy.15 said:
I definitely see some seriously great lyrics in here, love your play on words 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:16
Closure
Teddy.15 said:
I was truly sorry to read this last week, I hope you have found some fond memories to pack into your mind, dogs are like family so I know how much pain we can feel. 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:15
Teddy.15 said:
I was truly sorry to read this last week, I hope you have found some fond memories to pack into your mind, dogs are like family so I know how much pain we can feel. 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:15
Cats on a Pillar
orchidee said:
Good write Cat! lol. I of course wouldn\'t get any deep philosophical meaning to poems. Well, I only got 3 brain cells to use. lol.
June 1st, 2025 11:19
orchidee said:
Good write Cat! lol. I of course wouldn\'t get any deep philosophical meaning to poems. Well, I only got 3 brain cells to use. lol.
June 1st, 2025 11:19
The Wizard
Cheeky Missy said:
Hope Tony\'s okay. Gorgeously rendered with delicious imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy, so very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Hope Tony\'s okay. Gorgeously rendered with delicious imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy, so very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:59
Cats on a Pillar
Cheeky Missy said:
Apparently it was \"cat or pillar,\" eh? And the death which resurrects into a breath-taking beauty is being celebrated in a twisted fashion, eh? Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Apparently it was \"cat or pillar,\" eh? And the death which resurrects into a breath-taking beauty is being celebrated in a twisted fashion, eh? Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:56
Cats on a Pillar
2781 said:
I must admit, I didn\'t understand it.
But enjoyed the read!
June 1st, 2025 09:49
2781 said:
I must admit, I didn\'t understand it.
But enjoyed the read!
June 1st, 2025 09:49
Cats on a Pillar
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very clever write and play on words and there common excepted meaning. The essence to me is that everything feeds of off one another, raising the question do we really ever die, great write, enjoyed
June 1st, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very clever write and play on words and there common excepted meaning. The essence to me is that everything feeds of off one another, raising the question do we really ever die, great write, enjoyed
June 1st, 2025 09:11
Cats on a Pillar
Salvia.S said:
Really love the clever wordplay!!! You\'re not just playing with words; you\'re weaponizing them to challenge traditional metaphors like butterflies - a symbol of beauty , growth, freedom to offer a darker , more complex view. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹
June 1st, 2025 08:33
Salvia.S said:
Really love the clever wordplay!!! You\'re not just playing with words; you\'re weaponizing them to challenge traditional metaphors like butterflies - a symbol of beauty , growth, freedom to offer a darker , more complex view. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹
June 1st, 2025 08:33
Cats on a Pillar
sorenbarrett said:
Now Tristan you got me on this one. I thought I knew the majority of words but siprit caught me off guard. As for cats on a pillar, cats may look imprisoned on a tall pillar but they descend easily and raise easily. Like clouds they sit untouched there. Clouds constantly change in their metamorphosis to rain drops that then again evaporate to new clouds. Butter and flies not butterflies that do metamorphosize . clever play on words there. Yes cats on a pillar another clever word play becoming that caterpillar. Yes death is the truth for all and yet in this metamorphosis springs new life like a phoenix in different form not a caterpillar but butterfly not a person but a worm. We all feed off of each other and so become immortal in another form.
June 1st, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
Now Tristan you got me on this one. I thought I knew the majority of words but siprit caught me off guard. As for cats on a pillar, cats may look imprisoned on a tall pillar but they descend easily and raise easily. Like clouds they sit untouched there. Clouds constantly change in their metamorphosis to rain drops that then again evaporate to new clouds. Butter and flies not butterflies that do metamorphosize . clever play on words there. Yes cats on a pillar another clever word play becoming that caterpillar. Yes death is the truth for all and yet in this metamorphosis springs new life like a phoenix in different form not a caterpillar but butterfly not a person but a worm. We all feed off of each other and so become immortal in another form.
June 1st, 2025 07:54
The Wizard
arqios said:
Most excellent tribute! He\'s such an awesome guy, our Tony!🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:40
arqios said:
Most excellent tribute! He\'s such an awesome guy, our Tony!🙏🏻🕊️
June 1st, 2025 01:40
The Wizard
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is a most wonderful dedication, I am sure he will fill up when reading this, nothing more caring than a heart that giveth, and you have done that, lovely write
May 31st, 2025 10:18
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is a most wonderful dedication, I am sure he will fill up when reading this, nothing more caring than a heart that giveth, and you have done that, lovely write
May 31st, 2025 10:18
The Wizard
orchidee said:
It\'s Fido in disguise! lol. Good write Popeye, erm, Tristan - from OWK. :)
May 31st, 2025 10:07
orchidee said:
It\'s Fido in disguise! lol. Good write Popeye, erm, Tristan - from OWK. :)
May 31st, 2025 10:07
Closure
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How bitter sweet . Oh my! Touches the ❤️ heart.
May 31st, 2025 09:04
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How bitter sweet . Oh my! Touches the ❤️ heart.
May 31st, 2025 09:04
The Wizard
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and with every word my support to him a friend. In these words I read below the surface to critics that dissect poems that like living things are not the same when taken apart there is something intangible lost. It is so nicely personalized in his style of wizards, elves and the world of fairies. May our sensitivity as poets extend to those around us. A lovely write and a fave
May 31st, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and with every word my support to him a friend. In these words I read below the surface to critics that dissect poems that like living things are not the same when taken apart there is something intangible lost. It is so nicely personalized in his style of wizards, elves and the world of fairies. May our sensitivity as poets extend to those around us. A lovely write and a fave
May 31st, 2025 08:04
Closure
Dan Williams said:
So very true. Mine was the most devoted of a number of companions. Thanks for this.
May 31st, 2025 00:53
Dan Williams said:
So very true. Mine was the most devoted of a number of companions. Thanks for this.
May 31st, 2025 00:53
This is the Banishing
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You came to devour,
You came to consume,
But you didn’t know
This orgy has you on the menu!\"
I\'m pretty sure there is more to this piece than meets my eye, but these four lines are a standout for me and I bloody wish I\'d written them when I was banging on about consumerism, the climate crisis and so on.
Thanks, Tristan. 👍👍
May 30th, 2025 16:54
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You came to devour,
You came to consume,
But you didn’t know
This orgy has you on the menu!\"
I\'m pretty sure there is more to this piece than meets my eye, but these four lines are a standout for me and I bloody wish I\'d written them when I was banging on about consumerism, the climate crisis and so on.
Thanks, Tristan. 👍👍
May 30th, 2025 16:54
This is the Banishing
orchidee said:
Good write Luke! Sooo, you\'re a sky walker (Star Wars. LOL). Ohh, I dunno, aren\'t Obi and Popeye the only free ones? I\'m talking utter rubbish now! lol.
May 30th, 2025 10:45
orchidee said:
Good write Luke! Sooo, you\'re a sky walker (Star Wars. LOL). Ohh, I dunno, aren\'t Obi and Popeye the only free ones? I\'m talking utter rubbish now! lol.
May 30th, 2025 10:45
This is the Banishing
Poetic Licence said:
The banishing of the demons, the break for freedom, angry and strong write, enjoyed
May 30th, 2025 10:07
Poetic Licence said:
The banishing of the demons, the break for freedom, angry and strong write, enjoyed
May 30th, 2025 10:07
This is the Banishing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of alliteration and open anger with power. Very nice
May 30th, 2025 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of alliteration and open anger with power. Very nice
May 30th, 2025 08:42
Closure
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like how you chose the word \"resoluteness\" in this one, Tristan!
May 29th, 2025 21:02
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like how you chose the word \"resoluteness\" in this one, Tristan!
May 29th, 2025 21:02
Closure
Doggerel Dave said:
The grief can be equal to the loss of a close human friend.
Take care, Tristan.
May 29th, 2025 17:12
Doggerel Dave said:
The grief can be equal to the loss of a close human friend.
Take care, Tristan.
May 29th, 2025 17:12
Closure
orchidee said:
Is this a picture of your own dogs? I can\'t even watch \'Lassie\' without getting upset! This is too sad. 😢 I never watch the film of Marley and Me, as I\'ve read the book, and know how it ends.
May 29th, 2025 10:37
orchidee said:
Is this a picture of your own dogs? I can\'t even watch \'Lassie\' without getting upset! This is too sad. 😢 I never watch the film of Marley and Me, as I\'ve read the book, and know how it ends.
May 29th, 2025 10:37
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