Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
sin/cerely
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Super play on words, perhaps repenting of sin sincerely will erase it. Kudos for the poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 13:02
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Super play on words, perhaps repenting of sin sincerely will erase it. Kudos for the poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 13:02
sin/cerely
Paul Bell said:
I myself is always sincere in my sinning ways.
Well, at least till I get caught, then I plead insanity and blame others.
May 19th, 2026 10:35
Paul Bell said:
I myself is always sincere in my sinning ways.
Well, at least till I get caught, then I plead insanity and blame others.
May 19th, 2026 10:35
sin/cerely
orchidee said:
Ooh, I dunno - I\'m standing on me head now, trying to unravel the sinceritiness of it all - and is that even a word?! lol. Spellchecker says no! lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
Ooh, I dunno - I\'m standing on me head now, trying to unravel the sinceritiness of it all - and is that even a word?! lol. Spellchecker says no! lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:22
sin/cerely
orchidee said:
Now sin-cere - and look \'ere, it\'s we know who. And \'Hear here\' - a glug forms, but not out of nowhere! Consult WCAT that never gives answers. lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:20
orchidee said:
Now sin-cere - and look \'ere, it\'s we know who. And \'Hear here\' - a glug forms, but not out of nowhere! Consult WCAT that never gives answers. lol.
May 19th, 2026 10:20
sin/cerely
Thomas W Case said:
You’re turning language over like a stone in the mouth—testing where meaning starts to cut.
There’s a sharp elegance in it: how certainty itself can become the place where sin and sincerity blur into each other.
May 19th, 2026 09:08
Thomas W Case said:
You’re turning language over like a stone in the mouth—testing where meaning starts to cut.
There’s a sharp elegance in it: how certainty itself can become the place where sin and sincerity blur into each other.
May 19th, 2026 09:08
sin/cerely
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely word play in the deconstruction of words and the reassembly of meaning. Well done my friend
May 19th, 2026 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely word play in the deconstruction of words and the reassembly of meaning. Well done my friend
May 19th, 2026 07:51
Diet of Carp
David Wakeling said:
Some clever word play going on here. Seize the Day mi amigo. An interesting poem.Enjoyable
May 18th, 2026 18:01
David Wakeling said:
Some clever word play going on here. Seize the Day mi amigo. An interesting poem.Enjoyable
May 18th, 2026 18:01
Diet of Carp
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem addresses the internal conflict of a person who wakes up ready to confront the day but is immediately met with a sense of irony and disillusionment. The imagery of fishing and being \"school[ed]\" serves as a metaphor for societal pressures and the feeling of being trapped in a cycle of complacency.OMG, I feel at times I am the butt of it all.
May 18th, 2026 17:05
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem addresses the internal conflict of a person who wakes up ready to confront the day but is immediately met with a sense of irony and disillusionment. The imagery of fishing and being \"school[ed]\" serves as a metaphor for societal pressures and the feeling of being trapped in a cycle of complacency.OMG, I feel at times I am the butt of it all.
May 18th, 2026 17:05
Diet of Carp
arqios said:
The play on words both wax sharply! Brandishing and clashing ⚔️🤺🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 10:06
arqios said:
The play on words both wax sharply! Brandishing and clashing ⚔️🤺🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 10:06
Diet of Carp
orchidee said:
Argh! An English King, Henry I, I think, died from a surfeit of lampreys - horrid things to eat, eel-like things. Never had one in my life, and not about to start now either. Meanwhile, P eats them with spinach I reckon. lol. What can WCAT reveal to us? Nothing, of course! heehee.
May 18th, 2026 09:19
orchidee said:
Argh! An English King, Henry I, I think, died from a surfeit of lampreys - horrid things to eat, eel-like things. Never had one in my life, and not about to start now either. Meanwhile, P eats them with spinach I reckon. lol. What can WCAT reveal to us? Nothing, of course! heehee.
May 18th, 2026 09:19
Diet of Carp
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and their meaning. Enjoyed the rhyme play as well. Isn\'t life a word play as well with misunderstandings and careful choice of words to not offend or maybe offend. In this we are all the jokers and butt of the joke. All a matter of view. Well written my friend
May 18th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and their meaning. Enjoyed the rhyme play as well. Isn\'t life a word play as well with misunderstandings and careful choice of words to not offend or maybe offend. In this we are all the jokers and butt of the joke. All a matter of view. Well written my friend
May 18th, 2026 09:02
Diet of Carp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi...in advance, yes, there is a Diet of Glug too! And we all know who wants that! 🤣
May 18th, 2026 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi...in advance, yes, there is a Diet of Glug too! And we all know who wants that! 🤣
May 18th, 2026 08:09
lumiere gets lit
Waiting for Silence said:
Beautifully captures how even a spark can ignite hope. Good Write
May 17th, 2026 23:53
Waiting for Silence said:
Beautifully captures how even a spark can ignite hope. Good Write
May 17th, 2026 23:53
God Speaks Like a Woman
Waiting for Silence said:
Powerful expression of courage and spiritual conviction. Good One
May 17th, 2026 23:52
Waiting for Silence said:
Powerful expression of courage and spiritual conviction. Good One
May 17th, 2026 23:52
God Speaks Like a Woman
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem.The idea of Woman speaking for God makes sense.After all they create new life and love.Strong thoughts here.Thoughtful
May 17th, 2026 18:24
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem.The idea of Woman speaking for God makes sense.After all they create new life and love.Strong thoughts here.Thoughtful
May 17th, 2026 18:24
God Speaks Like a Woman
Teddy.15 said:
lol you better believe it! Ha ha this made me as a woman chuckle 🤭😁🤭
May 17th, 2026 13:31
Teddy.15 said:
lol you better believe it! Ha ha this made me as a woman chuckle 🤭😁🤭
May 17th, 2026 13:31
God Speaks Like a Woman
sorenbarrett said:
George Carlin said it and I echo it, if there is a god it must be a woman. In all of nature the woman is responsible for creation and birth, we even call her mother nature. Other cultures have women goddesses. And why must a creator have a gender? Even in the most radical of religions such as Catholicism they worship mother Mary. Would not God be an equal opportunity employer after all he/she created all.
May 17th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
George Carlin said it and I echo it, if there is a god it must be a woman. In all of nature the woman is responsible for creation and birth, we even call her mother nature. Other cultures have women goddesses. And why must a creator have a gender? Even in the most radical of religions such as Catholicism they worship mother Mary. Would not God be an equal opportunity employer after all he/she created all.
May 17th, 2026 13:22
God Speaks Like a Woman
orchidee said:
There\'s a fiery glug too - whatever that sounds like?! lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:16
orchidee said:
There\'s a fiery glug too - whatever that sounds like?! lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:16
God Speaks Like a Woman
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fire in this—raw conviction that won’t sit down or be talked out of standing tall,
Like a voice pushing through resistance just to say it believes what it believes, no matter the noise.
May 17th, 2026 08:59
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fire in this—raw conviction that won’t sit down or be talked out of standing tall,
Like a voice pushing through resistance just to say it believes what it believes, no matter the noise.
May 17th, 2026 08:59
God Speaks Like a Woman
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the themes of empowerment, gender equality, and the divine presence of femininity in spirituality. It presents a strong assertion that both women and men can recognize and experience the divine, emphasizing that women\'s voices and perspectives are essential in discussions of justice and spirituality.
May 17th, 2026 08:46
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the themes of empowerment, gender equality, and the divine presence of femininity in spirituality. It presents a strong assertion that both women and men can recognize and experience the divine, emphasizing that women\'s voices and perspectives are essential in discussions of justice and spirituality.
May 17th, 2026 08:46
What Does It Matter?
NafisaSB said:
a good and reflective expose which reveals something different to each reader depending on the way interpreted...
May 16th, 2026 23:51
NafisaSB said:
a good and reflective expose which reveals something different to each reader depending on the way interpreted...
May 16th, 2026 23:51
lumiere gets lit
David Wakeling said:
For me the metaphor is activation.It doesn\'t take much effort to get things started.and they can be extraordinary when you start.Made me think
May 16th, 2026 17:33
David Wakeling said:
For me the metaphor is activation.It doesn\'t take much effort to get things started.and they can be extraordinary when you start.Made me think
May 16th, 2026 17:33
lumiere gets lit
Neville said:
This is one of them that\'s just a tad special .. I\'m betting the Art of Being collection is something else too .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛😎🖤🖤🌻🦋🐈⬛⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 11:47
Neville said:
This is one of them that\'s just a tad special .. I\'m betting the Art of Being collection is something else too .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛😎🖤🖤🌻🦋🐈⬛⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 11:47
lumiere gets lit
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Also - the mere spark of the start of.... another glug. We hear it! lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:34
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Also - the mere spark of the start of.... another glug. We hear it! lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:34
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