Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Don\'t Let It Own You
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
The Laughing Matter
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
The Laughing Matter
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
The Laughing Matter
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
The Laughing Matter
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
The Laughing Matter
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
The Laughing Matter
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
Cross-Examination
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
What If?
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32
What If?
Rose of Sharon said:
This reminds me of the Ferris Bueller quote \"life moves pretty fast. You don\'t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.\" We can spend hours of our lives with existential dread, with questions that may never be answered, but in the end, what really matters is how well we spent the time we knew we did have. Thanks for sharing! ✨🌌
May 5th, 2025 19:26
Rose of Sharon said:
This reminds me of the Ferris Bueller quote \"life moves pretty fast. You don\'t stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.\" We can spend hours of our lives with existential dread, with questions that may never be answered, but in the end, what really matters is how well we spent the time we knew we did have. Thanks for sharing! ✨🌌
May 5th, 2025 19:26
What If?
Cheeky Missy said:
Existentialism at its finest? What it oddly triggered in me was John Paul Jones message to General Washington: \"We have met the enemy and they are ours.\" But when I tried to begin that comment I couldn\'t see why or how on earth that made any sense with your latest, whence I deleted that comment. Just so you know. We seem indeed to have the moment wherein we stand, if that\'s what you\'re saying; and forsooth, let us live as we should...in the fear of the LORD, if only. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 17:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Existentialism at its finest? What it oddly triggered in me was John Paul Jones message to General Washington: \"We have met the enemy and they are ours.\" But when I tried to begin that comment I couldn\'t see why or how on earth that made any sense with your latest, whence I deleted that comment. Just so you know. We seem indeed to have the moment wherein we stand, if that\'s what you\'re saying; and forsooth, let us live as we should...in the fear of the LORD, if only. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a none too subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2025 17:26
Cross-Examination
NinjaGirl said:
It would top off the picture well to have a scale on the desk! It only takes one sin to fall, to fail. But there is certainly a difference between acceptance and defiance.
May 5th, 2025 16:28
NinjaGirl said:
It would top off the picture well to have a scale on the desk! It only takes one sin to fall, to fail. But there is certainly a difference between acceptance and defiance.
May 5th, 2025 16:28
murder
NinjaGirl said:
I love settings like this...something about a rainy autumn day is so haunting and romantic...daunting and charismatic. I love this poem!
May 5th, 2025 16:25
NinjaGirl said:
I love settings like this...something about a rainy autumn day is so haunting and romantic...daunting and charismatic. I love this poem!
May 5th, 2025 16:25
A Little Mad
NinjaGirl said:
\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too true...the people are willing to help...until they aren\'t.
May 5th, 2025 16:22
NinjaGirl said:
\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too true...the people are willing to help...until they aren\'t.
May 5th, 2025 16:22
What If?
orchidee said:
Erm, what if Obi is all there is - or isn\'t?! Whops! You knew I was gonna say that - yes? LOL.
May 5th, 2025 10:27
orchidee said:
Erm, what if Obi is all there is - or isn\'t?! Whops! You knew I was gonna say that - yes? LOL.
May 5th, 2025 10:27
What If?
sorenbarrett said:
Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we are hear. Lovely a vave
May 5th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we are hear. Lovely a vave
May 5th, 2025 10:12
Sleepy Hollow
orchidee said:
But we have just had a few days of a heatwave here! LOL. That you in that field? Or it could be you-know-who Obi. Heehee.
May 4th, 2025 12:33
orchidee said:
But we have just had a few days of a heatwave here! LOL. That you in that field? Or it could be you-know-who Obi. Heehee.
May 4th, 2025 12:33
Sleepy Hollow
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Sleepy Hollow
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
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