Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
who ordered the milk?
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
who ordered the milk?
sorenbarrett said:
If anyone has gum I hope it is enough for everyone. Don\'t drink milk anymore only heavy cream and loads of butter. As for formaldehyde they put enough of that in the food to preserve any corpse for a lifetime. Maybe it will keep the sexual experience long enough to not be premature ejaculation. My mind is wandering again. Good write my friend
June 20th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
If anyone has gum I hope it is enough for everyone. Don\'t drink milk anymore only heavy cream and loads of butter. As for formaldehyde they put enough of that in the food to preserve any corpse for a lifetime. Maybe it will keep the sexual experience long enough to not be premature ejaculation. My mind is wandering again. Good write my friend
June 20th, 2026 09:03
who ordered the milk?
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of intimacy, chaos, and the absurdity of existence, juxtaposing mundane elements of life with darker undertones. The imagery and references suggest a commentary on human relationships and societal norms, hinting at both pleasure and discomfort in the act of connection.
June 20th, 2026 08:05
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of intimacy, chaos, and the absurdity of existence, juxtaposing mundane elements of life with darker undertones. The imagery and references suggest a commentary on human relationships and societal norms, hinting at both pleasure and discomfort in the act of connection.
June 20th, 2026 08:05
woke to the broke
cellinic said:
A wonderful write, historically based, yet with some hidden humour, like in the wording\" silly crocodiles\", best wishes and a fave, my dear friend
June 20th, 2026 03:10
cellinic said:
A wonderful write, historically based, yet with some hidden humour, like in the wording\" silly crocodiles\", best wishes and a fave, my dear friend
June 20th, 2026 03:10
woke to the broke
Teddy.15 said:
I got the colour purple vibes in this. Powerful and brilliant. 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:57
Teddy.15 said:
I got the colour purple vibes in this. Powerful and brilliant. 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:57
woke to the broke
arqios said:
Just because it\'s on paper don\'t guarantee execution/espousing of intent. A nod to this excellent poetic sigh. Well, I sigh, this is more of a potent expression!
June 19th, 2026 21:00
arqios said:
Just because it\'s on paper don\'t guarantee execution/espousing of intent. A nod to this excellent poetic sigh. Well, I sigh, this is more of a potent expression!
June 19th, 2026 21:00
woke to the broke
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Write. A lot of suffering still goes on .
June 19th, 2026 18:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Write. A lot of suffering still goes on .
June 19th, 2026 18:46
woke to the broke
sorenbarrett said:
Lincoln got the credit but he was not the author but had his arm twisted into signing earlier than he intended by Cassius Clay the namesake for the boxer. A good write my friend.
June 19th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Lincoln got the credit but he was not the author but had his arm twisted into signing earlier than he intended by Cassius Clay the namesake for the boxer. A good write my friend.
June 19th, 2026 09:39
woke to the broke
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great piece my friend, free in declaration but not in reality
June 19th, 2026 09:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great piece my friend, free in declaration but not in reality
June 19th, 2026 09:30
We Lose
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, agree with you wholeheartedly on this topic...
June 19th, 2026 07:05
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, agree with you wholeheartedly on this topic...
June 19th, 2026 07:05
countdown
Mutley Ravishes said:
Could be one second, one year, or 2040, or 2046, or an Exodus, there`s no telling!
\"Another ascent to death!\" Transcen-
-dent writing, Tristan!
June 19th, 2026 07:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Could be one second, one year, or 2040, or 2046, or an Exodus, there`s no telling!
\"Another ascent to death!\" Transcen-
-dent writing, Tristan!
June 19th, 2026 07:01
countdown
sorenbarrett said:
This has several aspects to it wordplay and tension that comes in a countdown. I hope this was not a fuse Tristan. Well written my friend.
June 18th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
This has several aspects to it wordplay and tension that comes in a countdown. I hope this was not a fuse Tristan. Well written my friend.
June 18th, 2026 12:44
countdown
orchidee said:
Sounds like the countdown to Popeye opening yet another can of spinach! lol.
June 18th, 2026 12:27
orchidee said:
Sounds like the countdown to Popeye opening yet another can of spinach! lol.
June 18th, 2026 12:27
countdown
Friendship said:
A powerful statement. Your poem revolves around the themes of anxiety, existential dread, and the confrontation with mortality. The countdown format suggests a sense of urgency and impending doom, while the expressions of breathlessness and the quest for life emphasize a struggle against despair. Yet your poem captures the tension between life and death, ultimately conveying feelings of isolation and the inevitability of fate. So strong in feelings
June 18th, 2026 12:09
Friendship said:
A powerful statement. Your poem revolves around the themes of anxiety, existential dread, and the confrontation with mortality. The countdown format suggests a sense of urgency and impending doom, while the expressions of breathlessness and the quest for life emphasize a struggle against despair. Yet your poem captures the tension between life and death, ultimately conveying feelings of isolation and the inevitability of fate. So strong in feelings
June 18th, 2026 12:09
nineteen ninety-five
Paul Bell said:
What would we change in our past, probably everything.
If we could, we\'d tweak here, tweak there, tweak everywhere.
Always think, as long as you only murder yourself in your youth, the courts can\'t jail you.
June 18th, 2026 07:58
Paul Bell said:
What would we change in our past, probably everything.
If we could, we\'d tweak here, tweak there, tweak everywhere.
Always think, as long as you only murder yourself in your youth, the courts can\'t jail you.
June 18th, 2026 07:58
nineteen ninety-five
arqios said:
Reminiscent hindsight. Excellent hairstyles as well. 🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. was there a background sound effect of a colour slide carousel? (it\'s meant to be the SNAPSHOT in the transcript, correct?)
June 17th, 2026 22:45
arqios said:
Reminiscent hindsight. Excellent hairstyles as well. 🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. was there a background sound effect of a colour slide carousel? (it\'s meant to be the SNAPSHOT in the transcript, correct?)
June 17th, 2026 22:45
nineteen ninety-five
Kevin Hulme said:
I love Alice Cooper\'s Album \'School\'s Out\'. Always reminds me of leaving School.
Good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:51
Kevin Hulme said:
I love Alice Cooper\'s Album \'School\'s Out\'. Always reminds me of leaving School.
Good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:51
nineteen ninety-five
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic look back to days of schools graduation and dying youth. Memories frozen in snapshots. A time of drugs and yet the year of graduation is not the end. It has a feeling of young life now gone but yet not. Well written my friend
June 17th, 2026 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic look back to days of schools graduation and dying youth. Memories frozen in snapshots. A time of drugs and yet the year of graduation is not the end. It has a feeling of young life now gone but yet not. Well written my friend
June 17th, 2026 13:45
nineteen ninety-five
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write on such complexities of youth.
June 17th, 2026 12:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great write on such complexities of youth.
June 17th, 2026 12:53
nineteen ninety-five
Teddy.15 said:
What an amazing piece of reflection, kudos on being so brave to post your young self... 🌹the madness of growing up. 💜
June 17th, 2026 12:23
Teddy.15 said:
What an amazing piece of reflection, kudos on being so brave to post your young self... 🌹the madness of growing up. 💜
June 17th, 2026 12:23
August 14, 1996
orchidee said:
The day you first heard of a Mr P. Solus and his team, and their antics?
Knitting, sabres, spinach, etc. What ARE we talking about? Ask WCAT which won\'t tell us anything! lol.
June 17th, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
The day you first heard of a Mr P. Solus and his team, and their antics?
Knitting, sabres, spinach, etc. What ARE we talking about? Ask WCAT which won\'t tell us anything! lol.
June 17th, 2026 02:16
August 14, 1996
arqios said:
That\'s close to 20 years ago now! Wow. Some memories are so etched.🕊️🙏
June 16th, 2026 20:41
arqios said:
That\'s close to 20 years ago now! Wow. Some memories are so etched.🕊️🙏
June 16th, 2026 20:41
August 14, 1996
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I love this, my Dad worked his hands to the bone to give us treats, I was 22 in 1996 I appreciate this so much, a lovely proud moment for a good kid and his father. 🌹
June 16th, 2026 10:52
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I love this, my Dad worked his hands to the bone to give us treats, I was 22 in 1996 I appreciate this so much, a lovely proud moment for a good kid and his father. 🌹
June 16th, 2026 10:52
August 14, 1996
sorenbarrett said:
Concerts are fun in and of themselves what took me in this write was the amusement park link. I remember well the times my family went to the amusement park (the best my working dad could afford). It was a minor Disney world that we as young kids could not tell the difference of. It brought back old memories and stoked the emotions as all good poems should. Well done my friend I particularly liked the rhyming short run:
\"jumbo the gumbo,
teletron telethon
through a carne’s
megatron.\"
A fave out of yesterday
June 16th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
Concerts are fun in and of themselves what took me in this write was the amusement park link. I remember well the times my family went to the amusement park (the best my working dad could afford). It was a minor Disney world that we as young kids could not tell the difference of. It brought back old memories and stoked the emotions as all good poems should. Well done my friend I particularly liked the rhyming short run:
\"jumbo the gumbo,
teletron telethon
through a carne’s
megatron.\"
A fave out of yesterday
June 16th, 2026 09:40
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