Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
capitol hill
Paul Bell said:
Just as well we live in a democracy where freedom allows you all sorts of freedom.
Okay, just got a text, seemingly free speech is last year democracy.
Heading for the hills as we speak.
August 11th, 2026 11:22
Paul Bell said:
Just as well we live in a democracy where freedom allows you all sorts of freedom.
Okay, just got a text, seemingly free speech is last year democracy.
Heading for the hills as we speak.
August 11th, 2026 11:22
capitol hill
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the war on freedom through lawmakers or rather those that tend to manipulate law
August 11th, 2026 10:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the war on freedom through lawmakers or rather those that tend to manipulate law
August 11th, 2026 10:14
capitol hill
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write my friend it flows downward and sinks into the brain as well as the earth. Sad how legislation can restrain liberty and kill freedom. Well written Tristan
August 11th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write my friend it flows downward and sinks into the brain as well as the earth. Sad how legislation can restrain liberty and kill freedom. Well written Tristan
August 11th, 2026 08:45
Dead Presidents
Thomas W Case said:
This is a sharp, irreverent walk through the graveyard of political ego, reminding every would-be great leader that history eventually strips the damn crown away. The wordplay and rapid-fire references keep it lively, but that final reversal—where the presidency ends up setting you—is the real gut punch.
August 11th, 2026 06:46
Thomas W Case said:
This is a sharp, irreverent walk through the graveyard of political ego, reminding every would-be great leader that history eventually strips the damn crown away. The wordplay and rapid-fire references keep it lively, but that final reversal—where the presidency ends up setting you—is the real gut punch.
August 11th, 2026 06:46
Dead Presidents
Nerd said:
It’s a new fear, to know that whoever will be chosen to be our president or higher up to control our country hoping for the good, but we always end up in the bad
A touching and relatable poem
And I like the part when the language changes for two lines
August 10th, 2026 20:07
Nerd said:
It’s a new fear, to know that whoever will be chosen to be our president or higher up to control our country hoping for the good, but we always end up in the bad
A touching and relatable poem
And I like the part when the language changes for two lines
August 10th, 2026 20:07
Dead Presidents
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep thoughtful write whose wisdom will doubtless be ignored by such presidents and kings etc
August 10th, 2026 11:21
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a deep thoughtful write whose wisdom will doubtless be ignored by such presidents and kings etc
August 10th, 2026 11:21
Dead Presidents
Paul Bell said:
Most of them want their time in history, good or bad.
Some will be remembered for great things.
But the ones they make films about are usually mass killers.
August 10th, 2026 11:08
Paul Bell said:
Most of them want their time in history, good or bad.
Some will be remembered for great things.
But the ones they make films about are usually mass killers.
August 10th, 2026 11:08
Dead Presidents
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Tristan. I used to be a fan of a few until I learned of their follies and sins now I think of them all as the ones in Point Break where the dead presidents were a rubber faced band of crooks although they were much more loveable than the real ones. Nicely written my friend
August 10th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Tristan. I used to be a fan of a few until I learned of their follies and sins now I think of them all as the ones in Point Break where the dead presidents were a rubber faced band of crooks although they were much more loveable than the real ones. Nicely written my friend
August 10th, 2026 10:31
Sunday Snakes
arqios said:
Funny that all through the human epochs, the prophetic voice has always been \'other.\' 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:19
arqios said:
Funny that all through the human epochs, the prophetic voice has always been \'other.\' 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:19
Sunday Snakes
cellinic said:
A serious and emotionally penned write. The meanings and mood are well conveyed and generally shared....
August 9th, 2026 22:43
cellinic said:
A serious and emotionally penned write. The meanings and mood are well conveyed and generally shared....
August 9th, 2026 22:43
The Middle-Finger Christ
NafisaSB said:
A poem worth reflecting upon for sure. 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:34
NafisaSB said:
A poem worth reflecting upon for sure. 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:34
Sunday Snakes
Thomas W Case said:
This one comes out swinging, with a jagged, almost apocalyptic fury aimed at religious hypocrisy and institutional power. The language feels deliberately abrasive and bloody, turning faith into a battlefield where damnation, villainy, and the prophetic voice collide.
August 9th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
This one comes out swinging, with a jagged, almost apocalyptic fury aimed at religious hypocrisy and institutional power. The language feels deliberately abrasive and bloody, turning faith into a battlefield where damnation, villainy, and the prophetic voice collide.
August 9th, 2026 07:45
Sunday Snakes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
Sunday Snakes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
Persons of Conviction
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Persons of Conviction
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
Persons of Conviction
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
Persons of Conviction
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Persons of Conviction
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
miracle man
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
miracle man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
miracle man
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
merciless
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
merciless
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
merciless
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
merciless
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
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