Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Popeye\'s Part
Doggerel Dave said:
In right proper limerick form you delivered the tale of my favourite boyhood hero... Glad I knew him as a boy.. adolescence was exhausting enough without the threat of Popeye\'s fate hanging over (or under) me...
Great fun, Tristan.
October 25th, 2025 08:01
Doggerel Dave said:
In right proper limerick form you delivered the tale of my favourite boyhood hero... Glad I knew him as a boy.. adolescence was exhausting enough without the threat of Popeye\'s fate hanging over (or under) me...
Great fun, Tristan.
October 25th, 2025 08:01
Popeye\'s Part
Friendship said:
😂You made my day!😂🤣 Your poem humorously exaggerates the silly consequences of eating spinach, as shown by Popeye, a sailor famous for gaining huge strength from spinach. It satirizes the idea that eating too much of one food can cause absurd results, ending with the funny and surprising loss of a \"private part.\'
October 25th, 2025 07:48
Friendship said:
😂You made my day!😂🤣 Your poem humorously exaggerates the silly consequences of eating spinach, as shown by Popeye, a sailor famous for gaining huge strength from spinach. It satirizes the idea that eating too much of one food can cause absurd results, ending with the funny and surprising loss of a \"private part.\'
October 25th, 2025 07:48
Heretic\'s Hymn
orchidee said:
Could sound a bit like a Bonfire Night hymn - ash effigies. I shall throw an effigy of ole Popeye on the bonfire! lol.
October 25th, 2025 02:30
orchidee said:
Could sound a bit like a Bonfire Night hymn - ash effigies. I shall throw an effigy of ole Popeye on the bonfire! lol.
October 25th, 2025 02:30
Heretic\'s Hymn
Doggerel Dave said:
The richness of relationships in all their complexity. You\'ve charted this in very short but telling measures, Tristan
October 24th, 2025 20:09
Doggerel Dave said:
The richness of relationships in all their complexity. You\'ve charted this in very short but telling measures, Tristan
October 24th, 2025 20:09
Heretic\'s Hymn
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend. Your poem revolves around the struggle for truth and love in the face of societal and institutional oppression. It highlights the tension between individual beliefs and traditional values, as well as the sacrifices made for the pursuit of authenticity and compassion. The subject matter touches on themes of tribulation, social justice, and the quest for belonging and acceptance, particularly for marginalized individuals.
October 24th, 2025 13:56
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend. Your poem revolves around the struggle for truth and love in the face of societal and institutional oppression. It highlights the tension between individual beliefs and traditional values, as well as the sacrifices made for the pursuit of authenticity and compassion. The subject matter touches on themes of tribulation, social justice, and the quest for belonging and acceptance, particularly for marginalized individuals.
October 24th, 2025 13:56
Heretic\'s Hymn
Poetic Licence said:
I am loving that, that intro on the music has touches of Pink Floyd to it, you are a talented person, have a great weekend
October 24th, 2025 13:56
Poetic Licence said:
I am loving that, that intro on the music has touches of Pink Floyd to it, you are a talented person, have a great weekend
October 24th, 2025 13:56
Heretic\'s Hymn
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In me, you have found another follower. A fave.
October 24th, 2025 09:06
rebellion_in_sanity said:
In me, you have found another follower. A fave.
October 24th, 2025 09:06
Heretic\'s Hymn
sorenbarrett said:
Defying tradition has its price as does beliefs that run counter to the norm. Those that hold them are often will to pay that price. Nicely written Tristan
October 24th, 2025 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
Defying tradition has its price as does beliefs that run counter to the norm. Those that hold them are often will to pay that price. Nicely written Tristan
October 24th, 2025 08:41
ghosted
Doggerel Dave said:
🥲Tristan - much as I like much of your work, I\'m leaving this one alone...I\'m out of my depth...
October 24th, 2025 02:13
Doggerel Dave said:
🥲Tristan - much as I like much of your work, I\'m leaving this one alone...I\'m out of my depth...
October 24th, 2025 02:13
By the Wayside
NafisaSB said:
it is so true that apathy has set in, and the little baby bear is left to wallow in its misery - serving only as a wayside interlude for many who pass by - sad state of affairs indeed - why can\'t someone call the SPCA and save the little creature is beyond my comprehension
October 24th, 2025 01:07
NafisaSB said:
it is so true that apathy has set in, and the little baby bear is left to wallow in its misery - serving only as a wayside interlude for many who pass by - sad state of affairs indeed - why can\'t someone call the SPCA and save the little creature is beyond my comprehension
October 24th, 2025 01:07
ghosted
Neville said:
If there\'s no point in trying to hide behind it anymore and for whatever reason or reasons .. i think it best to jot it down sharpish so as to prevent loosing it .. or it becoming diluted over time .. that way, reading between the lines stands less chance of getting or being corrupted by individual interpretations and or perceptions .. the narrative has amazing flow and is quite literally mind blowing .. I see both a mask and a skull .. it feels like the narrator/poet/artist has both asked and also provided the answers to the questions posed or otherwise arising from said visit .. and that takes some bloomin doing .. Neville 🎭💀😎🐦⬛🖤🐧🐈⬛⚫💀🎭⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
October 23rd, 2025 23:52
Neville said:
If there\'s no point in trying to hide behind it anymore and for whatever reason or reasons .. i think it best to jot it down sharpish so as to prevent loosing it .. or it becoming diluted over time .. that way, reading between the lines stands less chance of getting or being corrupted by individual interpretations and or perceptions .. the narrative has amazing flow and is quite literally mind blowing .. I see both a mask and a skull .. it feels like the narrator/poet/artist has both asked and also provided the answers to the questions posed or otherwise arising from said visit .. and that takes some bloomin doing .. Neville 🎭💀😎🐦⬛🖤🐧🐈⬛⚫💀🎭⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
October 23rd, 2025 23:52
ghosted
Poetic Licence said:
This felt to me having a conversation with ones self, but stripping out all the layers of protection built up over the years,like the mask, to try to get an understanding of who we really are , what events happened along the way to makes us who we are today. Possibly breaking down memory barriers that have been there since childhood, very complex and intriguing write. I feel there is so much more to this than I will probably understand, enjoyed the read
October 23rd, 2025 19:39
Poetic Licence said:
This felt to me having a conversation with ones self, but stripping out all the layers of protection built up over the years,like the mask, to try to get an understanding of who we really are , what events happened along the way to makes us who we are today. Possibly breaking down memory barriers that have been there since childhood, very complex and intriguing write. I feel there is so much more to this than I will probably understand, enjoyed the read
October 23rd, 2025 19:39
ghosted
Paul Bell said:
The one that gets the plaudits, and the ones that did the work.
It\'s like the film edits at the end where the words, \'\'others\'\' come at the end and in a way they\'re marginalised into nothing.
Some will say that\'s life, but it still leaves an imprint.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
Paul Bell said:
The one that gets the plaudits, and the ones that did the work.
It\'s like the film edits at the end where the words, \'\'others\'\' come at the end and in a way they\'re marginalised into nothing.
Some will say that\'s life, but it still leaves an imprint.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
ghosted
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the image of a mask maybe a ghost that appears in the text referring to the relationship. A painting like the text refers to. Relationships are complex as is this poem and at times over time become ghosts or just pictures like a painting that one looks at and from different perspectives different focuses see different things. Well done.
October 23rd, 2025 12:11
sorenbarrett said:
Here is the image of a mask maybe a ghost that appears in the text referring to the relationship. A painting like the text refers to. Relationships are complex as is this poem and at times over time become ghosts or just pictures like a painting that one looks at and from different perspectives different focuses see different things. Well done.
October 23rd, 2025 12:11
ghosted
orchidee said:
Should it be \'ghosted\' in the title?! Erm, the title \'ghotsted\' - Popeye said it sounds a bit like \'glug-glugged\'. He would say that! lol.
And - good write - and all that too, wot Friendship said!
How can I understand anything cryptic with Popeye always buzzing in me ears, nattering about spinach, etc?!
October 23rd, 2025 11:46
orchidee said:
Should it be \'ghosted\' in the title?! Erm, the title \'ghotsted\' - Popeye said it sounds a bit like \'glug-glugged\'. He would say that! lol.
And - good write - and all that too, wot Friendship said!
How can I understand anything cryptic with Popeye always buzzing in me ears, nattering about spinach, etc?!
October 23rd, 2025 11:46
ghosted
Friendship said:
Your writing was somewhat perplexing today, it presented quite a challenge for me. The poem seems to serve as a cathartic exploration of the speaker’s feelings regarding their relationship, addressing both the beauty of shared experiences and the pain of feeling like an outsider in their own life narrative. The act of remembering and reflecting is an attempt to reconcile those feelings and to understand the evolution of love.🤔👍❤️
October 23rd, 2025 11:28
Friendship said:
Your writing was somewhat perplexing today, it presented quite a challenge for me. The poem seems to serve as a cathartic exploration of the speaker’s feelings regarding their relationship, addressing both the beauty of shared experiences and the pain of feeling like an outsider in their own life narrative. The act of remembering and reflecting is an attempt to reconcile those feelings and to understand the evolution of love.🤔👍❤️
October 23rd, 2025 11:28
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, this is so dark and brilliantly written I could feel a Novel of books here, I\'m thinking your fave moment is arriving Halloween 🤣 I may just have nightmares watching your imagery. Superb as always. 🌹
October 23rd, 2025 00:35
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, this is so dark and brilliantly written I could feel a Novel of books here, I\'m thinking your fave moment is arriving Halloween 🤣 I may just have nightmares watching your imagery. Superb as always. 🌹
October 23rd, 2025 00:35
The Theatre of Dying Light
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan you took the time to write something so effortlessly beautiful and it’s very well written. Definite inspirational words and work of art here 🥂🥂🥂❤️🤴
October 22nd, 2025 13:59
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan you took the time to write something so effortlessly beautiful and it’s very well written. Definite inspirational words and work of art here 🥂🥂🥂❤️🤴
October 22nd, 2025 13:59
The Theatre of Dying Light
Doggerel Dave said:
Too late now - I\'m coming back for a reread tomorrow, Tristan.
October 22nd, 2025 10:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Too late now - I\'m coming back for a reread tomorrow, Tristan.
October 22nd, 2025 10:16
The Theatre of Dying Light
orchidee said:
Good write T. I know The Theatre of Popeye. Oh, what themes do they have? What sort of plays? people ask us. We can\'t answer that, except to say there is always the theme of spinach included! lol :)
October 22nd, 2025 10:15
orchidee said:
Good write T. I know The Theatre of Popeye. Oh, what themes do they have? What sort of plays? people ask us. We can\'t answer that, except to say there is always the theme of spinach included! lol :)
October 22nd, 2025 10:15
The Theatre of Dying Light
sorenbarrett said:
Like acts in a play stages of mood also end and begin. A poem with many levels of metaphor. It is nicely broken into five acts and as a play speaks the the voice of one view, as a metaphor with another. Well done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Like acts in a play stages of mood also end and begin. A poem with many levels of metaphor. It is nicely broken into five acts and as a play speaks the the voice of one view, as a metaphor with another. Well done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:47
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Salvia.S said:
This is powerful and haunting, with vivid imagery and a thought-provoking narrative that lingers long after reading. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave❤️
October 22nd, 2025 08:45
Salvia.S said:
This is powerful and haunting, with vivid imagery and a thought-provoking narrative that lingers long after reading. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave❤️
October 22nd, 2025 08:45
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Paul Bell said:
Death in the night and the legend is born.
If the natives have beliefs, you just know the perpetrator is going to exploit them.
Horses in the night always does it for me.
October 21st, 2025 14:14
Paul Bell said:
Death in the night and the legend is born.
If the natives have beliefs, you just know the perpetrator is going to exploit them.
Horses in the night always does it for me.
October 21st, 2025 14:14
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Neville said:
Jeez .. I sure hope you could de-role & had a full debriefing after playing this out .. I know I plan on sleeping with the light on & under the mattress until after All Hallows .. Keep em coming tho\' brother T .. as long as you can do that I\'ll be here 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🖤🐈⬛👍
October 21st, 2025 13:00
Neville said:
Jeez .. I sure hope you could de-role & had a full debriefing after playing this out .. I know I plan on sleeping with the light on & under the mattress until after All Hallows .. Keep em coming tho\' brother T .. as long as you can do that I\'ll be here 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🖤🐈⬛👍
October 21st, 2025 13:00
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
NinjaGirl said:
I love this perspective! Well done!
October 20th, 2025 21:07
NinjaGirl said:
I love this perspective! Well done!
October 20th, 2025 21:07
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond the particularities Tristan, the atmosphere of almost constant terror is clearly portrayed.
PS: No chance of you cheering up this side of Halloween........is there?
October 20th, 2025 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond the particularities Tristan, the atmosphere of almost constant terror is clearly portrayed.
PS: No chance of you cheering up this side of Halloween........is there?
October 20th, 2025 19:19
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend,your poem explores the haunting legacy of colonial violence and the struggle for justice against oppressive forces. It reflects on the cyclical nature of violence and the impact of history on present-day communities, particularly through the lens of Indigenous experiences in the face of settler colonialism.
October 20th, 2025 17:31
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend,your poem explores the haunting legacy of colonial violence and the struggle for justice against oppressive forces. It reflects on the cyclical nature of violence and the impact of history on present-day communities, particularly through the lens of Indigenous experiences in the face of settler colonialism.
October 20th, 2025 17:31
Devilishly Dreadful: Secrets Gallop
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly tail explained and revealed in this poetic write. Another timely poem for the season. Nicely done Tristan
October 20th, 2025 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
A ghostly tail explained and revealed in this poetic write. Another timely poem for the season. Nicely done Tristan
October 20th, 2025 10:55
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