Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



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NafisaSB said:

it is good to know you and few others have the courage to stand up and call out the duplicity of those in power - who call out, and then condemn those who answer...a great write

June 8th, 2026 23:54

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David Wakeling said:

Oh I know the feeling only to well.I suspect it is the reason we write poetry.A clever write

June 8th, 2026 18:37

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sorenbarrett said:

So short and yet if one listens the words tell the story. Is anyone listening. I sometimes as this as well even when there are many that read the poem, is anyone listening? Very nice Tristan

June 8th, 2026 12:57

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, enjoyed my friend

June 8th, 2026 09:08

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orchidee said:

Does Popeye says any words, or only glugs?! lol.

June 8th, 2026 08:59

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Lorenz said:

I sense a musical maze made of tangled words !

June 8th, 2026 08:57

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David Wakeling said:

Okay.Every line here needs a comment. There is so much here amigo that is so true.Justice never seems to be carried out down to letting the lamb go to slaughter.An amazing poem that puts all this together.For me the innocent suffer along with the guilty

June 7th, 2026 18:31

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Teddy.15 said:

Marvelous poetry and as I\'m a resident Libra ⚖️ just is one of my pet hates when there isn\'t any. Powerful and provocative 🌹

June 7th, 2026 14:31

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orchidee said:

Good write T. Popeye was called on to give an account of his glugging, btu he never turned up! lol.

June 7th, 2026 09:59

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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:

You never fail to intrigue the reader! Wonderful write!

June 7th, 2026 09:16

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Paul Bell said:

You\'re as good as your lawyer. Yes, his body entered the knife my cliant was holding, five times resulting in his death. Clear cut.
If history tells you anything, it\'s lead from the back, that way you don\'t get stabbed.


June 7th, 2026 08:11

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arqios said:

Powerful expression, friend 🕊️🙏🏻

June 7th, 2026 07:28

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Thomas W Case said:

There’s a stern clarity here—like you’re naming the pattern without flinching from it.

Feels like a warning carved in stone… that we see it, and still choose it anyway.

June 7th, 2026 06:53

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sorenbarrett said:

Joan of arc a name well know become a symbol of courage and spirituality that didn\'t end well. Well written my friend with nuances toward judgements made by power mongers and those that professed piety but whose eyes were set on worldly riches and domination. Well written and a fave

June 7th, 2026 06:43

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

excellent write my friend

June 7th, 2026 06:41

Cream, Chocolate, and Cherries
teardrop said:

This put a smile on my face. Love you wording, the meaning and the mtaphors.

June 7th, 2026 05:19

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Teddy.15 said:

lol your having a comedy hour my friend, ere move over, I\'ve got a banana split 🤣

June 6th, 2026 16:57

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Katie B. said:

I always enjoy your work! Well done!

June 6th, 2026 14:16

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Paul Bell said:

Who wouldn\'t want to die in a vat of chocolate.
In saying that, it\'s got to be milk chocolate.

June 6th, 2026 11:55

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orchidee said:

Good write T. I\'m back - unless another blip cuts me off again. It\'s a glug really, I bet. We know. Mr P Solus & Co. lol.

June 6th, 2026 11:23

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2781 said:

I don\'t mind ice cream after a bowl or two.

June 6th, 2026 10:18

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

lovely write

June 6th, 2026 08:38

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sorenbarrett said:

Here the sky is made into a dessert feast surreal of not is make my mouth water. Delicious Tristan both as a poem and something to eat. Mine today is somewhat similar.

June 6th, 2026 08:12

o, stuff it, shall you?
David Wakeling said:

This is a timely community message.So many pubs around.So many drivers come out of the pub drunk.It is a real problem.My own father was drunk and killed someones dog.He only knew about it when he found blood on the front bumper bar. A clever necessary poem comrade

June 5th, 2026 18:26

o, stuff it, shall you?
Teddy.15 said:

lol I used to eat my tuna sandwich whilst driving round London, life was fast. A great write which is great satire I say stuff it in, but always with two eyes on the road. 🌹

June 5th, 2026 15:36

o, stuff it, shall you?
Teddy.15 said:

At first I thought this was playful, but after a second read it\'s the cell phones here, they stick them up to their mouths to use vocal Wasaap now. I was taught to keep two hands on the wheel. 💜

June 5th, 2026 15:34

o, stuff it, shall you?
Teddy.15 said:

lol I used to eat my tuna sandwich all the time whilst driving around London 🤣 yes stuff it in lol oh you are very entertaining my dear Tristan. 💜

June 5th, 2026 15:31

o, stuff it, shall you?
Paul Bell said:

I like the last bit of getting pulled over, and I hope she\'s hot.
Car drivers keep the country running with the amount of fines they pay.
Mind you, the ones that drive on the motorways at 20 mph, what are they doing.

June 5th, 2026 10:35

o, stuff it, shall you?
orchidee said:

On the road, a mysterious sound - a glug..... lol.

June 5th, 2026 10:19

o, stuff it, shall you?
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a much ignored piece of advise well written

June 5th, 2026 07:53

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