Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Pixie Parley
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Loved the power of this, a fav
October 23rd, 2026 11:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Loved the power of this, a fav
October 23rd, 2026 11:33
Pixie Parley
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message here of being active in morality not passive. So nicely put in personified and metaphoric terms it makes so much more forceful a statement. Loved it a fave my friend
October 23rd, 2026 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful message here of being active in morality not passive. So nicely put in personified and metaphoric terms it makes so much more forceful a statement. Loved it a fave my friend
October 23rd, 2026 11:24
the waning
Kevin Hulme said:
My Interpretation of this Poem is the Darkened Season of Autumn and Winter . And the Sun Waneing so soon. May be Wrong.
October 22nd, 2026 15:37
Kevin Hulme said:
My Interpretation of this Poem is the Darkened Season of Autumn and Winter . And the Sun Waneing so soon. May be Wrong.
October 22nd, 2026 15:37
the waning
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem deals with mental anguish, betrayal of self (as indicated by \"treason\"), and the lingering pain that follows. The imagery of wounds and seepage conveys a sense of raw vulnerability and a struggle to find clarity amidst emotional chaos.
October 22nd, 2026 10:08
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem deals with mental anguish, betrayal of self (as indicated by \"treason\"), and the lingering pain that follows. The imagery of wounds and seepage conveys a sense of raw vulnerability and a struggle to find clarity amidst emotional chaos.
October 22nd, 2026 10:08
the waning
Novaselic said:
tbh the way I see it is that it’s a pain that could continue if the wound is left untreated or being able to heal the mind with guidance, to teach its value again. overall well done :))
October 22nd, 2026 09:56
Novaselic said:
tbh the way I see it is that it’s a pain that could continue if the wound is left untreated or being able to heal the mind with guidance, to teach its value again. overall well done :))
October 22nd, 2026 09:56
the waning
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan this one tied my mind in a knot to figure out the spot but it could not for with confusion it was wrote. A fun read my friend that my mind did bend.
October 22nd, 2026 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan this one tied my mind in a knot to figure out the spot but it could not for with confusion it was wrote. A fun read my friend that my mind did bend.
October 22nd, 2026 09:30
the waning
orchidee said:
Good write T. Nothing waning or decreasing about, erm, spinach, knitting, and sabres. Why that odd combination? WCAT!! lol.
October 22nd, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
Good write T. Nothing waning or decreasing about, erm, spinach, knitting, and sabres. Why that odd combination? WCAT!! lol.
October 22nd, 2026 09:17
karen and ken
sorenbarrett said:
Poor women named Karen and maybe so for men named Ken none the less there seem to be too many of them about and yes as your poem points out Karen\'s think themselves beautiful and without fault bound to criticize all about them while Ken\'s and the MAGOTs the Arian race and neo-Nazis that feel they have been neglected and left out of the politically correct world. What a dance Cha-cha indeed they would have a fit that dance is Latin and that they are against.
October 21st, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
Poor women named Karen and maybe so for men named Ken none the less there seem to be too many of them about and yes as your poem points out Karen\'s think themselves beautiful and without fault bound to criticize all about them while Ken\'s and the MAGOTs the Arian race and neo-Nazis that feel they have been neglected and left out of the politically correct world. What a dance Cha-cha indeed they would have a fit that dance is Latin and that they are against.
October 21st, 2026 11:34
karen and ken
orchidee said:
I thought it was Monday with that macabre picture! lol. A bit like two beached whales. heehee.
October 21st, 2026 09:06
orchidee said:
I thought it was Monday with that macabre picture! lol. A bit like two beached whales. heehee.
October 21st, 2026 09:06
karen and ken
Paul Bell said:
Every Karen deserves a Ken.
Fate just draws them together, and the world is a better place.
Slight mistake there.
Fate just draws them together, and their world is a better place.
October 21st, 2026 07:40
Paul Bell said:
Every Karen deserves a Ken.
Fate just draws them together, and the world is a better place.
Slight mistake there.
Fate just draws them together, and their world is a better place.
October 21st, 2026 07:40
karen and ken
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most charming piece my friend
October 21st, 2026 07:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most charming piece my friend
October 21st, 2026 07:38
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
Friendship said:
Very well written, your statement addresses issues of visibility, the struggle for acceptance, and the often grim realities faced by those in the LGBTQ+ community, particularly in a heteronormative and phobic environment.
October 20th, 2026 19:22
Friendship said:
Very well written, your statement addresses issues of visibility, the struggle for acceptance, and the often grim realities faced by those in the LGBTQ+ community, particularly in a heteronormative and phobic environment.
October 20th, 2026 19:22
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most deep and yet delightfully open piece my friend, many roads does it lead
October 20th, 2026 13:06
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most deep and yet delightfully open piece my friend, many roads does it lead
October 20th, 2026 13:06
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you could ask sorrenbarrets pussy? LoL I love the queen\'s they\'ve usually got more style and glamour than they know!
October 20th, 2026 10:57
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you could ask sorrenbarrets pussy? LoL I love the queen\'s they\'ve usually got more style and glamour than they know!
October 20th, 2026 10:57
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
sorenbarrett said:
A most entangled mind twisting write. On the surface it seemed straight (well maybe not) Anyway the mention of Queen brought Freddy to mind and he was gay was he not (yes in his music and performance as well as sexuality) Then there was Freddy of the film (Well the other Freddy had a film as well) I mean the one from Elm Street, the steel fingered fellow. Both were disposable creative commodities but one died young and the other was preserved burned. A fun mind tangling write anyway my friend and the confusion of names like wordplay gets a fave
October 20th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most entangled mind twisting write. On the surface it seemed straight (well maybe not) Anyway the mention of Queen brought Freddy to mind and he was gay was he not (yes in his music and performance as well as sexuality) Then there was Freddy of the film (Well the other Freddy had a film as well) I mean the one from Elm Street, the steel fingered fellow. Both were disposable creative commodities but one died young and the other was preserved burned. A fun mind tangling write anyway my friend and the confusion of names like wordplay gets a fave
October 20th, 2026 10:26
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oh no, not Mondays! lol.
October 20th, 2026 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oh no, not Mondays! lol.
October 20th, 2026 10:24
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Political thugs from the top down, encouraging thuggish behaviour. It is no wonder the bedrooms of teenagers have become war rooms and the streets the battlefields of rage. Great stuff from you, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Political thugs from the top down, encouraging thuggish behaviour. It is no wonder the bedrooms of teenagers have become war rooms and the streets the battlefields of rage. Great stuff from you, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:43
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Gritty and sharp.
October 20th, 2026 06:33
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Gritty and sharp.
October 20th, 2026 06:33
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
Jabberwocky said:
\"Noone can sell god their self righteousness\". Powerful line, that was one of my sins when I was older than I am now.
October 20th, 2026 04:02
Jabberwocky said:
\"Noone can sell god their self righteousness\". Powerful line, that was one of my sins when I was older than I am now.
October 20th, 2026 04:02
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
orchidee said:
Doh! I knew I\'d be scared on Mondays! But more scarier surely is the sound of glugs. Your next poem: \'The Ghastly Glugs\'? lol.
Along I came and took the edge off anything scary, horrific, ghastly, by making some daft comment or suggestion. lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:42
orchidee said:
Doh! I knew I\'d be scared on Mondays! But more scarier surely is the sound of glugs. Your next poem: \'The Ghastly Glugs\'? lol.
Along I came and took the edge off anything scary, horrific, ghastly, by making some daft comment or suggestion. lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:42
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 13 year old son and you have just put into perspective the world we live in, my son has been immensely educated on phone use and doesn\'t have any social network but these people get into every nook and cranny and your words are so powerful, you really have an eye opening poem here .thank you dear Tristan and I thank you as a mother. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 14:51
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 13 year old son and you have just put into perspective the world we live in, my son has been immensely educated on phone use and doesn\'t have any social network but these people get into every nook and cranny and your words are so powerful, you really have an eye opening poem here .thank you dear Tristan and I thank you as a mother. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 14:51
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered how far power\'s manipulation goes. This poem speaks of an administration now hated for its arrogance, stupidity and blunders. Could it be that the opposition planed this to gain as power again as a reaction to form a one world order over running borders destabilizing the old order and establishing a new order. Creepy thoughts when all is unknown.
October 19th, 2026 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered how far power\'s manipulation goes. This poem speaks of an administration now hated for its arrogance, stupidity and blunders. Could it be that the opposition planed this to gain as power again as a reaction to form a one world order over running borders destabilizing the old order and establishing a new order. Creepy thoughts when all is unknown.
October 19th, 2026 07:34
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
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