Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Third Baptism
David Wakeling said:
Okay so dark thoughts going on here.So deep and important.Very cleverly written
May 24th, 2026 18:18
David Wakeling said:
Okay so dark thoughts going on here.So deep and important.Very cleverly written
May 24th, 2026 18:18
The Third Baptism
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the idea that true freedom in Christ cannot be achieved by coercive or manipulative means in the context of religious conversion.
May 24th, 2026 16:38
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the idea that true freedom in Christ cannot be achieved by coercive or manipulative means in the context of religious conversion.
May 24th, 2026 16:38
The Third Baptism
sorenbarrett said:
Forcing a square peg into a round hole is never advisable. Trying to make a sober man out of an unwilling drunkard does not work. Forcing the mind even by sword is a false conversion. Well written Tristan
May 24th, 2026 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Forcing a square peg into a round hole is never advisable. Trying to make a sober man out of an unwilling drunkard does not work. Forcing the mind even by sword is a false conversion. Well written Tristan
May 24th, 2026 10:21
The Third Baptism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, and a meaningful message
May 24th, 2026 09:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, and a meaningful message
May 24th, 2026 09:51
The Third Baptism
orchidee said:
And now Popeye\'s book \'The baptism of spinach\' - whatever that means?! lol.
May 24th, 2026 09:30
orchidee said:
And now Popeye\'s book \'The baptism of spinach\' - whatever that means?! lol.
May 24th, 2026 09:30
The Third Baptism
arqios said:
Not the cat, one can surmise. Many a false conversation result from that systemic coercion. Powerful stuff, Tittu 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
Not the cat, one can surmise. Many a false conversation result from that systemic coercion. Powerful stuff, Tittu 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2026 08:25
The Recipe
David Wakeling said:
Time to send out for take away this political meal may be to strong for some. A powerful thoughtful piece, Got me thinking
May 23rd, 2026 18:21
David Wakeling said:
Time to send out for take away this political meal may be to strong for some. A powerful thoughtful piece, Got me thinking
May 23rd, 2026 18:21
The Recipe
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye has the recipe for spinach pie. lol.
May 23rd, 2026 12:00
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye has the recipe for spinach pie. lol.
May 23rd, 2026 12:00
The Recipe
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in metaphor and wording it is a satirical recipe for a food that I am allergic to and can\'t stomach. It makes me ill (not the poem the recipe) A fave my friend
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in metaphor and wording it is a satirical recipe for a food that I am allergic to and can\'t stomach. It makes me ill (not the poem the recipe) A fave my friend
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
The Recipe
Friendship said:
This was hard for me today. I am going to try! Your poem \"Cancel culture casserole\" explores cancel culture as a form of social oppression. The poet uses the metaphor of cooking to illustrate how misinformation and suppression of dissenting opinions create a toxic societal environment.
May 23rd, 2026 08:59
Friendship said:
This was hard for me today. I am going to try! Your poem \"Cancel culture casserole\" explores cancel culture as a form of social oppression. The poet uses the metaphor of cooking to illustrate how misinformation and suppression of dissenting opinions create a toxic societal environment.
May 23rd, 2026 08:59
The Recipe
arqios said:
650 Kelvinn more like! In today\'s language in the end, we are all cooked 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
650 Kelvinn more like! In today\'s language in the end, we are all cooked 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:25
lamb of god
orchidee said:
And spinach with everything, says the glugging one! lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
And spinach with everything, says the glugging one! lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:22
lamb of god
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark tone, may I say well done. On the other hand it is rare where I have been guilty of roasting it. Maybe overdone. A rack of lamb old scratch would love. I personally love lamb chops myself, but then I have been called the devil many times. A wonderful play on words here my friend a fave
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark tone, may I say well done. On the other hand it is rare where I have been guilty of roasting it. Maybe overdone. A rack of lamb old scratch would love. I personally love lamb chops myself, but then I have been called the devil many times. A wonderful play on words here my friend a fave
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
Shifting Spring
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful and emotional dialogue here.Very moving mi amigo.Enjoyable read with teh fish alive again
May 21st, 2026 19:23
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful and emotional dialogue here.Very moving mi amigo.Enjoyable read with teh fish alive again
May 21st, 2026 19:23
Shifting Spring
arqios said:
Somehow, I saw a valise that is handed down and taken along the long vale of life\'s lows and turns, keeping us company when we are most alone... sort of like Mr. Bean\'s Teddy, bringing it all to some manageable perspective. The bigger the feelings the bigger the valise becomes, like size-changing Alice as she negotiates the dreamworld. But I am going off tangent now. The artwork on this at insta is excruciatingly communicative. 🙏🕊️❄️🩺
May 21st, 2026 17:11
arqios said:
Somehow, I saw a valise that is handed down and taken along the long vale of life\'s lows and turns, keeping us company when we are most alone... sort of like Mr. Bean\'s Teddy, bringing it all to some manageable perspective. The bigger the feelings the bigger the valise becomes, like size-changing Alice as she negotiates the dreamworld. But I am going off tangent now. The artwork on this at insta is excruciatingly communicative. 🙏🕊️❄️🩺
May 21st, 2026 17:11
Shifting Spring
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s alive of course - we hear the glugs! lol.
May 21st, 2026 12:50
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s alive of course - we hear the glugs! lol.
May 21st, 2026 12:50
Shifting Spring
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a strong and poignant message
May 21st, 2026 11:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a strong and poignant message
May 21st, 2026 11:02
Shifting Spring
Katie B. said:
Moving and powerful. Resonates with me. Well done!
May 21st, 2026 08:46
Katie B. said:
Moving and powerful. Resonates with me. Well done!
May 21st, 2026 08:46
Shifting Spring
2781 said:
My daughters first pet was a fish.
She was very young and told me the fish jumped out of the tank!
It looked dead, but I told her to pray for it and put it back.
The fish survived.
May 21st, 2026 08:25
2781 said:
My daughters first pet was a fish.
She was very young and told me the fish jumped out of the tank!
It looked dead, but I told her to pray for it and put it back.
The fish survived.
May 21st, 2026 08:25
Shifting Spring
sorenbarrett said:
Grandma to fish winter to another season the world is a cycle. Wait long enough and it happens again and we call it a miracle. A lovely write my friend deep with meaning
May 21st, 2026 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Grandma to fish winter to another season the world is a cycle. Wait long enough and it happens again and we call it a miracle. A lovely write my friend deep with meaning
May 21st, 2026 08:18
Holy State
Neville said:
I bet you feel a whole lot better having just spit that out .. I am now of the conclusion toxicity contaminates .. ▪️◾◼️⬛⚫🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤💣🍊💩👎
May 21st, 2026 02:38
Neville said:
I bet you feel a whole lot better having just spit that out .. I am now of the conclusion toxicity contaminates .. ▪️◾◼️⬛⚫🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤💣🍊💩👎
May 21st, 2026 02:38
Holy State
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess the state believes it\'s holy. How else could it live with itself?
May 20th, 2026 20:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
I guess the state believes it\'s holy. How else could it live with itself?
May 20th, 2026 20:33
Holy State
marissa said:
This describes exactly what the anger stage of grief feels like.
May 20th, 2026 19:31
marissa said:
This describes exactly what the anger stage of grief feels like.
May 20th, 2026 19:31
Holy State
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling only too well. A clever piece with gifted rhymes .I enjoyed reading
May 20th, 2026 18:35
David Wakeling said:
I know the feeling only too well. A clever piece with gifted rhymes .I enjoyed reading
May 20th, 2026 18:35
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