Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
riverbeds
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
riverbeds
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
riverbeds
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
riverbeds
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
riverbeds
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
riverbeds
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
riverbeds
LP2187 said:
Wow, such a haunting and emotional poem. It really stood out to me as I still struggle with that. Thanks for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 09:25
LP2187 said:
Wow, such a haunting and emotional poem. It really stood out to me as I still struggle with that. Thanks for sharing.
January 18th, 2025 09:25
Passion\'s Paradox
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Passion\'s Paradox
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
Passion\'s Paradox
arqios said:
Even here there is a divide like gulfs that clash but never consummate, so near and yet so far! Brillig 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 17th, 2025 18:18
arqios said:
Even here there is a divide like gulfs that clash but never consummate, so near and yet so far! Brillig 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 17th, 2025 18:18
Passion\'s Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
Passion\'s Paradox
LP2187 said:
I probably shouldn\'t read this as it\'s 18+ but it was too striking to ignore. A haunting and powerful poem, nice read.
January 17th, 2025 12:17
LP2187 said:
I probably shouldn\'t read this as it\'s 18+ but it was too striking to ignore. A haunting and powerful poem, nice read.
January 17th, 2025 12:17
Passion\'s Paradox
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
Passion\'s Paradox
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
The House at Demon\'s Alley
LP2187 said:
The horror of an adventure goes wrong... A really effective poem which was so compelling and unsettling, I enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2025 14:42
LP2187 said:
The horror of an adventure goes wrong... A really effective poem which was so compelling and unsettling, I enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2025 14:42
The House at Demon\'s Alley
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
The House at Demon\'s Alley
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
The Sound of Rain
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
The Sound of Rain
Thad Wilk said:
A very powerful
and poignant poem
of this graveyard of tears.. 😢
Hauntingly vivid imagery,
a superb read indeed!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 15th, 2025 23:06
Thad Wilk said:
A very powerful
and poignant poem
of this graveyard of tears.. 😢
Hauntingly vivid imagery,
a superb read indeed!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 15th, 2025 23:06
The Sound of Rain
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! C.S. Lewis\' white witch Jaedis has been passing through, leaving a veritable graveyard in her cold wake, no Dirgory nor his companion Polly able to break the spell, Tumnus and Lucy but characters in a story since neglected, despite the awful stickiness of--. Which is why we knew twas so. Eloquently rendered with heartbreaking poignancy and exquisite imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! C.S. Lewis\' white witch Jaedis has been passing through, leaving a veritable graveyard in her cold wake, no Dirgory nor his companion Polly able to break the spell, Tumnus and Lucy but characters in a story since neglected, despite the awful stickiness of--. Which is why we knew twas so. Eloquently rendered with heartbreaking poignancy and exquisite imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:10
The Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention of it. Nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention of it. Nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:25
The Sound of Rain
arqios said:
It’s almost like I am there! Visited the graveyard in the rain as well as attended an interment also in the rain and once in the snow. But it could also be the features of a graveyard statue in a downpour. Very visually potent. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 15th, 2025 07:43
arqios said:
It’s almost like I am there! Visited the graveyard in the rain as well as attended an interment also in the rain and once in the snow. But it could also be the features of a graveyard statue in a downpour. Very visually potent. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 15th, 2025 07:43
Closed Open in Bloom
Dan Williams said:
Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
January 15th, 2025 02:03
Dan Williams said:
Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
January 15th, 2025 02:03
Closed Open in Bloom
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem love
the form;
the rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 🤩
A very touching piece
thanks for sharing I
just loved it so!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:53
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem love
the form;
the rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 🤩
A very touching piece
thanks for sharing I
just loved it so!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:53
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