Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
learning to linger
Poetic Dan said:
Loved this but I\'ll ment abide by anything I don\'t want to do! Always put up a fight. Harmony comes when no feelings are hidden. Inspirational stuff 👏
May 5th, 2026 14:36
Poetic Dan said:
Loved this but I\'ll ment abide by anything I don\'t want to do! Always put up a fight. Harmony comes when no feelings are hidden. Inspirational stuff 👏
May 5th, 2026 14:36
learning to linger
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant title mate & what tagged along behind wasn\'t that far behind at all .. 🐦⬛🖤😎👍
May 5th, 2026 12:20
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant title mate & what tagged along behind wasn\'t that far behind at all .. 🐦⬛🖤😎👍
May 5th, 2026 12:20
learning to linger
Teddy.15 said:
Escaping ones self hard to do it\'s like chasing your tail! Lovely poetry. 🌹
May 5th, 2026 10:42
Teddy.15 said:
Escaping ones self hard to do it\'s like chasing your tail! Lovely poetry. 🌹
May 5th, 2026 10:42
learning to linger
Salvia.S said:
Form\'s tight and the heart\'s tighter. This one\'s staying with me. Beautifully written dearest Tittu ❤️!!! You said a lot in 8 lines!!! A fave 🌹
May 5th, 2026 09:47
Salvia.S said:
Form\'s tight and the heart\'s tighter. This one\'s staying with me. Beautifully written dearest Tittu ❤️!!! You said a lot in 8 lines!!! A fave 🌹
May 5th, 2026 09:47
learning to linger
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t we all need to learn this living amidst stress everyday. Well written my friend
May 5th, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t we all need to learn this living amidst stress everyday. Well written my friend
May 5th, 2026 09:37
learning to linger
orchidee said:
I thought this would be summat like: A lingering sound, ominous, terrifying, (the sensible bit, then it turns daft)..... a glug from somewhere, we hear. Do we know from where? Of course we do, but WCAT any further! lol.
May 5th, 2026 09:07
orchidee said:
I thought this would be summat like: A lingering sound, ominous, terrifying, (the sensible bit, then it turns daft)..... a glug from somewhere, we hear. Do we know from where? Of course we do, but WCAT any further! lol.
May 5th, 2026 09:07
learning to linger
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the struggle to remain grounded and calm during challenging times. The poet expresses a desire to learn how to \"abide\" in moments of distress or uncertainty, indicating a need for inner guidance and resilience. You focus on themes of self-reflection, emotional turmoil, and the pursuit of peace amidst chaos.
May 5th, 2026 08:18
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem revolves around the struggle to remain grounded and calm during challenging times. The poet expresses a desire to learn how to \"abide\" in moments of distress or uncertainty, indicating a need for inner guidance and resilience. You focus on themes of self-reflection, emotional turmoil, and the pursuit of peace amidst chaos.
May 5th, 2026 08:18
learning to linger
Mutley Ravishes said:
How deep
The shackles of self-disbelief
Grip the one
Who seeks the Sun
The ultimate test
Lets not rest
In our quest
To live lightly
Not take ourselves
Or life too seriously.
Great write, Tristan!
May 5th, 2026 07:51
Mutley Ravishes said:
How deep
The shackles of self-disbelief
Grip the one
Who seeks the Sun
The ultimate test
Lets not rest
In our quest
To live lightly
Not take ourselves
Or life too seriously.
Great write, Tristan!
May 5th, 2026 07:51
the interruption of decay
arqios said:
Hurray, I read it like the legend below, on the first go as well! Very intuitive layout, there. At least to my style of visual engagement. 🕊️🙏🤩
May 4th, 2026 18:28
arqios said:
Hurray, I read it like the legend below, on the first go as well! Very intuitive layout, there. At least to my style of visual engagement. 🕊️🙏🤩
May 4th, 2026 18:28
the interruption of decay
Katie B. said:
Well done. You put a lot of effort in to this one.
May 4th, 2026 15:06
Katie B. said:
Well done. You put a lot of effort in to this one.
May 4th, 2026 15:06
the interruption of decay
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this breaths philosopher\'s stone from alchemy and in the word shaped apothecary jar. It is dark and full or the humors of body fluids and speaks to the belief that transmutation can be achieved through magical means. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this breaths philosopher\'s stone from alchemy and in the word shaped apothecary jar. It is dark and full or the humors of body fluids and speaks to the belief that transmutation can be achieved through magical means. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 12:55
the interruption of decay
orchidee said:
Popeye thinking dark? Or thinking only of spinach?! lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:28
orchidee said:
Popeye thinking dark? Or thinking only of spinach?! lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:28
the interruption of decay
Friendship said:
Okay, I need a nap after reading this one, Tristan. Well written. Your poem \"The Interruption of decay\" explores themes of mortality, preservation, and the cyclical nature of life and death. It delves into the ancient Egyptian practice of mummification and the spiritual significance of preserving the body for the afterlife. The poet, identified as Anubis, the god of the underworld, emphasizes the meticulous rituals involved in preparing the deceased for their journey beyond death.
May 4th, 2026 09:30
Friendship said:
Okay, I need a nap after reading this one, Tristan. Well written. Your poem \"The Interruption of decay\" explores themes of mortality, preservation, and the cyclical nature of life and death. It delves into the ancient Egyptian practice of mummification and the spiritual significance of preserving the body for the afterlife. The poet, identified as Anubis, the god of the underworld, emphasizes the meticulous rituals involved in preparing the deceased for their journey beyond death.
May 4th, 2026 09:30
the interruption of decay
Salvia.S said:
The sarcophagus shape hits before i even read a word. The clinical brutality of pack the body full of coarse salt to pull all of the damp moisture out next to wrapped in textual binding makes the whole piece feel like you\'re mummifying language itself. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 4th, 2026 09:17
Salvia.S said:
The sarcophagus shape hits before i even read a word. The clinical brutality of pack the body full of coarse salt to pull all of the damp moisture out next to wrapped in textual binding makes the whole piece feel like you\'re mummifying language itself. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 4th, 2026 09:17
Goosefire Fortitude
Teddy.15 said:
Well you did have me worried there for a minute 🤣 🔥 yes let\'s both go down with Dante, that\'s where all the great company is!
May 3rd, 2026 17:15
Teddy.15 said:
Well you did have me worried there for a minute 🤣 🔥 yes let\'s both go down with Dante, that\'s where all the great company is!
May 3rd, 2026 17:15
misfit
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve inspired me to share my delinquent evolved for tomorrow. I will never fit in and was never ment to. Like one of my biggest heroes said. I am not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here to live up to mine. Be water my friend.~Bruce Lee
Love your work.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect 🙏 🫡
May 3rd, 2026 16:31
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve inspired me to share my delinquent evolved for tomorrow. I will never fit in and was never ment to. Like one of my biggest heroes said. I am not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here to live up to mine. Be water my friend.~Bruce Lee
Love your work.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect 🙏 🫡
May 3rd, 2026 16:31
Goosefire Fortitude
Salvia.S said:
This reads like a declaration of spiritual self-rule, taking authority directly from Christ and refusing any version of salvation that demands conformity. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 12:18
Salvia.S said:
This reads like a declaration of spiritual self-rule, taking authority directly from Christ and refusing any version of salvation that demands conformity. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 12:18
Goosefire Fortitude
Paul Bell said:
Religion is different things to different people.
I look to the vatican, pure opulence, and I wonder.
Other religions have it too, palacial buildings dripping in gold.
Maybe religion got hijacked somewhere along the line, but to me, gold bars and poverty rarely ever meet.
May 3rd, 2026 08:15
Paul Bell said:
Religion is different things to different people.
I look to the vatican, pure opulence, and I wonder.
Other religions have it too, palacial buildings dripping in gold.
Maybe religion got hijacked somewhere along the line, but to me, gold bars and poverty rarely ever meet.
May 3rd, 2026 08:15
Goosefire Fortitude
Friendship said:
Well said. This poem asserts that true authority belongs solely to Jesus Christ and rejects any form of religious idolization or uniformity that detracts from personal conviction. The words encompass themes of spiritual autonomy, the critique of institutional religion, and the embrace of personal beliefs, even in the face of potential suffering or persecution.
May 3rd, 2026 07:48
Friendship said:
Well said. This poem asserts that true authority belongs solely to Jesus Christ and rejects any form of religious idolization or uniformity that detracts from personal conviction. The words encompass themes of spiritual autonomy, the critique of institutional religion, and the embrace of personal beliefs, even in the face of potential suffering or persecution.
May 3rd, 2026 07:48
Goosefire Fortitude
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted my friend although not a religious person I do believe in being spiritual and I see religion and conformity and unity and spirituality as individuality and there is no money in that. A good write my friend
May 3rd, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted my friend although not a religious person I do believe in being spiritual and I see religion and conformity and unity and spirituality as individuality and there is no money in that. A good write my friend
May 3rd, 2026 07:18
Goosefire Fortitude
arqios said:
Beats me how manipulation and control are religious go tos and autopilot modes. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
Beats me how manipulation and control are religious go tos and autopilot modes. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:10
misfit
orchidee said:
One says - glug - we knows him - that he can perfectly fit inside a giant tin of spinach. When he\'s ate all the spinach, of course.
I\'m gonna fill that mould with, erm..... clay. lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
One says - glug - we knows him - that he can perfectly fit inside a giant tin of spinach. When he\'s ate all the spinach, of course.
I\'m gonna fill that mould with, erm..... clay. lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:16
misfit
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
misfit
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
misfit
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
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