Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



freedom\'s fun
arqios said:

paradox, irony, and disillusionment... what a state of all states... πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

June 12th, 2026 20:56

freedom\'s fun
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed Head Stard did shoot itself with America\'s gun. Well said my friend.

June 12th, 2026 12:42

freedom\'s fun
Lorenz said:

In gun we\'ve fun !

June 12th, 2026 11:23

freedom\'s fun
orchidee said:

Good write T. Any TOM-foolery or gluggery abounding?! lol. \'Knitting\' you call it, Ol\'Tom? Why? Find out on WCAT which tells us no answers. lol.

June 12th, 2026 10:23

freedom\'s fun
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

truth definitely applies in this piece, enjoyed

June 12th, 2026 09:48

memo
cellinic said:

A very sincere and deep statement. A fave, my friend...

June 11th, 2026 20:48

memo
arqios said:

Been on that end more times than I care to recollect. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

June 11th, 2026 17:24

memo
orchidee said:

That I am sounds like an I yam from.... we know who! lol.

June 11th, 2026 08:55

memo
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

brief but well put my friend

June 11th, 2026 08:26

memo
sorenbarrett said:

Being part of an inverse barometer you are always right by being wrong. Short but well said

June 11th, 2026 07:50

Cream, Chocolate, and Cherries
Mirela said:

I liked this line: Dark star of death musing around. And also the ice cream bit

June 11th, 2026 02:52

bracing time
arqios said:

…just a while

June 10th, 2026 23:58

bracing time
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write much enjoyed

June 10th, 2026 10:18

bracing time
sorenbarrett said:

The words single file, trial, dial all bring images of being caught dominated into uniformity, judged, amplified and then the word hurt for a while pain and suffering not even quick electrocution. It is dystopian and dark with a promise of getting worse. Bad news on the doorstep. Well written my friend

June 10th, 2026 10:16

bracing time
orchidee said:

Good write T. We\'re always bracing ourselves for the sound of the next glug, but it always seems to make us jump, and be jumpy! lol.

June 10th, 2026 10:13

We Lose
Neville said:



Now aint that just the effin truth .. The world is sadly filled with BIG GOTS .. Neville πŸ–€πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›β­β­β­β­β­πŸ–€πŸ§πŸ‘

June 10th, 2026 09:45

We Lose
Thomas W Case said:

Poignant.

June 9th, 2026 18:12

We Lose
Paul Bell said:

You are not identifying as a plant pot and thats that.
No wearing dresses on a Tuesday, and definitely no kissing that guy with the weird moustache who is actually a girl.
Now remember. Your elected democratic government is looking out for you.


June 9th, 2026 14:48

We Lose
orchidee said:

At one point I was gonna start a campaign of electing cabbages, with the slogan \'Cabbages rule OK!\'
Now it may have been \'Spinach rules OK\' but a certain one has glugged all the spinach! lol.
Ohh, let\'s keep talking rubbish. heehee.

June 9th, 2026 11:08

We Lose
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

an excellent write with a grave warning

June 9th, 2026 11:08

We Lose
sorenbarrett said:

Discrimination or prejudice about things that are not our business and over which people have no control is outright wrong and well stated in this poem. Well said Tristan do not the Scots wear kilts have not certain island tribes worn dresses, what make tradition right or wrong. A good write for this month. Nicely done.

June 9th, 2026 10:55

Praise Then Parse
NafisaSB said:

it is good to know you and few others have the courage to stand up and call out the duplicity of those in power - who call out, and then condemn those who answer...a great write

June 8th, 2026 23:54

speech pattern
David Wakeling said:

Oh I know the feeling only to well.I suspect it is the reason we write poetry.A clever write

June 8th, 2026 18:37

speech pattern
sorenbarrett said:

So short and yet if one listens the words tell the story. Is anyone listening. I sometimes as this as well even when there are many that read the poem, is anyone listening? Very nice Tristan

June 8th, 2026 12:57

speech pattern
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write, enjoyed my friend

June 8th, 2026 09:08

speech pattern
orchidee said:

Does Popeye says any words, or only glugs?! lol.

June 8th, 2026 08:59

speech pattern
Lorenz said:

I sense a musical maze made of tangled words !

June 8th, 2026 08:57

Praise Then Parse
David Wakeling said:

Okay.Every line here needs a comment. There is so much here amigo that is so true.Justice never seems to be carried out down to letting the lamb go to slaughter.An amazing poem that puts all this together.For me the innocent suffer along with the guilty

June 7th, 2026 18:31

Praise Then Parse
Teddy.15 said:

Marvelous poetry and as I\'m a resident Libra βš–οΈ just is one of my pet hates when there isn\'t any. Powerful and provocative 🌹

June 7th, 2026 14:31

Praise Then Parse
orchidee said:

Good write T. Popeye was called on to give an account of his glugging, btu he never turned up! lol.

June 7th, 2026 09:59

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