Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Wasted
sorenbarrett said:

As the reader I won\'t take that personal lol. A write of the lengths we go to to calm ourselves and the uselessness in leu of the stress we face, be it work, society, traffic, or the one we live with. Wishing you a good night\'s rest my friend. A heart felt write.

March 24th, 2025 15:26

Wasted
Poetic Licence said:

Engrained fears and anxieties bleed into every aspect of our daily life, feel some pain, torment and anger in this write, nicely expressed and written

March 24th, 2025 12:29

Wasted
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. I\'ve been sober over 2 years now, I wuldn\'t trade it for anything.

March 24th, 2025 09:19

Wasted
arqios said:

Deep seated anxieties are not the easiest things to deal with, they spill over into every area of our day and night🙏🏻🕊

March 24th, 2025 08:11

Leave Little Room
Cheeky Missy said:

And my close friend, liking to sound enlightened, ever and anon inserting \"dopamine\" in our conversations, forgive me, but your finale seemed to swear it said that instead, or? There is a time for silence, while apathy was born of oppression, was it not? Charmingly rendered in feigned lightness belying the more weighty reality expressed, with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.

March 23rd, 2025 10:43

Leave Little Room
orchidee said:

I was holding a rope but I fell off a ccllliifffff. Do ya hear me falling off it? Good acting by me, innit? lol.

March 21st, 2025 15:07

Leave Little Room
Poetic Licence said:

There are probably beings sitting on a planet somewhere out there looking down at us now, doing the same thing, enjoyed the read

March 21st, 2025 08:53

Leave Little Room
arqios said:

It kills from the inside🙏🏻🕊

March 21st, 2025 08:30

Leave Little Room
sorenbarrett said:

We look at others with no vision and shake our heads in disbelief and I wonder how many others are doing the same to us. A great read Tristian that applies so well to present day politics, religion, ethics and values. A great read

March 21st, 2025 07:43

In the Box
orchidee said:

Well, jump out of the box then - if ya can! What ya doin\' in a box anyway? lol.

March 20th, 2025 13:43

In the Box
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Good one

March 20th, 2025 10:35

In the Box
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

March 20th, 2025 09:52

In the Box
Poetic Licence said:

Echo\'s of thoughts and feelings i am well aware of, bit close to home, very well expressed and written.

March 20th, 2025 09:42

Catalyst
Tom Dylan said:

A cracking write. Love the tone and the way it was written. Nicely done.

March 20th, 2025 08:40

In the Box
sorenbarrett said:

Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned with great reflection and timing of final words that turn meaning back to oneself. Very nicely done Tristan

March 20th, 2025 08:17

In the Box
arqios said:

Interpersonal relations…that’s gotta be real tough 🙏🏻🕊️

March 20th, 2025 08:14

Catalyst
Demar Desu said:

Where there is darkness the chance for light can shine… good poem

March 19th, 2025 19:39

light & shadow
whats write for me said:

Such a haunting visage, hearts peek out, but maybe the darkness is in you and I.

March 19th, 2025 16:58

Catalyst
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Great and creative formatting.

March 19th, 2025 16:34

Catalyst
orchidee said:

Oohh, put a light on or candle or summat, then you\'ll be able to see! lol.

March 19th, 2025 10:46

Catalyst
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

March 19th, 2025 09:52

Catalyst
sorenbarrett said:

I find it most intriguing your painting with letters meaning (the use of dropping letters in deeper conveyed the depth) and I loved the use of dark as a catalyst a most wonderful image and concept. Lovely

March 19th, 2025 09:48

Catalyst
Poetic Licence said:

It is in all of us, some don\'t know until provoke, some are scared of it and some enjoy it, have enjoyed another trip to the dark side.

March 19th, 2025 09:20

Catalyst
arqios said:

That was like looking deep into my soul, so intricately worded. Had to remind myself to breathe 🙏🏻🕊

March 19th, 2025 08:07

Surrounded by Stones
Salvia.S said:

A profound poem that humorously highlights the human quest for meaning and connection, even in the face of indifference. Well written!

March 19th, 2025 07:42

Surrounded by Stones
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write that works on so many levels. Surrounded by stones, as you say. Nicely done.

March 19th, 2025 04:25

Surrounded by Stones
Mutley Ravishes said:

I\'m sure the rock people are appreciative of you talking to them!

March 18th, 2025 18:49

Surrounded by Stones
arqios said:

A very curious feeling arises out of this situation with the stones 🙏🏻🕊

March 18th, 2025 15:59

Surrounded by Stones
Poetic Licence said:

A very interesting write i correlate it to people, a bunch sitting around with no care for anyone except themselves, and if they had any empathy they would be to scared to tell the rock, enjoyed this very much

March 18th, 2025 11:04

Surrounded by Stones
orchidee said:

How do they do acting, some of these actors/actresses? It\'s like talking to wood. Wooden acting. heehee.

March 18th, 2025 10:57

Page 1 of 4312345678910»...Last »


« Return to the profile of Tristan Robert Lange