Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
arqios said:
Editorial caricaturing is alive and well! Very crispy, Tittu 🕊️🙏
April 25th, 2026 22:34
arqios said:
Editorial caricaturing is alive and well! Very crispy, Tittu 🕊️🙏
April 25th, 2026 22:34
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
sorenbarrett said:
In the realm of nursery rhymes for adults this is a good one my friend. Made me smile a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
In the realm of nursery rhymes for adults this is a good one my friend. Made me smile a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:13
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Waiting for Silence said:
Super!!!
Good one.
April 25th, 2026 09:54
Waiting for Silence said:
Super!!!
Good one.
April 25th, 2026 09:54
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
orchidee said:
Now here\'s one from m - unfortunately it can\'t be finished, due to WCAT!
There was an old sailor named Popeye (glug)....... We knew he would sneak in! lol.
April 25th, 2026 09:47
orchidee said:
Now here\'s one from m - unfortunately it can\'t be finished, due to WCAT!
There was an old sailor named Popeye (glug)....... We knew he would sneak in! lol.
April 25th, 2026 09:47
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem revolves around the character of Pervy Jackson, who embodies a blend of humor and absurdity, reflecting on issues such as ego, celebrity culture, and the sometimes bizarre aspects of leadership and fame.
April 25th, 2026 08:26
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem revolves around the character of Pervy Jackson, who embodies a blend of humor and absurdity, reflecting on issues such as ego, celebrity culture, and the sometimes bizarre aspects of leadership and fame.
April 25th, 2026 08:26
Witch Weaving
orchidee said:
Someone\'s weaving - or knitting - and that\'s a fact. Clue: He\'s knitting socks. We knows him! lol.
April 25th, 2026 02:46
orchidee said:
Someone\'s weaving - or knitting - and that\'s a fact. Clue: He\'s knitting socks. We knows him! lol.
April 25th, 2026 02:46
Witch Weaving
Priya Tomar said:
The poem carries a powerful message .
Brilliant write .
April 24th, 2026 23:04
Priya Tomar said:
The poem carries a powerful message .
Brilliant write .
April 24th, 2026 23:04
Witch Weaving
Katie B. said:
A strong, true message of darkness and doom are evoked. Good write.
April 24th, 2026 14:55
Katie B. said:
A strong, true message of darkness and doom are evoked. Good write.
April 24th, 2026 14:55
Witch Weaving
sorenbarrett said:
A little rhyme that reminds me of Shakespeare\'s MacBeth and the three witches. Good one my friend
April 24th, 2026 10:03
sorenbarrett said:
A little rhyme that reminds me of Shakespeare\'s MacBeth and the three witches. Good one my friend
April 24th, 2026 10:03
Witch Weaving
Friendship said:
Well said. A poem explores themes of witchcraft, societal perception, and the struggles faced by women who defy norms. And yet those who are seen as different or who challenge authority are often persecuted, and such persecution can lead to a harsh fate. Our world has changed, my friend. People are so nasty.
April 24th, 2026 08:52
Friendship said:
Well said. A poem explores themes of witchcraft, societal perception, and the struggles faced by women who defy norms. And yet those who are seen as different or who challenge authority are often persecuted, and such persecution can lead to a harsh fate. Our world has changed, my friend. People are so nasty.
April 24th, 2026 08:52
Apparatus Askew
Doggerel Dave said:
More selectivity at the start? I admit sometimes there is no way of knowing. Forward, ever forward, Tristan.
April 23rd, 2026 19:46
Doggerel Dave said:
More selectivity at the start? I admit sometimes there is no way of knowing. Forward, ever forward, Tristan.
April 23rd, 2026 19:46
Apparatus Askew
Paul Bell said:
How many times have you wished them out the door, giving the biggest hints their presence isn\'t welcome anymore, and low and behold they come back refreshed for more. Some need it in writing.
April 23rd, 2026 14:14
Paul Bell said:
How many times have you wished them out the door, giving the biggest hints their presence isn\'t welcome anymore, and low and behold they come back refreshed for more. Some need it in writing.
April 23rd, 2026 14:14
Apparatus Askew
sorenbarrett said:
Existential thought and the door is always available to those that do not get along with the idea
April 23rd, 2026 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
Existential thought and the door is always available to those that do not get along with the idea
April 23rd, 2026 11:23
Apparatus Askew
Teddy.15 said:
I like this fighting talk, once you own you nobody can mess with you! Oh these are lyrics my friend. 🌹
April 23rd, 2026 10:30
Teddy.15 said:
I like this fighting talk, once you own you nobody can mess with you! Oh these are lyrics my friend. 🌹
April 23rd, 2026 10:30
Apparatus Askew
orchidee said:
Doh! The only apparatus Popeye has is spinach! glug!
April 23rd, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Doh! The only apparatus Popeye has is spinach! glug!
April 23rd, 2026 08:32
Apparatus Askew
Katie B. said:
Wow, heavy, hard hitting. You put it all on the table.
My take away is a relationship gone south.
April 23rd, 2026 08:25
Katie B. said:
Wow, heavy, hard hitting. You put it all on the table.
My take away is a relationship gone south.
April 23rd, 2026 08:25
Apparatus Askew
Friendship said:
A powerful poem of oneself . Your poem revolves around personal pain, existential questioning, and the realization that relationships can become burdensome. The poet questions their own feelings and actions, hinting at a deeper investigation into the nature of trust, love, and self-sacrifice. Well written, I feel the pain the image speaks for it all.
April 23rd, 2026 08:14
Friendship said:
A powerful poem of oneself . Your poem revolves around personal pain, existential questioning, and the realization that relationships can become burdensome. The poet questions their own feelings and actions, hinting at a deeper investigation into the nature of trust, love, and self-sacrifice. Well written, I feel the pain the image speaks for it all.
April 23rd, 2026 08:14
fish bowl
NinjaGirl said:
If the fish bowl is never cleaned, at some point it becomes too dirty and it\'s better just for it to be thrown away...else all the fish begin to die. But what if you only have one?
Very good reflection and metaphor.
April 22nd, 2026 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
If the fish bowl is never cleaned, at some point it becomes too dirty and it\'s better just for it to be thrown away...else all the fish begin to die. But what if you only have one?
Very good reflection and metaphor.
April 22nd, 2026 20:06
fish bowl
Waiting for Silence said:
Well written
We destroying nature that is keeping us safe with the hammer of concrete jungles advancement etc. Its leaking .. matter of time.. temp is reaching 50 degree Celsius..
April 22nd, 2026 17:52
Waiting for Silence said:
Well written
We destroying nature that is keeping us safe with the hammer of concrete jungles advancement etc. Its leaking .. matter of time.. temp is reaching 50 degree Celsius..
April 22nd, 2026 17:52
fish bowl
Priya Tomar said:
The poem carries good message .
Beautiful write .Robert
April 22nd, 2026 12:16
Priya Tomar said:
The poem carries good message .
Beautiful write .Robert
April 22nd, 2026 12:16
fish bowl
orchidee said:
Fish bowl... sea...ocean. Oh no! Places we\'re likely to hear glugs from - we know who! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Fish bowl... sea...ocean. Oh no! Places we\'re likely to hear glugs from - we know who! lol.
April 22nd, 2026 09:57
fish bowl
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of overconsumption, the consequences of unchecked growth, and the desire for exploration and change despite potential dangers. It reflects on the fragility of environments—both physical and metaphorical—and suggests that the quest for something “better” can lead to self-destruction.
April 22nd, 2026 08:10
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of overconsumption, the consequences of unchecked growth, and the desire for exploration and change despite potential dangers. It reflects on the fragility of environments—both physical and metaphorical—and suggests that the quest for something “better” can lead to self-destruction.
April 22nd, 2026 08:10
fish bowl
Abdullah123 said:
OMG i Love the fishbowl metaphor for the general idea of humanity, and how we have likely corrupted our own cicrumstance. A fave
April 22nd, 2026 08:09
Abdullah123 said:
OMG i Love the fishbowl metaphor for the general idea of humanity, and how we have likely corrupted our own cicrumstance. A fave
April 22nd, 2026 08:09
fish bowl
arqios said:
We actually had a fish tank (aquarium) that had its bottom plate cut the wrong size , too big so it had this lip almost 4” deep. Someone at home brought down a mug too heavily on it and a crack run though the length of it and tank water seeped out so gradually we didn’t notice for days! Oh memories 🐟 🐠 🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 07:54
arqios said:
We actually had a fish tank (aquarium) that had its bottom plate cut the wrong size , too big so it had this lip almost 4” deep. Someone at home brought down a mug too heavily on it and a crack run though the length of it and tank water seeped out so gradually we didn’t notice for days! Oh memories 🐟 🐠 🕊️🙏🏻
April 22nd, 2026 07:54
fish bowl
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor of humanity and the world my friend it leaks its message well.
April 22nd, 2026 07:23
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful metaphor of humanity and the world my friend it leaks its message well.
April 22nd, 2026 07:23
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