Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
sporegasm
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
sporegasm
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
regression agression
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
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August 3rd, 2026 10:29
peachy said:
Hi! I loved your poem! Your characters and writing style really stood out to me. I\'m a commission-based artist, and if you ever want artwork for your story or characters, I\'d be happy to work with you!
Instagram: @akiraa_artly
Gmail: [email protected]
August 3rd, 2026 10:29
The Middle-Finger Christ
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
The Middle-Finger Christ
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
The Middle-Finger Christ
Paul Bell said:
A twelve disciple metal band would certainly get me back to church.
More noise the better I say, maybe a roman back-up band to keep people on their toes.
August 2nd, 2026 10:25
Paul Bell said:
A twelve disciple metal band would certainly get me back to church.
More noise the better I say, maybe a roman back-up band to keep people on their toes.
August 2nd, 2026 10:25
The Middle-Finger Christ
Thomas W Case said:
This piece crackles with defiance and urgency, its voice bold and unafraid to confront hypocrisy head-on. Thereโs a fierce energy here that feels almost prophetic, surging forward with conviction and fire.
August 2nd, 2026 07:18
Thomas W Case said:
This piece crackles with defiance and urgency, its voice bold and unafraid to confront hypocrisy head-on. Thereโs a fierce energy here that feels almost prophetic, surging forward with conviction and fire.
August 2nd, 2026 07:18
The Middle-Finger Christ
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed piece my friend
August 2nd, 2026 07:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed piece my friend
August 2nd, 2026 07:14
The Middle-Finger Christ
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We live in dreadful times, may God save us from all evil and from lies!
August 2nd, 2026 07:09
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We live in dreadful times, may God save us from all evil and from lies!
August 2nd, 2026 07:09
The Middle-Finger Christ
sorenbarrett said:
A Christian metal band but I kind of took this another way my friend. There are those and have been those that as a false messiah and or prophet lead others like Jim Jones and David Koresh lead others down dark paths. A lovely poem Tristan
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A Christian metal band but I kind of took this another way my friend. There are those and have been those that as a false messiah and or prophet lead others like Jim Jones and David Koresh lead others down dark paths. A lovely poem Tristan
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Cast Away
Syd said:
Short, sweet and acute Tristan. It made me think.
- Syd ๐
August 2nd, 2026 03:51
Syd said:
Short, sweet and acute Tristan. It made me think.
- Syd ๐
August 2nd, 2026 03:51
Cast Away
arqios said:
Every man is an island ๐๏ธ until theyโre not, every man a garden ๐ชด until they wonโt ๐ช๐๐ป๐๏ธ
August 1st, 2026 14:00
arqios said:
Every man is an island ๐๏ธ until theyโre not, every man a garden ๐ชด until they wonโt ๐ช๐๐ป๐๏ธ
August 1st, 2026 14:00
Cast Away
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
Cast Away
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Cast Away
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
mayday
orchidee said:
No danger of the spinach market collapsing with Popeye around! lol.
July 31st, 2026 10:02
orchidee said:
No danger of the spinach market collapsing with Popeye around! lol.
July 31st, 2026 10:02
mayday
Friendship said:
A well-written poem.A powerful feeling trapped in one\'s mind with life. I know this so well, my friend. Your poem deals with themes of crisis, paralysis, and the overwhelming nature of negative emotions or situations. It evokes a sense of being trapped or overwhelmed, unable to take action or think clearly. God your not alone, my friend.๐โค๏ธ๐
July 31st, 2026 09:23
Friendship said:
A well-written poem.A powerful feeling trapped in one\'s mind with life. I know this so well, my friend. Your poem deals with themes of crisis, paralysis, and the overwhelming nature of negative emotions or situations. It evokes a sense of being trapped or overwhelmed, unable to take action or think clearly. God your not alone, my friend.๐โค๏ธ๐
July 31st, 2026 09:23
mayday
Demar Desu said:
I love how you always play with the structure and format of these things we call words and lettersโฆ great poem
July 31st, 2026 08:15
Demar Desu said:
I love how you always play with the structure and format of these things we call words and lettersโฆ great poem
July 31st, 2026 08:15
mayday
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen this mechanical as well as emotional. Nicely illustrated with your format. Well done Tristan
July 31st, 2026 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen this mechanical as well as emotional. Nicely illustrated with your format. Well done Tristan
July 31st, 2026 08:04
mayday
arqios said:
When a sudden overwhelm hits so hard it can floor both mind and body๐๐ป๐๏ธ
July 31st, 2026 07:57
arqios said:
When a sudden overwhelm hits so hard it can floor both mind and body๐๐ป๐๏ธ
July 31st, 2026 07:57
Mirrors
orchidee said:
Noooo, Popeye, don\'t lend us a mirror so we can see your antics. Why not, he asks us? WCAT!!
July 31st, 2026 01:58
orchidee said:
Noooo, Popeye, don\'t lend us a mirror so we can see your antics. Why not, he asks us? WCAT!!
July 31st, 2026 01:58
Mirrors
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
Mirrors
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Mirrors
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
July 30th, 2026 07:58
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding ๐๏ธ๐๐ป
July 30th, 2026 07:58
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