Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
misfit
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
misfit
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
misfit
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
misfit
Friendship said:
Your poem is powerful and speaks of not fitting in a world that has changed. Your poem revolves around the struggle for individuality and the rejection of societal norms and expectations. The poet questions the necessity and desire to conform to predefined molds or roles (\"how can I fit when i wasn’t made that shape?\"). Your poem addresses themes of identity, self-acceptance, and defiance against external pressures to conform.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Friendship said:
Your poem is powerful and speaks of not fitting in a world that has changed. Your poem revolves around the struggle for individuality and the rejection of societal norms and expectations. The poet questions the necessity and desire to conform to predefined molds or roles (\"how can I fit when i wasn’t made that shape?\"). Your poem addresses themes of identity, self-acceptance, and defiance against external pressures to conform.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Glugonomics
Waiting for Silence said:
Playful rhyme and metaphor to describe the inevitability of cause and effect with super comic timing.
May 1st, 2026 10:19
Waiting for Silence said:
Playful rhyme and metaphor to describe the inevitability of cause and effect with super comic timing.
May 1st, 2026 10:19
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Teddy.15 said:
LOL boy do you know how to cheer me up! Hey all jokes a side my condolences to all you fabulous Americans who did not vote for this wannabe Hugh Hefner 🤣🤣 in Europe we have been witnessing some truly disturbing art in these weeks. Obama was spot on the money with the Trump regime sad but true. 🌹
April 30th, 2026 00:04
Teddy.15 said:
LOL boy do you know how to cheer me up! Hey all jokes a side my condolences to all you fabulous Americans who did not vote for this wannabe Hugh Hefner 🤣🤣 in Europe we have been witnessing some truly disturbing art in these weeks. Obama was spot on the money with the Trump regime sad but true. 🌹
April 30th, 2026 00:04
Glugonomics
Neville said:
as crazy as it may seem, this makes perfect sense to those in the know .. bravo .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐧🌻👍
April 30th, 2026 00:00
Neville said:
as crazy as it may seem, this makes perfect sense to those in the know .. bravo .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐧🌻👍
April 30th, 2026 00:00
Glugonomics
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m Sir Orchi NS (non sequitur), Dave says! It means I talk nonsense, go off at tangents, etc, and then folk say \'No change there then\'. lol. And WCAT of many things. lol.
April 28th, 2026 02:48
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m Sir Orchi NS (non sequitur), Dave says! It means I talk nonsense, go off at tangents, etc, and then folk say \'No change there then\'. lol. And WCAT of many things. lol.
April 28th, 2026 02:48
Glugonomics
Doggerel Dave said:
Never really came to terms with all that glugging - don\'t know quite why; I think I\'m in enough trouble following the good orchi\'s train of thought when responses from me are required.. Any explanation would be gratefully received from either of you....
April 27th, 2026 17:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Never really came to terms with all that glugging - don\'t know quite why; I think I\'m in enough trouble following the good orchi\'s train of thought when responses from me are required.. Any explanation would be gratefully received from either of you....
April 27th, 2026 17:47
Glugonomics
orchidee said:
We know now - WCAT is Where Chaos and Threads Collide - isn\'t it?! There he is glugging! lol.
April 27th, 2026 09:15
orchidee said:
We know now - WCAT is Where Chaos and Threads Collide - isn\'t it?! There he is glugging! lol.
April 27th, 2026 09:15
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Paul Bell said:
What do you have to do to get rid of pervy.
Assassins are becoming low calibre these days, what the hell is going on.
April 27th, 2026 07:45
Paul Bell said:
What do you have to do to get rid of pervy.
Assassins are becoming low calibre these days, what the hell is going on.
April 27th, 2026 07:45
Glugonomics
Friendship said:
Well done,my friend.Your poem serves as a reminder that neglecting problems—symbolized by the plumbing—will lead to greater consequences, urging readers to face their realities head-on.
April 27th, 2026 07:21
Friendship said:
Well done,my friend.Your poem serves as a reminder that neglecting problems—symbolized by the plumbing—will lead to greater consequences, urging readers to face their realities head-on.
April 27th, 2026 07:21
this is the trip
NafisaSB said:
sensations giving rise to vivid imagination - and a thoughtful verse...
April 27th, 2026 06:58
NafisaSB said:
sensations giving rise to vivid imagination - and a thoughtful verse...
April 27th, 2026 06:58
Glugonomics
sorenbarrett said:
The Orchi story of a marriage imbibed when with too little water prescribed he was induced to marry as he described a life with ball and chain circumscribed. A fun read my friend
April 27th, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
The Orchi story of a marriage imbibed when with too little water prescribed he was induced to marry as he described a life with ball and chain circumscribed. A fun read my friend
April 27th, 2026 06:29
Better Burned
arqios said:
A rapidly forming litany of scorched Sundays! Looking forward to the succeeding ones. 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 19:48
arqios said:
A rapidly forming litany of scorched Sundays! Looking forward to the succeeding ones. 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 19:48
Better Burned
Neville said:
I could sense something along these lines was on its way .. even before I opened the page .. I reckon you are on a roll T .. 🖤🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🌻⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 26th, 2026 10:06
Neville said:
I could sense something along these lines was on its way .. even before I opened the page .. I reckon you are on a roll T .. 🖤🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🌻⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
April 26th, 2026 10:06
Better Burned
Thomas W Case said:
This is intense, incendiary writing—driven more by warning and moral pressure than narrative, almost like a prophetic outburst.
The grit is in the urgency: it doesn’t just describe danger, it feels like it’s already burning as it speaks.
April 26th, 2026 09:46
Thomas W Case said:
This is intense, incendiary writing—driven more by warning and moral pressure than narrative, almost like a prophetic outburst.
The grit is in the urgency: it doesn’t just describe danger, it feels like it’s already burning as it speaks.
April 26th, 2026 09:46
Better Burned
Lorenz said:
A wonderful musical composition that really captures the essence !
April 26th, 2026 08:33
Lorenz said:
A wonderful musical composition that really captures the essence !
April 26th, 2026 08:33
Better Burned
orchidee said:
Wish we could burn up, not Popeye himself, but his antics. Burnt spinach - bleuurggh! lol.
April 26th, 2026 08:00
orchidee said:
Wish we could burn up, not Popeye himself, but his antics. Burnt spinach - bleuurggh! lol.
April 26th, 2026 08:00
Better Burned
Katie B. said:
Wow! Heavy! Like \"Never give in to pressure only to be burned anyway and fires come in many forms,\" So true. Heck of a write!
April 26th, 2026 07:02
Katie B. said:
Wow! Heavy! Like \"Never give in to pressure only to be burned anyway and fires come in many forms,\" So true. Heck of a write!
April 26th, 2026 07:02
Better Burned
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful acrostic my friend that may hold deeper meaning for those acquainted with the story. Well told
April 26th, 2026 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful acrostic my friend that may hold deeper meaning for those acquainted with the story. Well told
April 26th, 2026 06:44
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
arqios said:
Editorial caricaturing is alive and well! Very crispy, Tittu 🕊️🙏
April 25th, 2026 22:34
arqios said:
Editorial caricaturing is alive and well! Very crispy, Tittu 🕊️🙏
April 25th, 2026 22:34
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
sorenbarrett said:
In the realm of nursery rhymes for adults this is a good one my friend. Made me smile a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
In the realm of nursery rhymes for adults this is a good one my friend. Made me smile a fave
April 25th, 2026 10:13
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Waiting for Silence said:
Super!!!
Good one.
April 25th, 2026 09:54
Waiting for Silence said:
Super!!!
Good one.
April 25th, 2026 09:54
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
orchidee said:
Now here\'s one from m - unfortunately it can\'t be finished, due to WCAT!
There was an old sailor named Popeye (glug)....... We knew he would sneak in! lol.
April 25th, 2026 09:47
orchidee said:
Now here\'s one from m - unfortunately it can\'t be finished, due to WCAT!
There was an old sailor named Popeye (glug)....... We knew he would sneak in! lol.
April 25th, 2026 09:47
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem revolves around the character of Pervy Jackson, who embodies a blend of humor and absurdity, reflecting on issues such as ego, celebrity culture, and the sometimes bizarre aspects of leadership and fame.
April 25th, 2026 08:26
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem revolves around the character of Pervy Jackson, who embodies a blend of humor and absurdity, reflecting on issues such as ego, celebrity culture, and the sometimes bizarre aspects of leadership and fame.
April 25th, 2026 08:26
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