Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
miracle man
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
miracle man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
miracle man
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
merciless
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
merciless
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
merciless
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
merciless
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
merciless
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
Butter in a Cup
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Butter in a Cup
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
Butter in a Cup
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
Butter in a Cup
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
monumental collapse
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
monumental collapse
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
monumental collapse
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
monumental collapse
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
monumental collapse
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
monumental collapse
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
monumental collapse
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
monumental collapse
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so aptly put my friend, much enjoyed
August 4th, 2026 07:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so aptly put my friend, much enjoyed
August 4th, 2026 07:43
sporegasm
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is a wild collision of biology, technology, and raw imagination, creating a strange but vivid inner landscape. The unexpected imagery jolts the reader awake, capturing creativity as something chaotic, physical, and impossible to contain.
August 4th, 2026 06:35
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is a wild collision of biology, technology, and raw imagination, creating a strange but vivid inner landscape. The unexpected imagery jolts the reader awake, capturing creativity as something chaotic, physical, and impossible to contain.
August 4th, 2026 06:35
sporegasm
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
sporegasm
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
The Middle-Finger Christ
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
The Middle-Finger Christ
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
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