Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Obvious Choice?
NafisaSB said:
congratulations - more power to your pen - way to go..
September 5th, 2026 00:02
NafisaSB said:
congratulations - more power to your pen - way to go..
September 5th, 2026 00:02
The Obvious Choice?
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing wrong with corn on the cob occasionally... make sure the serviettes are large and of good quality, because C on the C is bound to be smothered in something..
I empathise... but not too much... I\'m veggo.
Your tone poem/video was an experience and a half. Eerie, atmospheric, the whole thing, the journey weirded me out for a while. If I have stranger dreams than usual, I know who to blame, Tristan. Rightfully proud - must have been hard work.
September 4th, 2026 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing wrong with corn on the cob occasionally... make sure the serviettes are large and of good quality, because C on the C is bound to be smothered in something..
I empathise... but not too much... I\'m veggo.
Your tone poem/video was an experience and a half. Eerie, atmospheric, the whole thing, the journey weirded me out for a while. If I have stranger dreams than usual, I know who to blame, Tristan. Rightfully proud - must have been hard work.
September 4th, 2026 17:28
The Obvious Choice?
Friendship said:
So happy for your good news. Your poem revolves around a conversation about going out to eat, specifically to a barbecue buffet that poses a challenge for a vegetarian. Sometimes you have to bring your own food. I wouldn\'t go, but that\'s just me.
September 4th, 2026 09:01
Friendship said:
So happy for your good news. Your poem revolves around a conversation about going out to eat, specifically to a barbecue buffet that poses a challenge for a vegetarian. Sometimes you have to bring your own food. I wouldn\'t go, but that\'s just me.
September 4th, 2026 09:01
The Obvious Choice?
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend
September 4th, 2026 08:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Good write my friend
September 4th, 2026 08:34
The Obvious Choice?
sorenbarrett said:
One can easily tell if one comes for the food or the company. I was always advised that when going out to eat, eat something first so one does not appear a hog and glutton. Nicely done Tristan
September 4th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
One can easily tell if one comes for the food or the company. I was always advised that when going out to eat, eat something first so one does not appear a hog and glutton. Nicely done Tristan
September 4th, 2026 07:54
The Obvious Choice?
orchidee said:
I remember we invited Popeye out, but nothing on the menu except spinach. Glug! lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:50
orchidee said:
I remember we invited Popeye out, but nothing on the menu except spinach. Glug! lol.
September 4th, 2026 07:50
Jackassassination
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We\'re living in truly terrifying times with all these 2030 and 2050 agendas.
A powerful few are keeping the rest of us divided and distracted from what actually matters. I don\'t think we\'ve ever been this fractured—it\'s everyone against everyone on a global scale, classic divide and conquer.
Everyone preaches love and peace, but they\'re creating the exact opposite.
It really feels like we\'re watching an apocalyptic scenario play out.
And let\'s not forget, there\'s a reason the devil is known as the Prince of Lies.
Thank you for sharing your poem
September 4th, 2026 06:39
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We\'re living in truly terrifying times with all these 2030 and 2050 agendas.
A powerful few are keeping the rest of us divided and distracted from what actually matters. I don\'t think we\'ve ever been this fractured—it\'s everyone against everyone on a global scale, classic divide and conquer.
Everyone preaches love and peace, but they\'re creating the exact opposite.
It really feels like we\'re watching an apocalyptic scenario play out.
And let\'s not forget, there\'s a reason the devil is known as the Prince of Lies.
Thank you for sharing your poem
September 4th, 2026 06:39
Jackassassination
Kevin Hulme said:
Your not wrong about Cancell Culture. What happened to Free Speech? One of our Comedy Writers was arrested for something he said on Twitter/ X . Good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 18:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Your not wrong about Cancell Culture. What happened to Free Speech? One of our Comedy Writers was arrested for something he said on Twitter/ X . Good Write.
September 3rd, 2026 18:37
Jackassassination
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around themes of violence, societal decay, and the cyclical nature of suffering and retribution. Your poem also explores the impact of trauma and the inherent brutality of the human condition, suggesting a world that is both wounded and wounding. The reference to execution and \"jackassassination\" points to a critique of violence in society, possibly reflecting on how individuals or groups respond to offense and pain.
September 3rd, 2026 18:36
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around themes of violence, societal decay, and the cyclical nature of suffering and retribution. Your poem also explores the impact of trauma and the inherent brutality of the human condition, suggesting a world that is both wounded and wounding. The reference to execution and \"jackassassination\" points to a critique of violence in society, possibly reflecting on how individuals or groups respond to offense and pain.
September 3rd, 2026 18:36
Never for the Worthy
Jabberwocky said:
Grace is never for the worthy
I like that.
That\'s where Ive been going wrong...
I guess thinking that we deserve grace kinda proves that we don\'t.
September 3rd, 2026 14:13
Jabberwocky said:
Grace is never for the worthy
I like that.
That\'s where Ive been going wrong...
I guess thinking that we deserve grace kinda proves that we don\'t.
September 3rd, 2026 14:13
Jackassassination
sorenbarrett said:
John F. known as Jack was indeed assassinated and I remember the day well. Some said he was a Jackass others a prince of Camelot. Plenty of vultures but I don\'t buy the story given. Well written
September 3rd, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
John F. known as Jack was indeed assassinated and I remember the day well. Some said he was a Jackass others a prince of Camelot. Plenty of vultures but I don\'t buy the story given. Well written
September 3rd, 2026 10:26
The Hoka Polka
Neville said:
Ha .. I read this yesterday .. and have only just stopped chuckling enough to hit the write keys just now .. Funnily enough, that\'s pretty much true .. perhaps .. Neville 😎🖤⭐🐦⬛🌻🐈⬛⚫🥀👍
September 3rd, 2026 03:35
Neville said:
Ha .. I read this yesterday .. and have only just stopped chuckling enough to hit the write keys just now .. Funnily enough, that\'s pretty much true .. perhaps .. Neville 😎🖤⭐🐦⬛🌻🐈⬛⚫🥀👍
September 3rd, 2026 03:35
The Hoka Polka
orchidee said:
Good write T. Why is it the F polka?! Yes, some lead us a merry dance - Popeye, Ol\'Tom, Obi, the Baters. Mr Hunt, ..... lol.
September 2nd, 2026 10:33
orchidee said:
Good write T. Why is it the F polka?! Yes, some lead us a merry dance - Popeye, Ol\'Tom, Obi, the Baters. Mr Hunt, ..... lol.
September 2nd, 2026 10:33
The Hoka Polka
sorenbarrett said:
Those rare ones do not have to dance to any dance but their own. A good write my friend
September 2nd, 2026 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Those rare ones do not have to dance to any dance but their own. A good write my friend
September 2nd, 2026 10:14
The Hoka Polka
Lorenz said:
The \'\' Haka-Polka \'\' now that\'s something new !
September 2nd, 2026 09:44
Lorenz said:
The \'\' Haka-Polka \'\' now that\'s something new !
September 2nd, 2026 09:44
The Hoka Polka
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This made me laugh, good write
September 2nd, 2026 09:12
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This made me laugh, good write
September 2nd, 2026 09:12
firefly
Jabberwocky said:
What? Are you trying to make me cry? I have a soft spot for children...and fireflies.
Very touching. I know because I was touched.
September 1st, 2026 16:09
Jabberwocky said:
What? Are you trying to make me cry? I have a soft spot for children...and fireflies.
Very touching. I know because I was touched.
September 1st, 2026 16:09
County Prison Museum
Syd said:
Hi Tristan,
It seems we haven\'t locked away and buried the worst dregs of society but gave them positions in government.
A clever write indeed.
- Syd 🍄
September 1st, 2026 12:43
Syd said:
Hi Tristan,
It seems we haven\'t locked away and buried the worst dregs of society but gave them positions in government.
A clever write indeed.
- Syd 🍄
September 1st, 2026 12:43
County Prison Museum
Paul Bell said:
They make sure they never go in there, but make sure others do.
Do they still break rocks in America.
September 1st, 2026 11:41
Paul Bell said:
They make sure they never go in there, but make sure others do.
Do they still break rocks in America.
September 1st, 2026 11:41
County Prison Museum
orchidee said:
Good write T. A museum of brollies for.... WCAT! lol.
September 1st, 2026 10:29
orchidee said:
Good write T. A museum of brollies for.... WCAT! lol.
September 1st, 2026 10:29
County Prison Museum
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write my friend
September 1st, 2026 08:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
much enjoyed write my friend
September 1st, 2026 08:58
County Prison Museum
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan a commemoration of the worst fits of society. The us at the end of a line has double meaning (we or the United States) maybe the same. Well written my friend
September 1st, 2026 07:46
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan a commemoration of the worst fits of society. The us at the end of a line has double meaning (we or the United States) maybe the same. Well written my friend
September 1st, 2026 07:46
firefly
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn tender sadness in this, with the firefly becoming a little vessel for one last glimpse of innocent joy before the light goes out. The child’s “wide eyes” and “face of surprise” keep the ending from becoming purely bleak—they give that final flicker a reason to matter.
September 1st, 2026 06:49
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn tender sadness in this, with the firefly becoming a little vessel for one last glimpse of innocent joy before the light goes out. The child’s “wide eyes” and “face of surprise” keep the ending from becoming purely bleak—they give that final flicker a reason to matter.
September 1st, 2026 06:49
firefly
Paul Bell said:
You live you die you eat a pie but you\'ll never be a firefly.
The innocence of youth, if only you could bottle it.
August 31st, 2026 14:11
Paul Bell said:
You live you die you eat a pie but you\'ll never be a firefly.
The innocence of youth, if only you could bottle it.
August 31st, 2026 14:11
firefly
orchidee said:
Good write T. I too wish to be a firefly on a wall, but not in Popeye\'s room. Why not? WCAT!! lol.
August 31st, 2026 09:22
orchidee said:
Good write T. I too wish to be a firefly on a wall, but not in Popeye\'s room. Why not? WCAT!! lol.
August 31st, 2026 09:22
firefly
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of a firefly, representing life and vitality, and the emotions tied to the end of life. The imagery of a child experiencing joy reflects the innocence and purity associated with youth.
August 31st, 2026 08:47
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around the metaphor of a firefly, representing life and vitality, and the emotions tied to the end of life. The imagery of a child experiencing joy reflects the innocence and purity associated with youth.
August 31st, 2026 08:47
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