Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange

Requiem Aeternam
lonelyraccoon said:

I love this piece, it flows very well with an eye-opening message to top it off

May 27th, 2019 19:03

SoulMeetsBody said:

Interesting concept! Reminds me of a much bleaker version of the lyrics of To Build A Home - the themes of a home disintegrating are subtler, yet still there. Hope you like the song. -

May 19th, 2019 17:16

In the End
Goldfinch60 said:

We may fall down hard but all we need to do is look for the light in our lives and go towards it.

January 8th, 2019 01:31

In the End
whisperingquill said:

That third stanza
πŸ‘πŸΌ excellent weaving
Really damn potent

January 7th, 2019 23:05

sylviasearcher said:

Be a phoenix not a phantom?

January 3rd, 2019 03:37


Very interesting and well written...please see my poem \"Phantoms\"...take care...Happy New Year

January 3rd, 2019 02:51

Midnight Dreary

Nice job

December 2nd, 2018 06:32

Tristan Robert Lange said:

Lol! Could be.

November 24th, 2018 09:15

Voyage de l\'enfer
orchidee said:

Oo-er I looked up \'Enfer\'. Wikipedia says it\'s something swoony! heehee.

February 11th, 2018 03:03

Born of the Night.
Lorna said:

Good one............

January 29th, 2018 05:08

No Response
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, sometimes apathy can be a great weapon.

January 23rd, 2018 01:51

I Once Knew You
Aislinn Wilson said:

Very powerful

January 17th, 2018 09:18

The Walls
Resa71 said:

That was truly amazing! I also suffer from depression. Your poem literally gave me chills.:)

January 10th, 2018 03:21

The Walls
kevin browne said:

comfort in despair, what a beautiful line and along side you work here feels just the same. well crafted thought towards a very important condition. I have suffered immensely with depression but use poetry for my medicine which help lots. thanks for giving hope, it\'s well received.

January 9th, 2018 21:49

Death Rattle
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 2nd, 2018 11:55

Death Rattle
Louis Gibbs said:

An enticing, enigmatic write, TR. I enjoyed reading it.

January 2nd, 2018 10:20

Dans la mort de la nuit
Shadowbox15 said:

Why are you using plural? Also β€œmort” is masculine.

December 27th, 2017 12:01

UnspokenVoice92 said:

Its something about this.. amazing.

December 24th, 2017 03:13

Flesh and Blood
Candlewitch said:

what fantastic imagery!!! made me tingle!!!

*hugs, Cat

December 20th, 2017 13:26

Death Becomes Me
orchidee said:

Oohh have a nice cup of tea instead, and not be too \'dark\'! The tea should sort out things, along with a slice of cake and a chat with a friend. lol.

December 16th, 2017 06:42

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one you have told to whom.

October 17th, 2017 00:50

Razorblade Symphony
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thank you so much. Appreciate you reading and commenting.

October 5th, 2017 17:46

Mugsdaddy said:

Really really good I like the flow and the style excellent write.

October 4th, 2017 21:02

Accidental Poet said:

Yes, perfect for this time of year. Very well written. ; )

October 4th, 2017 18:20

orchidee said:

You run out of \'E\'s on your keyboard?! heehee. A fin3 writ3 (lol) though not really my genre. It\'s odd - I heard of someone spelling their name \'Su3an\'.

October 2nd, 2017 14:32

A House With No Mirrors
myself and me said:

not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us, so that we could all go blind.

August 15th, 2017 21:57

Afraid to Love
Night Owl said:

Thought provoking! Makes me remember and feel... Took me places I had buried... Yes this world can be argggggg...

August 5th, 2017 08:04

The Tolling of the Bell
Q said:

This could easily be a song. Well done.

July 24th, 2017 18:57

Candlewitch said:

I loved every line of this poem! you really bring the demon to light with your emotion and imagery! I keep my demon in the cellar in a choke chain!

*hugs, Cat

July 12th, 2017 12:13

Nicholas Browning said:

Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of life\'s truest endeavors. I hope you find inspiration here sir, as I have in this poem. Good job.

July 11th, 2017 21:37

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