Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Letter T
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Oh no, lookie here says Popeye. He needs a poem on the letter G for glug! lol. Doh! Not NOW, Popeye! lol.
April 3rd, 2026 09:48
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Oh no, lookie here says Popeye. He needs a poem on the letter G for glug! lol. Doh! Not NOW, Popeye! lol.
April 3rd, 2026 09:48
The Letter T
Friendship said:
\'Powerful..........With just a few words, God created everything in Heaven and on Earth! What situation are you facing in your life right now that seems as hopeless as dry bones rotting in a field? Will you have the faith of Ezekiel and prophesy over the dry bones in your life? Will you command the dry bones to come back to life, and to hear the Word of the Lord! On this day, Good Friday, Jesus\' sacrifice for humanity is commemorated. According to Mark 15:33, \'At noon, darkness fell over the entire land, lasting until three in the afternoon.\' As stated in Luke 23:44-45, \'It was approximately noon when darkness enveloped the entire land, persisting until three in the afternoon due to the sun\'s cessation of light, and the temple\'s veil was torn in two.\'
April 3rd, 2026 07:50
Friendship said:
\'Powerful..........With just a few words, God created everything in Heaven and on Earth! What situation are you facing in your life right now that seems as hopeless as dry bones rotting in a field? Will you have the faith of Ezekiel and prophesy over the dry bones in your life? Will you command the dry bones to come back to life, and to hear the Word of the Lord! On this day, Good Friday, Jesus\' sacrifice for humanity is commemorated. According to Mark 15:33, \'At noon, darkness fell over the entire land, lasting until three in the afternoon.\' As stated in Luke 23:44-45, \'It was approximately noon when darkness enveloped the entire land, persisting until three in the afternoon due to the sun\'s cessation of light, and the temple\'s veil was torn in two.\'
April 3rd, 2026 07:50
The Letter T
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure whether to classify this as haiku or senryu but none the less I take it for Titu or Tristan or Truth. Maybe all the same. Nicely done my friend
April 3rd, 2026 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure whether to classify this as haiku or senryu but none the less I take it for Titu or Tristan or Truth. Maybe all the same. Nicely done my friend
April 3rd, 2026 07:01
The Bitters
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - gets me twitter and bisted at times...
Short sharp call, Tristan.
April 2nd, 2026 22:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh - gets me twitter and bisted at times...
Short sharp call, Tristan.
April 2nd, 2026 22:01
The Bitters
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, that looks a bit like Popeye getting a look in. What\'s he up to? WCAT of course! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 10:48
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, that looks a bit like Popeye getting a look in. What\'s he up to? WCAT of course! lol.
April 2nd, 2026 10:48
The Bitters
Friendship said:
I\'m so sorry for your pain, but what a powerful statement you made! The statement explores themes of bitterness, emotional pain, and disillusionment. It conveys a sense of personal anguish tied to the experience of betrayal and the harshness of reality.
April 2nd, 2026 09:49
Friendship said:
I\'m so sorry for your pain, but what a powerful statement you made! The statement explores themes of bitterness, emotional pain, and disillusionment. It conveys a sense of personal anguish tied to the experience of betrayal and the harshness of reality.
April 2nd, 2026 09:49
The Bitters
Neville said:
this is a very fine example of one of my favourite poetic forms .. nice one T .. N 😎🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤👍
April 2nd, 2026 07:59
Neville said:
this is a very fine example of one of my favourite poetic forms .. nice one T .. N 😎🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤👍
April 2nd, 2026 07:59
The Bitters
arqios said:
Reminds me of the bitter herbs of the Seder. It brings thoughts back to the struggles and the lies. Good stuff here, Tittu🕊️🙏🏻
April 2nd, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
Reminds me of the bitter herbs of the Seder. It brings thoughts back to the struggles and the lies. Good stuff here, Tittu🕊️🙏🏻
April 2nd, 2026 07:00
The Bitters
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Tristan this poem not only sends its message covertly but overtly. Short but with great feeling it speaks to me of sadness and in metaphor the reason for it. It to me speaks of falseness and deceit and the bitterness that leaves a taste in one\'s mouth as well as tears in ones eyes. The poetic touch of tasting salt in the eyes was masterful. A lovely write my friend
April 2nd, 2026 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever Tristan this poem not only sends its message covertly but overtly. Short but with great feeling it speaks to me of sadness and in metaphor the reason for it. It to me speaks of falseness and deceit and the bitterness that leaves a taste in one\'s mouth as well as tears in ones eyes. The poetic touch of tasting salt in the eyes was masterful. A lovely write my friend
April 2nd, 2026 06:24
The Open Door
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I\'ve stepped into darkness and can\'t see a thing. Fat lot of us that was to me! But wait, it\'s a lot of us to us - we won\'t be able to see Popeye\'s antics. But we\'ll still hear the glugs! We knew we couldn\'t escape him completely. heehee.
April 1st, 2026 10:01
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I\'ve stepped into darkness and can\'t see a thing. Fat lot of us that was to me! But wait, it\'s a lot of us to us - we won\'t be able to see Popeye\'s antics. But we\'ll still hear the glugs! We knew we couldn\'t escape him completely. heehee.
April 1st, 2026 10:01
The Open Door
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great image created here where light illuminates the shadows. Nicely done Tristan
April 1st, 2026 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
There is a great image created here where light illuminates the shadows. Nicely done Tristan
April 1st, 2026 09:42
The False Dilemma
orchidee said:
Popeye has no dilemma about.....what? WCAT! lol.
March 31st, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Popeye has no dilemma about.....what? WCAT! lol.
March 31st, 2026 09:57
The False Dilemma
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan again I can not help but go beneath the surface of your writes. We are told that prayers and faith buy God but are they not but taxes. To pay tribute in any form is a tax whether crops, livestock, loyalty, service all have been paid by serfs of the past to their lord. And so we are asked to pay allegiance, obey commandments, have faith, pay tithes, acknowledge him all taxes
March 31st, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan again I can not help but go beneath the surface of your writes. We are told that prayers and faith buy God but are they not but taxes. To pay tribute in any form is a tax whether crops, livestock, loyalty, service all have been paid by serfs of the past to their lord. And so we are asked to pay allegiance, obey commandments, have faith, pay tithes, acknowledge him all taxes
March 31st, 2026 09:31
The Overturning
sorenbarrett said:
That made me think Tristan and that is a good thing. I could hear the gears grinding as the rust fell off. A definite fave. My house is not for sale either unless someone wants to pay more than I think anyone would for it. (everything has a price)
March 30th, 2026 15:13
sorenbarrett said:
That made me think Tristan and that is a good thing. I could hear the gears grinding as the rust fell off. A definite fave. My house is not for sale either unless someone wants to pay more than I think anyone would for it. (everything has a price)
March 30th, 2026 15:13
The Overturning
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Alas, we can\'t overturn Popeye\'s antics! lol. Why not? WCAT. lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:36
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Alas, we can\'t overturn Popeye\'s antics! lol. Why not? WCAT. lol.
March 30th, 2026 10:36
The Overturning
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - you are pandering to my short humerous side
People love a sale
they think their buys are bargains
but sails are for boats
March 30th, 2026 09:32
Michael Edwards said:
Love it - you are pandering to my short humerous side
People love a sale
they think their buys are bargains
but sails are for boats
March 30th, 2026 09:32
Crucifixion Pending
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who was it who said, \"When it`s your time to die, you`re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it \"(when you were born). Somedays I feel dragged down by it Tristan, and then there`s all the \"evil\" residing in me, ffs! The words Of Manjushri regarding this give me great comfort.
March 29th, 2026 19:07
Mutley Ravishes said:
Who was it who said, \"When it`s your time to die, you`re going to leave this world just as evil as you found it \"(when you were born). Somedays I feel dragged down by it Tristan, and then there`s all the \"evil\" residing in me, ffs! The words Of Manjushri regarding this give me great comfort.
March 29th, 2026 19:07
Crucifixion Pending
Doggerel Dave said:
So there I am, slowly progressing up today’s offerings… Tristan! – nah, given the time of year It will be one of his deeply Christian offerings full of questions and torture of the soul… However, as it turned out the relationship between power and conformity was something I could relate to immediately.👍😂
(Not quite \'😂\', but I\'m sure you know what I mean...)
March 29th, 2026 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
So there I am, slowly progressing up today’s offerings… Tristan! – nah, given the time of year It will be one of his deeply Christian offerings full of questions and torture of the soul… However, as it turned out the relationship between power and conformity was something I could relate to immediately.👍😂
(Not quite \'😂\', but I\'m sure you know what I mean...)
March 29th, 2026 18:43
Crucifixion Pending
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the tension between moral integrity and societal pressures. It contrasts the notion of \"every dog will have its day\" with a grim portrayal of humanity\'s willingness to compromise its values out of fear and caution. The poet suggests a sense of urgency for change, calling out the complacency of humanity in the face of moral crises, symbolized by the reference to a \'crucifixion.\' Overall, it highlights themes of fear, sacrifice, and the struggle to maintain ethical principles in a challenging world.
March 29th, 2026 16:36
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem revolves around the tension between moral integrity and societal pressures. It contrasts the notion of \"every dog will have its day\" with a grim portrayal of humanity\'s willingness to compromise its values out of fear and caution. The poet suggests a sense of urgency for change, calling out the complacency of humanity in the face of moral crises, symbolized by the reference to a \'crucifixion.\' Overall, it highlights themes of fear, sacrifice, and the struggle to maintain ethical principles in a challenging world.
March 29th, 2026 16:36
Crucifixion Pending
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this has great meaning in the acrostic and the time of the year. Twelve the number of apostles, the tribes of Israel, months in the year and zodiac, twenty eight the number of completion and the Lamb. Thirty nine the number of completion of trial. Thirty nine lashes given to the apostle Paul. Who is going to find themselves in such? Nicely written my friend
March 29th, 2026 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this has great meaning in the acrostic and the time of the year. Twelve the number of apostles, the tribes of Israel, months in the year and zodiac, twenty eight the number of completion and the Lamb. Thirty nine the number of completion of trial. Thirty nine lashes given to the apostle Paul. Who is going to find themselves in such? Nicely written my friend
March 29th, 2026 11:55
Crucifixion Pending
orchidee said:
Popeye nipped in to do that sum. He says, Answer:39. That\'ll be 12+28-1.lol. What? He\'s too busy doing sums and no spare time to glug?! lol.
March 29th, 2026 11:23
orchidee said:
Popeye nipped in to do that sum. He says, Answer:39. That\'ll be 12+28-1.lol. What? He\'s too busy doing sums and no spare time to glug?! lol.
March 29th, 2026 11:23
The Great Substitution
Thomas W Case said:
This bites like iron on old wood—faith twisted into chains, power masquerading as divine.
The words echo sharp, a sermon for the wary, a warning scribbled in shadow and ash.
March 29th, 2026 08:27
Thomas W Case said:
This bites like iron on old wood—faith twisted into chains, power masquerading as divine.
The words echo sharp, a sermon for the wary, a warning scribbled in shadow and ash.
March 29th, 2026 08:27
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