Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the interruption of decay
arqios said:
Hurray, I read it like the legend below, on the first go as well! Very intuitive layout, there. At least to my style of visual engagement. 🕊️🙏🤩
May 4th, 2026 18:28
arqios said:
Hurray, I read it like the legend below, on the first go as well! Very intuitive layout, there. At least to my style of visual engagement. 🕊️🙏🤩
May 4th, 2026 18:28
the interruption of decay
Katie B. said:
Well done. You put a lot of effort in to this one.
May 4th, 2026 15:06
Katie B. said:
Well done. You put a lot of effort in to this one.
May 4th, 2026 15:06
the interruption of decay
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this breaths philosopher\'s stone from alchemy and in the word shaped apothecary jar. It is dark and full or the humors of body fluids and speaks to the belief that transmutation can be achieved through magical means. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this breaths philosopher\'s stone from alchemy and in the word shaped apothecary jar. It is dark and full or the humors of body fluids and speaks to the belief that transmutation can be achieved through magical means. Well done my friend
May 4th, 2026 12:55
the interruption of decay
orchidee said:
Popeye thinking dark? Or thinking only of spinach?! lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:28
orchidee said:
Popeye thinking dark? Or thinking only of spinach?! lol.
May 4th, 2026 10:28
the interruption of decay
Friendship said:
Okay, I need a nap after reading this one, Tristan. Well written. Your poem \"The Interruption of decay\" explores themes of mortality, preservation, and the cyclical nature of life and death. It delves into the ancient Egyptian practice of mummification and the spiritual significance of preserving the body for the afterlife. The poet, identified as Anubis, the god of the underworld, emphasizes the meticulous rituals involved in preparing the deceased for their journey beyond death.
May 4th, 2026 09:30
Friendship said:
Okay, I need a nap after reading this one, Tristan. Well written. Your poem \"The Interruption of decay\" explores themes of mortality, preservation, and the cyclical nature of life and death. It delves into the ancient Egyptian practice of mummification and the spiritual significance of preserving the body for the afterlife. The poet, identified as Anubis, the god of the underworld, emphasizes the meticulous rituals involved in preparing the deceased for their journey beyond death.
May 4th, 2026 09:30
the interruption of decay
Salvia.S said:
The sarcophagus shape hits before i even read a word. The clinical brutality of pack the body full of coarse salt to pull all of the damp moisture out next to wrapped in textual binding makes the whole piece feel like you\'re mummifying language itself. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 4th, 2026 09:17
Salvia.S said:
The sarcophagus shape hits before i even read a word. The clinical brutality of pack the body full of coarse salt to pull all of the damp moisture out next to wrapped in textual binding makes the whole piece feel like you\'re mummifying language itself. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 4th, 2026 09:17
Goosefire Fortitude
Teddy.15 said:
Well you did have me worried there for a minute 🤣 🔥 yes let\'s both go down with Dante, that\'s where all the great company is!
May 3rd, 2026 17:15
Teddy.15 said:
Well you did have me worried there for a minute 🤣 🔥 yes let\'s both go down with Dante, that\'s where all the great company is!
May 3rd, 2026 17:15
misfit
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve inspired me to share my delinquent evolved for tomorrow. I will never fit in and was never ment to. Like one of my biggest heroes said. I am not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here to live up to mine. Be water my friend.~Bruce Lee
Love your work.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect 🙏 🫡
May 3rd, 2026 16:31
Poetic Dan said:
You\'ve inspired me to share my delinquent evolved for tomorrow. I will never fit in and was never ment to. Like one of my biggest heroes said. I am not here to live up to your expectations and you are not here to live up to mine. Be water my friend.~Bruce Lee
Love your work.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect 🙏 🫡
May 3rd, 2026 16:31
Goosefire Fortitude
Salvia.S said:
This reads like a declaration of spiritual self-rule, taking authority directly from Christ and refusing any version of salvation that demands conformity. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 12:18
Salvia.S said:
This reads like a declaration of spiritual self-rule, taking authority directly from Christ and refusing any version of salvation that demands conformity. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
May 3rd, 2026 12:18
Goosefire Fortitude
Paul Bell said:
Religion is different things to different people.
I look to the vatican, pure opulence, and I wonder.
Other religions have it too, palacial buildings dripping in gold.
Maybe religion got hijacked somewhere along the line, but to me, gold bars and poverty rarely ever meet.
May 3rd, 2026 08:15
Paul Bell said:
Religion is different things to different people.
I look to the vatican, pure opulence, and I wonder.
Other religions have it too, palacial buildings dripping in gold.
Maybe religion got hijacked somewhere along the line, but to me, gold bars and poverty rarely ever meet.
May 3rd, 2026 08:15
Goosefire Fortitude
Friendship said:
Well said. This poem asserts that true authority belongs solely to Jesus Christ and rejects any form of religious idolization or uniformity that detracts from personal conviction. The words encompass themes of spiritual autonomy, the critique of institutional religion, and the embrace of personal beliefs, even in the face of potential suffering or persecution.
May 3rd, 2026 07:48
Friendship said:
Well said. This poem asserts that true authority belongs solely to Jesus Christ and rejects any form of religious idolization or uniformity that detracts from personal conviction. The words encompass themes of spiritual autonomy, the critique of institutional religion, and the embrace of personal beliefs, even in the face of potential suffering or persecution.
May 3rd, 2026 07:48
Goosefire Fortitude
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted my friend although not a religious person I do believe in being spiritual and I see religion and conformity and unity and spirituality as individuality and there is no money in that. A good write my friend
May 3rd, 2026 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Well crafted my friend although not a religious person I do believe in being spiritual and I see religion and conformity and unity and spirituality as individuality and there is no money in that. A good write my friend
May 3rd, 2026 07:18
Goosefire Fortitude
arqios said:
Beats me how manipulation and control are religious go tos and autopilot modes. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:10
arqios said:
Beats me how manipulation and control are religious go tos and autopilot modes. 🕊️🙏🏻
May 3rd, 2026 07:10
misfit
orchidee said:
One says - glug - we knows him - that he can perfectly fit inside a giant tin of spinach. When he\'s ate all the spinach, of course.
I\'m gonna fill that mould with, erm..... clay. lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:16
orchidee said:
One says - glug - we knows him - that he can perfectly fit inside a giant tin of spinach. When he\'s ate all the spinach, of course.
I\'m gonna fill that mould with, erm..... clay. lol.
May 3rd, 2026 02:16
misfit
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
arqios said:
This poem appears to revolve around identity and its being a fluid construct then deals with not-belonging, turning into questioning the need to belong at all, and ends by rejecting the system that demands conformity in the first place. 🕊️🙏
May 2nd, 2026 20:44
misfit
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
Katie B. said:
We should not try to \"fit\" into others expectations of us \"the mold.\" We are to honor self. This is my interpretation. Well written!
May 2nd, 2026 13:44
misfit
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
The social demand to fit what one is not meant to is high and such pressure presses many into uncomfortable containers. I\'m with you be yourself and society will need to find new packaging. Well written my friend and a fave
May 2nd, 2026 12:48
misfit
Friendship said:
Your poem is powerful and speaks of not fitting in a world that has changed. Your poem revolves around the struggle for individuality and the rejection of societal norms and expectations. The poet questions the necessity and desire to conform to predefined molds or roles (\"how can I fit when i wasn’t made that shape?\"). Your poem addresses themes of identity, self-acceptance, and defiance against external pressures to conform.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Friendship said:
Your poem is powerful and speaks of not fitting in a world that has changed. Your poem revolves around the struggle for individuality and the rejection of societal norms and expectations. The poet questions the necessity and desire to conform to predefined molds or roles (\"how can I fit when i wasn’t made that shape?\"). Your poem addresses themes of identity, self-acceptance, and defiance against external pressures to conform.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Glugonomics
Waiting for Silence said:
Playful rhyme and metaphor to describe the inevitability of cause and effect with super comic timing.
May 1st, 2026 10:19
Waiting for Silence said:
Playful rhyme and metaphor to describe the inevitability of cause and effect with super comic timing.
May 1st, 2026 10:19
Pervy Jackson and the Kingdom of the Crystal Ego
Teddy.15 said:
LOL boy do you know how to cheer me up! Hey all jokes a side my condolences to all you fabulous Americans who did not vote for this wannabe Hugh Hefner 🤣🤣 in Europe we have been witnessing some truly disturbing art in these weeks. Obama was spot on the money with the Trump regime sad but true. 🌹
April 30th, 2026 00:04
Teddy.15 said:
LOL boy do you know how to cheer me up! Hey all jokes a side my condolences to all you fabulous Americans who did not vote for this wannabe Hugh Hefner 🤣🤣 in Europe we have been witnessing some truly disturbing art in these weeks. Obama was spot on the money with the Trump regime sad but true. 🌹
April 30th, 2026 00:04
Glugonomics
Neville said:
as crazy as it may seem, this makes perfect sense to those in the know .. bravo .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐧🌻👍
April 30th, 2026 00:00
Neville said:
as crazy as it may seem, this makes perfect sense to those in the know .. bravo .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤🐧🌻👍
April 30th, 2026 00:00
Glugonomics
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m Sir Orchi NS (non sequitur), Dave says! It means I talk nonsense, go off at tangents, etc, and then folk say \'No change there then\'. lol. And WCAT of many things. lol.
April 28th, 2026 02:48
orchidee said:
Yes, I\'m Sir Orchi NS (non sequitur), Dave says! It means I talk nonsense, go off at tangents, etc, and then folk say \'No change there then\'. lol. And WCAT of many things. lol.
April 28th, 2026 02:48
Glugonomics
Doggerel Dave said:
Never really came to terms with all that glugging - don\'t know quite why; I think I\'m in enough trouble following the good orchi\'s train of thought when responses from me are required.. Any explanation would be gratefully received from either of you....
April 27th, 2026 17:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Never really came to terms with all that glugging - don\'t know quite why; I think I\'m in enough trouble following the good orchi\'s train of thought when responses from me are required.. Any explanation would be gratefully received from either of you....
April 27th, 2026 17:47
Glugonomics
orchidee said:
We know now - WCAT is Where Chaos and Threads Collide - isn\'t it?! There he is glugging! lol.
April 27th, 2026 09:15
orchidee said:
We know now - WCAT is Where Chaos and Threads Collide - isn\'t it?! There he is glugging! lol.
April 27th, 2026 09:15
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