Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Diet of Carp
arqios said:
The play on words both wax sharply! Brandishing and clashing ⚔️🤺🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 10:06
arqios said:
The play on words both wax sharply! Brandishing and clashing ⚔️🤺🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2026 10:06
Diet of Carp
orchidee said:
Argh! An English King, Henry I, I think, died from a surfeit of lampreys - horrid things to eat, eel-like things. Never had one in my life, and not about to start now either. Meanwhile, P eats them with spinach I reckon. lol. What can WCAT reveal to us? Nothing, of course! heehee.
May 18th, 2026 09:19
orchidee said:
Argh! An English King, Henry I, I think, died from a surfeit of lampreys - horrid things to eat, eel-like things. Never had one in my life, and not about to start now either. Meanwhile, P eats them with spinach I reckon. lol. What can WCAT reveal to us? Nothing, of course! heehee.
May 18th, 2026 09:19
Diet of Carp
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and their meaning. Enjoyed the rhyme play as well. Isn\'t life a word play as well with misunderstandings and careful choice of words to not offend or maybe offend. In this we are all the jokers and butt of the joke. All a matter of view. Well written my friend
May 18th, 2026 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
A fun play on words and their meaning. Enjoyed the rhyme play as well. Isn\'t life a word play as well with misunderstandings and careful choice of words to not offend or maybe offend. In this we are all the jokers and butt of the joke. All a matter of view. Well written my friend
May 18th, 2026 09:02
Diet of Carp
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi...in advance, yes, there is a Diet of Glug too! And we all know who wants that! 🤣
May 18th, 2026 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orchi...in advance, yes, there is a Diet of Glug too! And we all know who wants that! 🤣
May 18th, 2026 08:09
lumiere gets lit
Waiting for Silence said:
Beautifully captures how even a spark can ignite hope. Good Write
May 17th, 2026 23:53
Waiting for Silence said:
Beautifully captures how even a spark can ignite hope. Good Write
May 17th, 2026 23:53
God Speaks Like a Woman
Waiting for Silence said:
Powerful expression of courage and spiritual conviction. Good One
May 17th, 2026 23:52
Waiting for Silence said:
Powerful expression of courage and spiritual conviction. Good One
May 17th, 2026 23:52
God Speaks Like a Woman
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem.The idea of Woman speaking for God makes sense.After all they create new life and love.Strong thoughts here.Thoughtful
May 17th, 2026 18:24
David Wakeling said:
This is an important poem.The idea of Woman speaking for God makes sense.After all they create new life and love.Strong thoughts here.Thoughtful
May 17th, 2026 18:24
God Speaks Like a Woman
Teddy.15 said:
lol you better believe it! Ha ha this made me as a woman chuckle 🤭😁🤭
May 17th, 2026 13:31
Teddy.15 said:
lol you better believe it! Ha ha this made me as a woman chuckle 🤭😁🤭
May 17th, 2026 13:31
God Speaks Like a Woman
sorenbarrett said:
George Carlin said it and I echo it, if there is a god it must be a woman. In all of nature the woman is responsible for creation and birth, we even call her mother nature. Other cultures have women goddesses. And why must a creator have a gender? Even in the most radical of religions such as Catholicism they worship mother Mary. Would not God be an equal opportunity employer after all he/she created all.
May 17th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
George Carlin said it and I echo it, if there is a god it must be a woman. In all of nature the woman is responsible for creation and birth, we even call her mother nature. Other cultures have women goddesses. And why must a creator have a gender? Even in the most radical of religions such as Catholicism they worship mother Mary. Would not God be an equal opportunity employer after all he/she created all.
May 17th, 2026 13:22
God Speaks Like a Woman
orchidee said:
There\'s a fiery glug too - whatever that sounds like?! lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:16
orchidee said:
There\'s a fiery glug too - whatever that sounds like?! lol.
May 17th, 2026 12:16
God Speaks Like a Woman
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fire in this—raw conviction that won’t sit down or be talked out of standing tall,
Like a voice pushing through resistance just to say it believes what it believes, no matter the noise.
May 17th, 2026 08:59
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fire in this—raw conviction that won’t sit down or be talked out of standing tall,
Like a voice pushing through resistance just to say it believes what it believes, no matter the noise.
May 17th, 2026 08:59
God Speaks Like a Woman
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the themes of empowerment, gender equality, and the divine presence of femininity in spirituality. It presents a strong assertion that both women and men can recognize and experience the divine, emphasizing that women\'s voices and perspectives are essential in discussions of justice and spirituality.
May 17th, 2026 08:46
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores the themes of empowerment, gender equality, and the divine presence of femininity in spirituality. It presents a strong assertion that both women and men can recognize and experience the divine, emphasizing that women\'s voices and perspectives are essential in discussions of justice and spirituality.
May 17th, 2026 08:46
What Does It Matter?
NafisaSB said:
a good and reflective expose which reveals something different to each reader depending on the way interpreted...
May 16th, 2026 23:51
NafisaSB said:
a good and reflective expose which reveals something different to each reader depending on the way interpreted...
May 16th, 2026 23:51
lumiere gets lit
David Wakeling said:
For me the metaphor is activation.It doesn\'t take much effort to get things started.and they can be extraordinary when you start.Made me think
May 16th, 2026 17:33
David Wakeling said:
For me the metaphor is activation.It doesn\'t take much effort to get things started.and they can be extraordinary when you start.Made me think
May 16th, 2026 17:33
lumiere gets lit
Neville said:
This is one of them that\'s just a tad special .. I\'m betting the Art of Being collection is something else too .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛😎🖤🖤🌻🦋🐈⬛⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 11:47
Neville said:
This is one of them that\'s just a tad special .. I\'m betting the Art of Being collection is something else too .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛😎🖤🖤🌻🦋🐈⬛⭐👍
May 16th, 2026 11:47
lumiere gets lit
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Also - the mere spark of the start of.... another glug. We hear it! lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:34
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Also - the mere spark of the start of.... another glug. We hear it! lol.
May 16th, 2026 11:34
lumiere gets lit
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 09:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, much enjoyed
May 16th, 2026 09:58
lumiere gets lit
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, short like the flaring of a match but bright it sparkles with rhyme and flames with alliteration. A truly wonderful write my friend. A fave
May 16th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful, short like the flaring of a match but bright it sparkles with rhyme and flames with alliteration. A truly wonderful write my friend. A fave
May 16th, 2026 09:09
lumiere gets lit
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem uses the metaphor of light as a symbol of hope or knowledge, juxtaposed against darkness, which represents ignorance, despair, or confusion. Your imagery of a match striking and birthing light signifies the powerful emergence of clarity or inspiration from a place of obscurity.
May 16th, 2026 09:05
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem uses the metaphor of light as a symbol of hope or knowledge, juxtaposed against darkness, which represents ignorance, despair, or confusion. Your imagery of a match striking and birthing light signifies the powerful emergence of clarity or inspiration from a place of obscurity.
May 16th, 2026 09:05
Widow Makers
Neville said:
Poe would be proud of ya Tristan .. You are quite the master of noir .. 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🖤🖤🖤👍
May 16th, 2026 03:10
Neville said:
Poe would be proud of ya Tristan .. You are quite the master of noir .. 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🖤🖤🖤👍
May 16th, 2026 03:10
Widow Makers
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Reminds me a little of edgar allan poe but it has its own unique twists and turns.So well constructed I just had to read it twice.Made me think
May 15th, 2026 18:57
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.Reminds me a little of edgar allan poe but it has its own unique twists and turns.So well constructed I just had to read it twice.Made me think
May 15th, 2026 18:57
Widow Makers
Doggerel Dave said:
Away with Poe’s poem (not because there’s anything amiss with those comparisons – they are spot on and I have a feeling in my water there will be more to come) but I’m interested in why, presumably the bible. caused you so much anguish. Your tortured soul came through loud and clear.
And in case there’s any doubt – That poem flowed for me, Tristan.
May 15th, 2026 17:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Away with Poe’s poem (not because there’s anything amiss with those comparisons – they are spot on and I have a feeling in my water there will be more to come) but I’m interested in why, presumably the bible. caused you so much anguish. Your tortured soul came through loud and clear.
And in case there’s any doubt – That poem flowed for me, Tristan.
May 15th, 2026 17:18
Widow Makers
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Tristan!!! This one should receive thousands of likes!!!! This one is different from ones I’ve read which is what makes it so intriguing!
May 15th, 2026 13:33
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Tristan!!! This one should receive thousands of likes!!!! This one is different from ones I’ve read which is what makes it so intriguing!
May 15th, 2026 13:33
Widow Makers
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Tristan I could tell from the very first it had the same meter and well crafted at that. It maintains a spooky aura as well with the darkness of the Raven. The issue of reading scriptures to this beat and tone is a most interesting venture. Is it to ward off the demons or to call them up? A fave my friend.
May 15th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Tristan I could tell from the very first it had the same meter and well crafted at that. It maintains a spooky aura as well with the darkness of the Raven. The issue of reading scriptures to this beat and tone is a most interesting venture. Is it to ward off the demons or to call them up? A fave my friend.
May 15th, 2026 13:25
enjoy it!
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guv\'nor, I\'m trying desperately hard to develop a nut allergy .. Neville 😎🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧🎵🎵👍
May 15th, 2026 12:39
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guv\'nor, I\'m trying desperately hard to develop a nut allergy .. Neville 😎🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧🎵🎵👍
May 15th, 2026 12:39
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