Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Frisbee Golf
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
Frisbee Golf
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Frisbee Golf
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
Frisbee Golf
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Frisbee Golf
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
Frisbee Golf
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
There’s a raw compassion here—a reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
There’s a raw compassion here—a reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Frisbee Golf
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Frisbee Golf
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
Marooned
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🌹🏴⚫🖤
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🌹🏴⚫🖤
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Marooned
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
Marooned
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway 💜
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway 💜
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Marooned
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
Marooned
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
come again?
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! 🤣
July 25th, 2026 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! 🤣
July 25th, 2026 00:50
come again?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
come again?
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium 🙏🏻🕊️
July 24th, 2026 08:48
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium 🙏🏻🕊️
July 24th, 2026 08:48
unequivocal unknowing
orchidee said:
All we know about is Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol. A Mr Hunt has joined them. Why? WCAT!
July 23rd, 2026 09:36
orchidee said:
All we know about is Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol. A Mr Hunt has joined them. Why? WCAT!
July 23rd, 2026 09:36
unequivocal unknowing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great wording in this piece, sometimes the more we think we know we actually know less
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great wording in this piece, sometimes the more we think we know we actually know less
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
unequivocal unknowing
sorenbarrett said:
Irises that control the amount of light entering the eye may be metaphoric controlling the amount of light (knowledge or truth) entering what we can understand. North the Masonic direction from which comes all instinctual knowledge. The mention of liminal or boundary between to me signifies that fuzzy area of awareness where things seem instinct blending into common sense where things are felt but can not be rationalized and here is the unknowing for all things contain a bit of this. Clever wording makes this poem work well where the mind and the ear roll all into a polished ball that seems to roll off the tongue and into the brain. Nicely done my friend
July 23rd, 2026 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Irises that control the amount of light entering the eye may be metaphoric controlling the amount of light (knowledge or truth) entering what we can understand. North the Masonic direction from which comes all instinctual knowledge. The mention of liminal or boundary between to me signifies that fuzzy area of awareness where things seem instinct blending into common sense where things are felt but can not be rationalized and here is the unknowing for all things contain a bit of this. Clever wording makes this poem work well where the mind and the ear roll all into a polished ball that seems to roll off the tongue and into the brain. Nicely done my friend
July 23rd, 2026 08:09
unequivocal unknowing
Teddy.15 said:
The iris is one of my favourite blooms, and the national flower of Firenze, this is really deeply beautiful as if you know someone so well, yet not at all. 🌹
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
Teddy.15 said:
The iris is one of my favourite blooms, and the national flower of Firenze, this is really deeply beautiful as if you know someone so well, yet not at all. 🌹
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
whichever precedes
arqios said:
Life is like a tooth! Needed, assaulted and measured by. Oh my. 🦷🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:56
arqios said:
Life is like a tooth! Needed, assaulted and measured by. Oh my. 🦷🙏🕊️
July 22nd, 2026 19:56
whichever precedes
Teddy.15 said:
The force of being in the right place at the right time and in the right hands 🌹
July 22nd, 2026 08:59
Teddy.15 said:
The force of being in the right place at the right time and in the right hands 🌹
July 22nd, 2026 08:59
whichever precedes
sorenbarrett said:
Whether tooth, man, civilization it speaks to the corruption that leads to decay and the need for removal. It is a grim picture of what is and what needs to be done. Well written my friend
July 22nd, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Whether tooth, man, civilization it speaks to the corruption that leads to decay and the need for removal. It is a grim picture of what is and what needs to be done. Well written my friend
July 22nd, 2026 08:15
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