Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
Friendship said:
Very well written, your statement addresses issues of visibility, the struggle for acceptance, and the often grim realities faced by those in the LGBTQ+ community, particularly in a heteronormative and phobic environment.
October 20th, 2026 19:22
Friendship said:
Very well written, your statement addresses issues of visibility, the struggle for acceptance, and the often grim realities faced by those in the LGBTQ+ community, particularly in a heteronormative and phobic environment.
October 20th, 2026 19:22
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most deep and yet delightfully open piece my friend, many roads does it lead
October 20th, 2026 13:06
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A most deep and yet delightfully open piece my friend, many roads does it lead
October 20th, 2026 13:06
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you could ask sorrenbarrets pussy? LoL I love the queen\'s they\'ve usually got more style and glamour than they know!
October 20th, 2026 10:57
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you could ask sorrenbarrets pussy? LoL I love the queen\'s they\'ve usually got more style and glamour than they know!
October 20th, 2026 10:57
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
sorenbarrett said:
A most entangled mind twisting write. On the surface it seemed straight (well maybe not) Anyway the mention of Queen brought Freddy to mind and he was gay was he not (yes in his music and performance as well as sexuality) Then there was Freddy of the film (Well the other Freddy had a film as well) I mean the one from Elm Street, the steel fingered fellow. Both were disposable creative commodities but one died young and the other was preserved burned. A fun mind tangling write anyway my friend and the confusion of names like wordplay gets a fave
October 20th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
A most entangled mind twisting write. On the surface it seemed straight (well maybe not) Anyway the mention of Queen brought Freddy to mind and he was gay was he not (yes in his music and performance as well as sexuality) Then there was Freddy of the film (Well the other Freddy had a film as well) I mean the one from Elm Street, the steel fingered fellow. Both were disposable creative commodities but one died young and the other was preserved burned. A fun mind tangling write anyway my friend and the confusion of names like wordplay gets a fave
October 20th, 2026 10:26
Nightmare on Film Street: Mark Patton’s Revenge
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oh no, not Mondays! lol.
October 20th, 2026 10:24
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oh no, not Mondays! lol.
October 20th, 2026 10:24
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Political thugs from the top down, encouraging thuggish behaviour. It is no wonder the bedrooms of teenagers have become war rooms and the streets the battlefields of rage. Great stuff from you, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:43
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Political thugs from the top down, encouraging thuggish behaviour. It is no wonder the bedrooms of teenagers have become war rooms and the streets the battlefields of rage. Great stuff from you, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 20th, 2026 09:43
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Gritty and sharp.
October 20th, 2026 06:33
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Gritty and sharp.
October 20th, 2026 06:33
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
Jabberwocky said:
\"Noone can sell god their self righteousness\". Powerful line, that was one of my sins when I was older than I am now.
October 20th, 2026 04:02
Jabberwocky said:
\"Noone can sell god their self righteousness\". Powerful line, that was one of my sins when I was older than I am now.
October 20th, 2026 04:02
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
orchidee said:
Doh! I knew I\'d be scared on Mondays! But more scarier surely is the sound of glugs. Your next poem: \'The Ghastly Glugs\'? lol.
Along I came and took the edge off anything scary, horrific, ghastly, by making some daft comment or suggestion. lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:42
orchidee said:
Doh! I knew I\'d be scared on Mondays! But more scarier surely is the sound of glugs. Your next poem: \'The Ghastly Glugs\'? lol.
Along I came and took the edge off anything scary, horrific, ghastly, by making some daft comment or suggestion. lol.
October 20th, 2026 02:42
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 13 year old son and you have just put into perspective the world we live in, my son has been immensely educated on phone use and doesn\'t have any social network but these people get into every nook and cranny and your words are so powerful, you really have an eye opening poem here .thank you dear Tristan and I thank you as a mother. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 14:51
Teddy.15 said:
I have a 13 year old son and you have just put into perspective the world we live in, my son has been immensely educated on phone use and doesn\'t have any social network but these people get into every nook and cranny and your words are so powerful, you really have an eye opening poem here .thank you dear Tristan and I thank you as a mother. 🌹
October 19th, 2026 14:51
Devilishly Dreadful: The Wild Kids of America; or, The Children of Fright
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered how far power\'s manipulation goes. This poem speaks of an administration now hated for its arrogance, stupidity and blunders. Could it be that the opposition planed this to gain as power again as a reaction to form a one world order over running borders destabilizing the old order and establishing a new order. Creepy thoughts when all is unknown.
October 19th, 2026 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
I have often wondered how far power\'s manipulation goes. This poem speaks of an administration now hated for its arrogance, stupidity and blunders. Could it be that the opposition planed this to gain as power again as a reaction to form a one world order over running borders destabilizing the old order and establishing a new order. Creepy thoughts when all is unknown.
October 19th, 2026 07:34
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
sorenbarrett said:
We all defend what we feel and see failing to understand that others are looking from a different perspective. One has to ask why do we always have to be right. A good write my friend
October 18th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
We all defend what we feel and see failing to understand that others are looking from a different perspective. One has to ask why do we always have to be right. A good write my friend
October 18th, 2026 07:44
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A clear precise message of hypocrisy in this piece my friend
October 18th, 2026 05:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A clear precise message of hypocrisy in this piece my friend
October 18th, 2026 05:26
beneath the veil
orchidee said:
What is Fall? = Autumn in the UK!
Is that Popeye in disguise, in some old dusty mask?
Argh! Monday approaching again. lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:27
orchidee said:
What is Fall? = Autumn in the UK!
Is that Popeye in disguise, in some old dusty mask?
Argh! Monday approaching again. lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:27
beneath the veil
Lorenz said:
The transition into the sign of scorpio is becoming noticeable !
October 17th, 2026 10:21
Lorenz said:
The transition into the sign of scorpio is becoming noticeable !
October 17th, 2026 10:21
beneath the veil
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark Indeed, and under the ash they still find remains. Ghastly and very clever. 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:22
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark Indeed, and under the ash they still find remains. Ghastly and very clever. 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:22
beneath the veil
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
The autuminal reaper casts its mists of death with neither let nor hinder, faceless and still in plain sight, the soul knows. Two powerfull snippets of verse.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:15
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
The autuminal reaper casts its mists of death with neither let nor hinder, faceless and still in plain sight, the soul knows. Two powerfull snippets of verse.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:15
beneath the veil
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece, death is the certainty
October 17th, 2026 08:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece, death is the certainty
October 17th, 2026 08:55
beneath the veil
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it. Autumn or Fall is a Dark, Miserable time of year. The Years nearly over, the Credits about to Roll , and those Early Nights will now descend.
Good Write.
October 17th, 2026 08:48
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it. Autumn or Fall is a Dark, Miserable time of year. The Years nearly over, the Credits about to Roll , and those Early Nights will now descend.
Good Write.
October 17th, 2026 08:48
the bone ball
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Tristan,
A rave in the charnel house - shake, rattle and bones, a noisy lot. You\'re in the groove, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:39
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Tristan,
A rave in the charnel house - shake, rattle and bones, a noisy lot. You\'re in the groove, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:39
beneath the veil
Salvia.S said:
Love the logic here, the more you shroud death, the more you confirm it. Fall doesn\'t hide the death, it is the veil. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 17th, 2026 06:31
Salvia.S said:
Love the logic here, the more you shroud death, the more you confirm it. Fall doesn\'t hide the death, it is the veil. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 17th, 2026 06:31
beneath the veil
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and clever this combination of the two is a dark dive into life and death. Nicely done Tristan it is quite a feat to find a word with so many syllables in a senryu. Loved it
October 17th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and clever this combination of the two is a dark dive into life and death. Nicely done Tristan it is quite a feat to find a word with so many syllables in a senryu. Loved it
October 17th, 2026 05:54
the bone ball
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem conveys a sense of unity among the dead (\"we skeletons all belong\"), implying that death is a shared experience that connects all beings.
October 16th, 2026 11:37
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem conveys a sense of unity among the dead (\"we skeletons all belong\"), implying that death is a shared experience that connects all beings.
October 16th, 2026 11:37
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