Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
samba mamba
Friendship said:
Well said, my friend. Your words capture a vibrant and playful essence of femininity and empowerment, mixing elements of seduction and strength. It portrays a character who embraces her allure and confidence, using fashion as a form of expression. The repeated calls to \"kiss me, mama!\" suggest a yearning for affection and recognition, blending sensuality with a familial bond.
June 24th, 2026 19:45
Friendship said:
Well said, my friend. Your words capture a vibrant and playful essence of femininity and empowerment, mixing elements of seduction and strength. It portrays a character who embraces her allure and confidence, using fashion as a form of expression. The repeated calls to \"kiss me, mama!\" suggest a yearning for affection and recognition, blending sensuality with a familial bond.
June 24th, 2026 19:45
samba mamba
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nostalgic fun read my friend, enjoyed
June 24th, 2026 13:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
nostalgic fun read my friend, enjoyed
June 24th, 2026 13:19
samba mamba
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan when I took ballroom dancing the samba was the first dance I wanted to learn and my wife and I did only to be disappointed after hundreds of hours to master it to find it is not the street samba they do in Brazil. I have tried to learn that one also but don\'t consider myself proficient. A fun poem reminiscent of the disco days that I lived through and danced the night away. Well done my friend you brought back some nostalgia
June 24th, 2026 11:34
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan when I took ballroom dancing the samba was the first dance I wanted to learn and my wife and I did only to be disappointed after hundreds of hours to master it to find it is not the street samba they do in Brazil. I have tried to learn that one also but don\'t consider myself proficient. A fun poem reminiscent of the disco days that I lived through and danced the night away. Well done my friend you brought back some nostalgia
June 24th, 2026 11:34
Chewie
Paul Bell said:
If you can afford a Louis bag, you\'ve got too much money.
Mind you, all those charactors could fit into a Louis bag.
Why do womens handbags weigh a ton, what\'s in them.
June 24th, 2026 08:56
Paul Bell said:
If you can afford a Louis bag, you\'ve got too much money.
Mind you, all those charactors could fit into a Louis bag.
Why do womens handbags weigh a ton, what\'s in them.
June 24th, 2026 08:56
Chewie
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I frown at the bags that turn credit cards to rags. What A weird and wonderful dream I could definitely see you as a swan though 🌹
June 23rd, 2026 15:44
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I frown at the bags that turn credit cards to rags. What A weird and wonderful dream I could definitely see you as a swan though 🌹
June 23rd, 2026 15:44
Chewie
sorenbarrett said:
Names and objects all connected in this poem Tristan. From a bag and a name to colors and crimes. A fun read with many inlays.
June 23rd, 2026 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Names and objects all connected in this poem Tristan. From a bag and a name to colors and crimes. A fun read with many inlays.
June 23rd, 2026 11:41
Chewie
orchidee said:
Have I got the films mixed up? Chewbacca, that Obi guy with saber; etc?! lol. We have Oi Be and I Yam. What rubbish we talk! lol.
June 23rd, 2026 11:31
orchidee said:
Have I got the films mixed up? Chewbacca, that Obi guy with saber; etc?! lol. We have Oi Be and I Yam. What rubbish we talk! lol.
June 23rd, 2026 11:31
final call
Thomas W Case said:
This feels stripped down and controlled, like emotion held just behind the teeth rather than spilling over.
The short lines give it a clipped finality—like someone choosing distance over escalation.
What stands out is the quiet pivot from negotiation to withdrawal: not anger, more resignation.
And that last image—“the night’s symphony”—turns ending into something strangely composed, almost graceful.
June 23rd, 2026 08:40
Thomas W Case said:
This feels stripped down and controlled, like emotion held just behind the teeth rather than spilling over.
The short lines give it a clipped finality—like someone choosing distance over escalation.
What stands out is the quiet pivot from negotiation to withdrawal: not anger, more resignation.
And that last image—“the night’s symphony”—turns ending into something strangely composed, almost graceful.
June 23rd, 2026 08:40
final call
orchidee said:
Me again! And now a call, a call of the wild, only heard by a rare creature. Examples of the call are \'glug\' and \'iyam\' (I yam). lol. Why does he have to spoil things every time? lol.
June 23rd, 2026 02:28
orchidee said:
Me again! And now a call, a call of the wild, only heard by a rare creature. Examples of the call are \'glug\' and \'iyam\' (I yam). lol. Why does he have to spoil things every time? lol.
June 23rd, 2026 02:28
final call
Teddy.15 said:
lol I love your strength, yes finish it right there Tristan you are far too good for anything less. 🌹 You know the most power is in the silence why fight, just get on with the rest of life in peace.
June 23rd, 2026 02:06
Teddy.15 said:
lol I love your strength, yes finish it right there Tristan you are far too good for anything less. 🌹 You know the most power is in the silence why fight, just get on with the rest of life in peace.
June 23rd, 2026 02:06
final call
arqios said:
To let the symphony carry us away is a grace unfailing. 🕊️🙏🏻🚀
June 22nd, 2026 20:36
arqios said:
To let the symphony carry us away is a grace unfailing. 🕊️🙏🏻🚀
June 22nd, 2026 20:36
final call
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t you just love the theory people, they can do anything with their minds.
Well actually when it comes to the practical bit, they\'re usually bloody hopeless.
June 22nd, 2026 12:57
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t you just love the theory people, they can do anything with their minds.
Well actually when it comes to the practical bit, they\'re usually bloody hopeless.
June 22nd, 2026 12:57
final call
Neville said:
Better out than in it seems .. & I bet you feel a whole lot better now don\'tcha 😎🖤⭐🏴🐈⬛🐦⬛👍
June 22nd, 2026 12:07
Neville said:
Better out than in it seems .. & I bet you feel a whole lot better now don\'tcha 😎🖤⭐🏴🐈⬛🐦⬛👍
June 22nd, 2026 12:07
final call
orchidee said:
Good write T.
There\'s never a: \'Glugging: the final call\'. It never ends, though drives us mad!\' lol.
June 22nd, 2026 10:48
orchidee said:
Good write T.
There\'s never a: \'Glugging: the final call\'. It never ends, though drives us mad!\' lol.
June 22nd, 2026 10:48
final call
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this one starts off hot and keeps rolling. It feels like I jumped on in the middle of the ride. Not sure where it came from or where it is going but whatever it is it is final. Well written my friend
June 22nd, 2026 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this one starts off hot and keeps rolling. It feels like I jumped on in the middle of the ride. Not sure where it came from or where it is going but whatever it is it is final. Well written my friend
June 22nd, 2026 10:09
final call
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around a dialogue that hints at emotional exhaustion and the realization that further discussion is pointless. The poet seems to confront someone who is unwilling to engage meaningfully, leading to a quiet resignation.
June 22nd, 2026 10:05
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around a dialogue that hints at emotional exhaustion and the realization that further discussion is pointless. The poet seems to confront someone who is unwilling to engage meaningfully, leading to a quiet resignation.
June 22nd, 2026 10:05
final call
ms.divine said:
What I got outah this the art of not over explaining or over doing or letting other motherfuckers question the work a person puts in
June 22nd, 2026 09:47
ms.divine said:
What I got outah this the art of not over explaining or over doing or letting other motherfuckers question the work a person puts in
June 22nd, 2026 09:47
The Fire, This Time
Salvia.S said:
\" Mostly away from the church \" wrecked me. You took the whole gap between what\'s preached and what\'s practiced and lit it on fire in 12 lines. \"Incarceration ain\'t incarnation \" is gonna live my head rent free. Fire work, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
June 21st, 2026 20:35
Salvia.S said:
\" Mostly away from the church \" wrecked me. You took the whole gap between what\'s preached and what\'s practiced and lit it on fire in 12 lines. \"Incarceration ain\'t incarnation \" is gonna live my head rent free. Fire work, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
June 21st, 2026 20:35
The Fire, This Time
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles against oppression, the falsehoods of societal norms, and the call for a more authentic, compassionate approach to faith and community.
June 21st, 2026 14:05
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses the struggles against oppression, the falsehoods of societal norms, and the call for a more authentic, compassionate approach to faith and community.
June 21st, 2026 14:05
The Fire, This Time
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic my friend I have for a long time proclaimed that church is the devils house that the true meaning is within each person\'s house of flesh. From prehistory to today churches exist for money and the imposition of hatred toward others that believe differently. Not, Buddha, Krishna, Christ, Mohamud, Lao Tzu established a church.
June 21st, 2026 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic my friend I have for a long time proclaimed that church is the devils house that the true meaning is within each person\'s house of flesh. From prehistory to today churches exist for money and the imposition of hatred toward others that believe differently. Not, Buddha, Krishna, Christ, Mohamud, Lao Tzu established a church.
June 21st, 2026 08:36
The Fire, This Time
Thomas W Case said:
Hard lines, brother—Christ walking you out of the building while the sellers lock the doors behind Him.
There’s fire in this, the kind that don’t wait for Sunday or permission.
You cut clean through the varnish—truth ain’t the problem, it’s who’s pricing it.
That last line don’t warn—it declares; the blaze already licking at the rafters.
June 21st, 2026 08:09
Thomas W Case said:
Hard lines, brother—Christ walking you out of the building while the sellers lock the doors behind Him.
There’s fire in this, the kind that don’t wait for Sunday or permission.
You cut clean through the varnish—truth ain’t the problem, it’s who’s pricing it.
That last line don’t warn—it declares; the blaze already licking at the rafters.
June 21st, 2026 08:09
The Fire, This Time
orchidee said:
Sitting around the fire with spinach soup to warm us, prepared by a glugger! lol. How come he always sneaks in? lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:06
orchidee said:
Sitting around the fire with spinach soup to warm us, prepared by a glugger! lol. How come he always sneaks in? lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:06
The Fire, This Time
arqios said:
This is happening all over the globe. And the establishment is grasping for control and the heavy foot of authority is shaking the ground.
June 21st, 2026 08:01
arqios said:
This is happening all over the globe. And the establishment is grasping for control and the heavy foot of authority is shaking the ground.
June 21st, 2026 08:01
The Fire, This Time
Paul Bell said:
Yes, blind faith is the way to go.
Never argue with the man above when heaven awaits you.
Now, if you just pop a large cheque into my hand, I\'ll prepare your comfy cloud.
June 21st, 2026 07:29
Paul Bell said:
Yes, blind faith is the way to go.
Never argue with the man above when heaven awaits you.
Now, if you just pop a large cheque into my hand, I\'ll prepare your comfy cloud.
June 21st, 2026 07:29
who ordered the milk?
arqios said:
I found myself more drawn to the sound and momentum of the language than to any single interpretation. The contrast between words like \"formaldehyde\" and \"copacetic copulation\" creates a strange, almost dreamlike atmosphere, and the ending gave it a darkly humorous touch.
June 21st, 2026 05:49
arqios said:
I found myself more drawn to the sound and momentum of the language than to any single interpretation. The contrast between words like \"formaldehyde\" and \"copacetic copulation\" creates a strange, almost dreamlike atmosphere, and the ending gave it a darkly humorous touch.
June 21st, 2026 05:49
who ordered the milk?
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
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