Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Masculation Strangulation
Paul Bell said:
Zena warrior princess, what that girl could do with a sword.
Actually, nobody gave a shit about her sword, only how she got hormones jumping.
Now we have to inject hormone baked beans just to lick her shield.
The world has created a monster, the jenie nearly came out of the bottle, but because the bottle identified as transtree, the jenie jumped straight back into the fable it came out off, wondering what the fuck humans had become.
October 27th, 2026 14:31
Paul Bell said:
Zena warrior princess, what that girl could do with a sword.
Actually, nobody gave a shit about her sword, only how she got hormones jumping.
Now we have to inject hormone baked beans just to lick her shield.
The world has created a monster, the jenie nearly came out of the bottle, but because the bottle identified as transtree, the jenie jumped straight back into the fable it came out off, wondering what the fuck humans had become.
October 27th, 2026 14:31
Masculation Strangulation
orchidee said:
Popeye won any of those Awards? lol.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
orchidee said:
Popeye won any of those Awards? lol.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
Masculation Strangulation
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written piece my friend, what has the world become ?
October 27th, 2026 09:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written piece my friend, what has the world become ?
October 27th, 2026 09:52
Masculation Strangulation
Lorenz said:
The most important thing is to have a musculated brain !
October 27th, 2026 09:32
Lorenz said:
The most important thing is to have a musculated brain !
October 27th, 2026 09:32
Masculation Strangulation
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a ferocious satirical engine here, using repetition, deliberately mangled logic, and the obsessive return to “masculinity” to expose how fragile manhood becomes when it has to be constantly policed through fear, insults, and demands for conformity. “we’ll inject you up with testosterone, / instill fear you’ll be emasculated” is the keeper for me, because it reveals the coercion beneath all the bluster: the supposed defense of masculinity becomes a threat to men themselves, forcing them to perform the very identity they’re told should come naturally.
October 27th, 2026 08:47
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a ferocious satirical engine here, using repetition, deliberately mangled logic, and the obsessive return to “masculinity” to expose how fragile manhood becomes when it has to be constantly policed through fear, insults, and demands for conformity. “we’ll inject you up with testosterone, / instill fear you’ll be emasculated” is the keeper for me, because it reveals the coercion beneath all the bluster: the supposed defense of masculinity becomes a threat to men themselves, forcing them to perform the very identity they’re told should come naturally.
October 27th, 2026 08:47
Masculation Strangulation
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a world that thinks that equality of rights equals equality of the physical and emotional. Nature made male and female different for a reason and who are we to change that. Viva la differance. Well penned my friend
October 27th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a world that thinks that equality of rights equals equality of the physical and emotional. Nature made male and female different for a reason and who are we to change that. Viva la differance. Well penned my friend
October 27th, 2026 08:40
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At breakneck speed, the words gurgling from the ventriloquist\'s mouth in an unstoppable mad diatribe. The makings of a wonderful stage play the narritive being what it is. Wonderful stuff, my fine fellow.
All the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:00
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At breakneck speed, the words gurgling from the ventriloquist\'s mouth in an unstoppable mad diatribe. The makings of a wonderful stage play the narritive being what it is. Wonderful stuff, my fine fellow.
All the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:00
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Novaselic said:
Well this was a fun read. I bet it was just as fun writing lol.
October 26th, 2026 17:02
Novaselic said:
Well this was a fun read. I bet it was just as fun writing lol.
October 26th, 2026 17:02
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Lorenz said:
This ventriloquist leaves me voiceless !
October 26th, 2026 13:27
Lorenz said:
This ventriloquist leaves me voiceless !
October 26th, 2026 13:27
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
sorenbarrett said:
Highly creative and a fun read with crazy rhyme that bounces from one line to the next rotating and revolving it was a blast a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
Highly creative and a fun read with crazy rhyme that bounces from one line to the next rotating and revolving it was a blast a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 13:19
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
orchidee said:
Aghh! Mondays! lol. A glugging sound, scary, terrifying,.... lol.
October 26th, 2026 12:04
orchidee said:
Aghh! Mondays! lol. A glugging sound, scary, terrifying,.... lol.
October 26th, 2026 12:04
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully Gothic my friend
October 26th, 2026 10:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully Gothic my friend
October 26th, 2026 10:59
Good Christian Folk
Paul Bell said:
The justice for witches in old time Britain went as.
You got thrown into the river. If you floated, you were guilty.
If you drowned. You were innocent.
Guys just loved accusing their wives of being a witch, it was a win, win.
October 26th, 2026 08:31
Paul Bell said:
The justice for witches in old time Britain went as.
You got thrown into the river. If you floated, you were guilty.
If you drowned. You were innocent.
Guys just loved accusing their wives of being a witch, it was a win, win.
October 26th, 2026 08:31
Good Christian Folk
Teddy.15 said:
Loving this series of yours dear Tristan, dark and delicious with a truth that no-one can deny. 🌹
October 26th, 2026 03:08
Teddy.15 said:
Loving this series of yours dear Tristan, dark and delicious with a truth that no-one can deny. 🌹
October 26th, 2026 03:08
Good Christian Folk
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem. As far as Witch\'s are concerned: I always had a thing for Elizabeth Montgomery in \'Bewitched\'. But seriously :The Salem Witch Trials were absolutely Terrible, and it\'s tragic how these Judges had the Moral High-Ground in all things and could Rule over Life and Death.
October 25th, 2026 19:29
Kevin Hulme said:
A fine Poem. As far as Witch\'s are concerned: I always had a thing for Elizabeth Montgomery in \'Bewitched\'. But seriously :The Salem Witch Trials were absolutely Terrible, and it\'s tragic how these Judges had the Moral High-Ground in all things and could Rule over Life and Death.
October 25th, 2026 19:29
Good Christian Folk
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the crusaders battle cry: \'God wills it\', before the slaughter, rape and pillage, the same could be said in the case of witches,\'God wills it\' - burn the bitch, hailed by the sanctimonious pulpit pounders, still a few around today. Well done, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 19:06
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the crusaders battle cry: \'God wills it\', before the slaughter, rape and pillage, the same could be said in the case of witches,\'God wills it\' - burn the bitch, hailed by the sanctimonious pulpit pounders, still a few around today. Well done, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 19:06
thrill ride
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Thundering helter skelter at white knuckle speed for entertainment - you\'ll find me in the pub. A rip roaring descent into hell. I\'m in a cold sweat just reading it. Well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 17:57
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Thundering helter skelter at white knuckle speed for entertainment - you\'ll find me in the pub. A rip roaring descent into hell. I\'m in a cold sweat just reading it. Well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 25th, 2026 17:57
Good Christian Folk
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Perfectly analysed hypocrisy
October 25th, 2026 08:46
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Perfectly analysed hypocrisy
October 25th, 2026 08:46
Good Christian Folk
sorenbarrett said:
The evil within us that we can not or dare not see projected onto others as a false means of seeing ourselves as good. Nicely written in so few words and an acrostic at that. Good work my friend
October 25th, 2026 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
The evil within us that we can not or dare not see projected onto others as a false means of seeing ourselves as good. Nicely written in so few words and an acrostic at that. Good work my friend
October 25th, 2026 08:14
Good Christian Folk
arqios said:
Ghost-busting, devil-hunting, exorcising... that seems to be the fun stuff for most aficionados of religiosity. Common enemy sort of thing. Perhaps, God is love and speaking truth in love has lost its meaning over the centuries. 👍🏻🕊️
October 25th, 2026 07:24
arqios said:
Ghost-busting, devil-hunting, exorcising... that seems to be the fun stuff for most aficionados of religiosity. Common enemy sort of thing. Perhaps, God is love and speaking truth in love has lost its meaning over the centuries. 👍🏻🕊️
October 25th, 2026 07:24
Good Christian Folk
Salvia.S said:
Loved the SALEM acrostic, didn\'t catch it at first and then it hit hard. Perfect for the Halloween Edition. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 25th, 2026 07:14
Salvia.S said:
Loved the SALEM acrostic, didn\'t catch it at first and then it hit hard. Perfect for the Halloween Edition. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 25th, 2026 07:14
Good Christian Folk
Lorenz said:
As a child ,I had a bit of crush on the bewitching Samantha ! ( Later many of her sisters took me in their arms...)
October 25th, 2026 06:45
Lorenz said:
As a child ,I had a bit of crush on the bewitching Samantha ! ( Later many of her sisters took me in their arms...)
October 25th, 2026 06:45
thrill ride
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'ll teach him to sneak on for Nothing.
A good Write.
October 24th, 2026 19:47
Kevin Hulme said:
That\'ll teach him to sneak on for Nothing.
A good Write.
October 24th, 2026 19:47
thrill ride
Teddy.15 said:
Bloody hell, I love this... Your scenery and atmosphere is fabulous, you did make me chuckle because I\'ve been to hooters but never to this joint... 🤣
October 24th, 2026 14:46
Teddy.15 said:
Bloody hell, I love this... Your scenery and atmosphere is fabulous, you did make me chuckle because I\'ve been to hooters but never to this joint... 🤣
October 24th, 2026 14:46
thrill ride
Lorenz said:
when you \'ve survived a day in the hell that is Alton Tower you\'re a man my son !
October 24th, 2026 10:53
Lorenz said:
when you \'ve survived a day in the hell that is Alton Tower you\'re a man my son !
October 24th, 2026 10:53
thrill ride
sorenbarrett said:
A ride to hell a modern Charon where one has to pay to ride and there is no going back. I remember once riding at an amusement park where they forgot to close the lap bar and I was hanging on for dear life. Good one Tristan
October 24th, 2026 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
A ride to hell a modern Charon where one has to pay to ride and there is no going back. I remember once riding at an amusement park where they forgot to close the lap bar and I was hanging on for dear life. Good one Tristan
October 24th, 2026 10:17
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