Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Deep Freeze Daze
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
Deep Freeze Daze
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 11:53
Deep Freeze Daze
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of \'em! lol.
February 22nd, 2025 10:22
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of \'em! lol.
February 22nd, 2025 10:22
The Cult
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Evil\" is working overtime to wake us up. In that sense you gotta admire it! If only folks showed as much dedication to the cause as it does!
February 21st, 2025 20:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Evil\" is working overtime to wake us up. In that sense you gotta admire it! If only folks showed as much dedication to the cause as it does!
February 21st, 2025 20:03
The Cult
Cassie58 said:
I came back to read again. An additional note. It ‘s an acrostic poem.
Long Live The King
Couldn’t edit my earlier comment.
February 21st, 2025 12:52
Cassie58 said:
I came back to read again. An additional note. It ‘s an acrostic poem.
Long Live The King
Couldn’t edit my earlier comment.
February 21st, 2025 12:52
The Cult
Cassie58 said:
You must have penned this for your Orange Leader who appears to be making his mark at great speed and inflicting damage. We have similar over here. Leaders who divide rather than unite. They have much to learn. Well penned Tristan .
February 21st, 2025 11:20
Cassie58 said:
You must have penned this for your Orange Leader who appears to be making his mark at great speed and inflicting damage. We have similar over here. Leaders who divide rather than unite. They have much to learn. Well penned Tristan .
February 21st, 2025 11:20
The Cult
Poetic Licence said:
I sense we are referring to the tango man is this write, which if you are have described him to a T, enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 09:55
Poetic Licence said:
I sense we are referring to the tango man is this write, which if you are have described him to a T, enjoyed the read
February 21st, 2025 09:55
The Cult
sorenbarrett said:
There are many gods past and present and even more demigods to take up the spaces. A powerful write thinly cloaked and well be it. Very nicely written.
February 21st, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
There are many gods past and present and even more demigods to take up the spaces. A powerful write thinly cloaked and well be it. Very nicely written.
February 21st, 2025 08:51
Total Dark
Cassie58 said:
Your short poem evokes much thought and feeling. Don’t we all hope we are like the bluebird with a relationship filled with love and companionship? People fail at love. It happens. It doesn’t mean that there is no hope for the future. Darkness and light, we need them both. Just my thoughts on your poem Tristen. Good to see a post again from you. You were missed.
February 20th, 2025 14:34
Cassie58 said:
Your short poem evokes much thought and feeling. Don’t we all hope we are like the bluebird with a relationship filled with love and companionship? People fail at love. It happens. It doesn’t mean that there is no hope for the future. Darkness and light, we need them both. Just my thoughts on your poem Tristen. Good to see a post again from you. You were missed.
February 20th, 2025 14:34
Total Dark
arqios said:
Oh, medium dot com, haven’t gotten back to that; there’s a hope not regretted. The darkness glows. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 13:25
arqios said:
Oh, medium dot com, haven’t gotten back to that; there’s a hope not regretted. The darkness glows. 🙏🏻🕊️
February 20th, 2025 13:25
Total Dark
Poetic Licence said:
The dark absorbs everything but that candle can be relit, really enjoyable and dark read
February 20th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
The dark absorbs everything but that candle can be relit, really enjoyable and dark read
February 20th, 2025 11:33
Total Dark
Neville said:
I note all the write boxes have been ticked off and I hope appropriately reminded not to play with the light in future .. Oh\' & yes indeed my dear friend, Darkness does become you & you are a credit to it .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:44
Neville said:
I note all the write boxes have been ticked off and I hope appropriately reminded not to play with the light in future .. Oh\' & yes indeed my dear friend, Darkness does become you & you are a credit to it .. Neville
February 20th, 2025 09:44
Total Dark
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that at first sight offers a conundrum as to how snuffing out light and becoming total dark can be desired. After all is not light symbolic of knowledge? Ah but yes if there is not knowledge they say ignorance is bliss. Never having known love one could not miss it. But there is more. The light signifies the union of all spectrums and in this unity is knowledge and unity but also in the union of all pigments there is black not only the symbol of ignorance and murkiness but also in unity there is company and acceptance. It is black that absorbs all light and they become one. How is that for a cornball review?
February 20th, 2025 09:41
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write that at first sight offers a conundrum as to how snuffing out light and becoming total dark can be desired. After all is not light symbolic of knowledge? Ah but yes if there is not knowledge they say ignorance is bliss. Never having known love one could not miss it. But there is more. The light signifies the union of all spectrums and in this unity is knowledge and unity but also in the union of all pigments there is black not only the symbol of ignorance and murkiness but also in unity there is company and acceptance. It is black that absorbs all light and they become one. How is that for a cornball review?
February 20th, 2025 09:41
Sixes
teardrop said:
Yes, life can be scary as well as a sad, hurtful place and hiding away would seem so much easier but then again what would it be like never experiencing emotion. Wow, you made me think this morning..lol Thanks for the read Tristan!
t
February 20th, 2025 06:27
teardrop said:
Yes, life can be scary as well as a sad, hurtful place and hiding away would seem so much easier but then again what would it be like never experiencing emotion. Wow, you made me think this morning..lol Thanks for the read Tristan!
t
February 20th, 2025 06:27
Sixes
NinjaGirl said:
Thought-filled social commentary, I find this all too true, beautifully expressed.
February 17th, 2025 19:29
NinjaGirl said:
Thought-filled social commentary, I find this all too true, beautifully expressed.
February 17th, 2025 19:29
Sixes
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tristan, I recently read a writer-teacher saying that most of this humanity has no interest in awakening. And never will have. When I look around me, I feel this is indeed, true. Why are they not interested? I have no idea. Perhaps a clue lies in the \"Power Law,\" where, for example, only a few seeds out of thousands become fully grown trees.
What are those famous lines from Ben Yeshua?
13 “Enter through the narrow gate. For wide is the gate and broad is the road that leads to destruction, and many enter through it.
14 But small is the gate and narrow the road that leads to life, and only a few find it.\"
Great write!
February 17th, 2025 18:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
Tristan, I recently read a writer-teacher saying that most of this humanity has no interest in awakening. And never will have. When I look around me, I feel this is indeed, true. Why are they not interested? I have no idea. Perhaps a clue lies in the \"Power Law,\" where, for example, only a few seeds out of thousands become fully grown trees.
What are those famous lines from Ben Yeshua?
13 “Enter through the narrow gate. For wide is the gate and broad is the road that leads to destruction, and many enter through it.
14 But small is the gate and narrow the road that leads to life, and only a few find it.\"
Great write!
February 17th, 2025 18:37
Sixes
arqios said:
You’re on a roll! Reminds me of those special dice, like the D&D ones for som3 reason. But don’t mind me. Lol. 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 16:15
arqios said:
You’re on a roll! Reminds me of those special dice, like the D&D ones for som3 reason. But don’t mind me. Lol. 🙏🏻🕊
February 17th, 2025 16:15
Sixes
Cassie58 said:
So much pain in this write to wish a retreat back into the womb as though time on earth had not existed. A tormented write with references to 666 which gave me the chills. A strong delivery here Tristen. All the best poet.
February 17th, 2025 13:57
Cassie58 said:
So much pain in this write to wish a retreat back into the womb as though time on earth had not existed. A tormented write with references to 666 which gave me the chills. A strong delivery here Tristen. All the best poet.
February 17th, 2025 13:57
Sixes
Neville said:
if anyone can explain to me why this reminds me so much of the artwork of the late great Hieronymus Bosch I would very much appreciate it .. thank you in advance of an avalanche of responses .. Cheers ..
February 17th, 2025 13:18
Neville said:
if anyone can explain to me why this reminds me so much of the artwork of the late great Hieronymus Bosch I would very much appreciate it .. thank you in advance of an avalanche of responses .. Cheers ..
February 17th, 2025 13:18
Sixes
Poetic Licence said:
Well that caught me by surprise, a very powerful tale of pain, suffering and perceived injustices. I am not of religious beliefs but i get the biblical references in the write. Very well expressed
February 17th, 2025 10:04
Poetic Licence said:
Well that caught me by surprise, a very powerful tale of pain, suffering and perceived injustices. I am not of religious beliefs but i get the biblical references in the write. Very well expressed
February 17th, 2025 10:04
Sixes
sorenbarrett said:
What a strong poem that speaks with biblical power but in contradiction and heresy in the ear of the rigid and cries out to the listener of earthly pains and perceived injustice. A wonderful write deserving of a fave
February 17th, 2025 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
What a strong poem that speaks with biblical power but in contradiction and heresy in the ear of the rigid and cries out to the listener of earthly pains and perceived injustice. A wonderful write deserving of a fave
February 17th, 2025 09:03
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