Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Succubus Affixation
Friendship said:
Your poem explores feelings of despair, isolation, and the futility of love in a world that appears devoid of truth and genuine connection. The speaker grapples with the notion that not only have they been abandoned in their struggles but also that love itself has become a source of lamentation.
November 21st, 2025 16:08
Friendship said:
Your poem explores feelings of despair, isolation, and the futility of love in a world that appears devoid of truth and genuine connection. The speaker grapples with the notion that not only have they been abandoned in their struggles but also that love itself has become a source of lamentation.
November 21st, 2025 16:08
Succubus Affixation
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes the crown here. A poem of darker issues where one is sucked dry of courage and love. The one portion reminded me of V for vendeta with all the v\'s being used. Well done my friend
November 21st, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes the crown here. A poem of darker issues where one is sucked dry of courage and love. The one portion reminded me of V for vendeta with all the v\'s being used. Well done my friend
November 21st, 2025 14:22
Succubus Affixation
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. Congrats, my friend.
November 21st, 2025 14:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. Congrats, my friend.
November 21st, 2025 14:12
Succubus Affixation
orchidee said:
Apology - if needed - that I don\'t tend to write on \'dark\' themes. Erm, I tried writing in the dark, but couldn\'t see a thing! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:32
orchidee said:
Apology - if needed - that I don\'t tend to write on \'dark\' themes. Erm, I tried writing in the dark, but couldn\'t see a thing! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:32
Succubus Affixation
orchidee said:
Ohhh, doh! Ol\' Popeye\' not interested in succubuses - or succubi (plural?)! He\'s too busy........ don\'t finish that! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:30
orchidee said:
Ohhh, doh! Ol\' Popeye\' not interested in succubuses - or succubi (plural?)! He\'s too busy........ don\'t finish that! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:30
Worm Wood
orchidee said:
Oohh now, P can\'t wait until your next poem. He has sneaked in on this one again. He asks \'Are ya sailing the 7 seas? If not, why not?\' But he knows ya can\'t answer that in public! He\'s a one, a real character. heehee.
November 21st, 2025 04:19
orchidee said:
Oohh now, P can\'t wait until your next poem. He has sneaked in on this one again. He asks \'Are ya sailing the 7 seas? If not, why not?\' But he knows ya can\'t answer that in public! He\'s a one, a real character. heehee.
November 21st, 2025 04:19
Worm Wood
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of my bearings here - about as unsure as the child, I would think. Can confirm I feel uneasy there, Tristan.
November 20th, 2025 19:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Unsure of my bearings here - about as unsure as the child, I would think. Can confirm I feel uneasy there, Tristan.
November 20th, 2025 19:04
Worm Wood
Paul Bell said:
Every way you read this, the child has gone.
Sweeties, persuasion, blackmail.
The swing park sets the scene and your imagination just takes over.
November 20th, 2025 14:50
Paul Bell said:
Every way you read this, the child has gone.
Sweeties, persuasion, blackmail.
The swing park sets the scene and your imagination just takes over.
November 20th, 2025 14:50
Worm Wood
orchidee said:
That worm\'s sneaked in again. Who? We know - mustn\'t give him extra publicity! lol.
November 20th, 2025 14:22
orchidee said:
That worm\'s sneaked in again. Who? We know - mustn\'t give him extra publicity! lol.
November 20th, 2025 14:22
Worm Wood
orchidee said:
Oh no! Popeye\'s nipped in. Did he write that line: Thank g- g- goodness? Sounds like someone glugging. It can only be one person. lol.
November 20th, 2025 11:24
orchidee said:
Oh no! Popeye\'s nipped in. Did he write that line: Thank g- g- goodness? Sounds like someone glugging. It can only be one person. lol.
November 20th, 2025 11:24
Worm Wood
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this reads like a scene out of a horror movie. It is painted in black and white to give more of a sense of horror. The use of the child draws the reader in and increases the sense of tension. Well written my friend.
November 20th, 2025 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this reads like a scene out of a horror movie. It is painted in black and white to give more of a sense of horror. The use of the child draws the reader in and increases the sense of tension. Well written my friend.
November 20th, 2025 09:39
Mission Impossible
Freedom4 said:
I really like this. Especially the line \'Dry tears crust over my injured soul\'
I often feel the same way. Always hanging on to hope but stuck in the pain.
November 19th, 2025 21:25
Freedom4 said:
I really like this. Especially the line \'Dry tears crust over my injured soul\'
I often feel the same way. Always hanging on to hope but stuck in the pain.
November 19th, 2025 21:25
God Knows
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that the Creator knows everything, is everything, yet, so much of that \"everything\" is still a potential, meaning it\'s not manifested/in our conscious awareness yet. Is this why we\'re endowed with awareness of being, desire to find out, and an Imagination?
Your poem got me thinking! (Maybe not in the way you intended?)
November 19th, 2025 18:48
Mutley Ravishes said:
It\'s been said that the Creator knows everything, is everything, yet, so much of that \"everything\" is still a potential, meaning it\'s not manifested/in our conscious awareness yet. Is this why we\'re endowed with awareness of being, desire to find out, and an Imagination?
Your poem got me thinking! (Maybe not in the way you intended?)
November 19th, 2025 18:48
God Knows
orchidee said:
If not blasphemous, but said without any religious connotation, we might say, using a small \'g\' here: \'god knows what Popeye\'s up to\', as in \'he could be up to anything\'. But we know he\'s up to one thing 99% of the time. What is it? Don\'t answer that! lol.
Ohh, Popeye don\'t know about any finer points of poetry. heehee.
November 19th, 2025 11:54
orchidee said:
If not blasphemous, but said without any religious connotation, we might say, using a small \'g\' here: \'god knows what Popeye\'s up to\', as in \'he could be up to anything\'. But we know he\'s up to one thing 99% of the time. What is it? Don\'t answer that! lol.
Ohh, Popeye don\'t know about any finer points of poetry. heehee.
November 19th, 2025 11:54
God Knows
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the idea that tears are permanent. The alliteration here emphasizes and greases this line so that if flows just as the message it gives flows. This poem in a few short words asks the question of whether not anyone saw this coming and then answers with \"God knows\" This is a double meaning since it can be taken as no one knows or that God is the one that knows. Well done my friend
November 19th, 2025 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the idea that tears are permanent. The alliteration here emphasizes and greases this line so that if flows just as the message it gives flows. This poem in a few short words asks the question of whether not anyone saw this coming and then answers with \"God knows\" This is a double meaning since it can be taken as no one knows or that God is the one that knows. Well done my friend
November 19th, 2025 09:31
The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed , you cannot always sit on the fence...well said
November 19th, 2025 08:30
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed , you cannot always sit on the fence...well said
November 19th, 2025 08:30
Prophet\'s Prayer
Bella Shepard said:
The prophet finds no peace when he forsees an outcome that others cannot, and is powerless to stop. This poem is so well written, conveying the helplesssness of the visionary, when he sees humanity at risk. Exceptional!
November 18th, 2025 14:41
Bella Shepard said:
The prophet finds no peace when he forsees an outcome that others cannot, and is powerless to stop. This poem is so well written, conveying the helplesssness of the visionary, when he sees humanity at risk. Exceptional!
November 18th, 2025 14:41
Prophet\'s Prayer
orchidee said:
Good write Jonah, oops Tristan! Now it\'s made us think - did Jonah meet a certain glugging guy on the seas? lol.
November 18th, 2025 12:25
orchidee said:
Good write Jonah, oops Tristan! Now it\'s made us think - did Jonah meet a certain glugging guy on the seas? lol.
November 18th, 2025 12:25
Prophet\'s Prayer
Paul Bell said:
How many have stood at that high height, knowing their decision but feeling no fear, just freedom.
Tough end and the journey we all hope we never take.
November 18th, 2025 12:14
Paul Bell said:
How many have stood at that high height, knowing their decision but feeling no fear, just freedom.
Tough end and the journey we all hope we never take.
November 18th, 2025 12:14
Prophet\'s Prayer
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations on the book, will be receiving one soon as the 1st hits!
November 18th, 2025 11:42
Demar Desu said:
Congratulations on the book, will be receiving one soon as the 1st hits!
November 18th, 2025 11:42
Prophet\'s Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan again the visual drop of precipice and the falling feeling of being alone like falling into an empty hole. There is no stopping in the fall. Sand like a sea where Jonah threw himself to be swallowed by a whale and taken in the belly of the beast to the depths. A metaphor indeed within a metaphor. An existential journey to the depths to find oneself and yes your will be done. Very nice my friend
November 18th, 2025 07:30
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan again the visual drop of precipice and the falling feeling of being alone like falling into an empty hole. There is no stopping in the fall. Sand like a sea where Jonah threw himself to be swallowed by a whale and taken in the belly of the beast to the depths. A metaphor indeed within a metaphor. An existential journey to the depths to find oneself and yes your will be done. Very nice my friend
November 18th, 2025 07:30
Grace Still Remains
Keyara S Trotman said:
I love the opening of this write. You\'ve came in confrontational, and that is what I do like. My fav verse where I’d like to point exactly is where you’ve stated
“ Yet—O Lord,
There is nothing like
Revelation’s rebound.“
Love love that there dearest Tristan.
Overall for the whole poem, you definitely deserve a 🫶🏼🥂🙏🏼💯
November 17th, 2025 13:20
Keyara S Trotman said:
I love the opening of this write. You\'ve came in confrontational, and that is what I do like. My fav verse where I’d like to point exactly is where you’ve stated
“ Yet—O Lord,
There is nothing like
Revelation’s rebound.“
Love love that there dearest Tristan.
Overall for the whole poem, you definitely deserve a 🫶🏼🥂🙏🏼💯
November 17th, 2025 13:20
Grace Still Remains
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this sounds like the passage from an old spell book, or maybe a retranslated bible verse. It calls out not to summon but to be heard.
November 17th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this sounds like the passage from an old spell book, or maybe a retranslated bible verse. It calls out not to summon but to be heard.
November 17th, 2025 11:12
Grace Still Remains
orchidee said:
Good write T. Only one person beyond the help of grace - some glugging chap! Well, beyond grace for one thing in his life; the thing that takes up 99% of his life! heehee. Didn\'t we just know he would get in to the comments still.
November 17th, 2025 10:32
orchidee said:
Good write T. Only one person beyond the help of grace - some glugging chap! Well, beyond grace for one thing in his life; the thing that takes up 99% of his life! heehee. Didn\'t we just know he would get in to the comments still.
November 17th, 2025 10:32
Got That Out
Sebastian. said:
I FELT THIS IN MY BONES. Absoloutley powerful to me
November 17th, 2025 09:49
Sebastian. said:
I FELT THIS IN MY BONES. Absoloutley powerful to me
November 17th, 2025 09:49
shape of a prayer
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew there was all this stuff in prayer. I prefer keeping it simple. And we still pray, even though \'Your heavenly Father knows what you need before you ask Him\' (part of Matthew 6).
The only one needing scorching, prayer or not, is a certain guy who always pops up - we knows him! lol. Hint; it\'s somebody and Co. heehee.
November 16th, 2025 12:02
orchidee said:
Oohh, I never knew there was all this stuff in prayer. I prefer keeping it simple. And we still pray, even though \'Your heavenly Father knows what you need before you ask Him\' (part of Matthew 6).
The only one needing scorching, prayer or not, is a certain guy who always pops up - we knows him! lol. Hint; it\'s somebody and Co. heehee.
November 16th, 2025 12:02
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