Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
What Does It Matter?
Neville said:
Very cleva indeed, in fact, maybe even more than merely cerebral .. it reaches out & makes the reader search for the write answer .. Neville 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛🎵🖤👍
May 10th, 2026 02:11
Neville said:
Very cleva indeed, in fact, maybe even more than merely cerebral .. it reaches out & makes the reader search for the write answer .. Neville 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛🎵🖤👍
May 10th, 2026 02:11
What Does It Matter?
sorenbarrett said:
Ergo cogito sum put it in the day cart. A great read my friend and loved the art and structuring of this work. It extends the meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:09
sorenbarrett said:
Ergo cogito sum put it in the day cart. A great read my friend and loved the art and structuring of this work. It extends the meaning
May 9th, 2026 19:09
What Does It Matter?
arqios said:
therefore: I think? more or less the summation? a summative existence? High time we unravelled what we were force-fed🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:44
arqios said:
therefore: I think? more or less the summation? a summative existence? High time we unravelled what we were force-fed🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:44
What Does It Matter?
orchidee said:
Popeye says \'The whole is more than the sum of all the parts (the sum of all the cans of spinach, that is!)\'. lol.
May 9th, 2026 14:17
orchidee said:
Popeye says \'The whole is more than the sum of all the parts (the sum of all the cans of spinach, that is!)\'. lol.
May 9th, 2026 14:17
What Does It Matter?
Friendship said:
What a profound impact you make! You shine brighter than any question in my mind, for your presence in my life is a treasure. Living next door to you would be a dream come true, but even from afar, your friendship illuminates my world. I\'m thankful to have you by my side and to call you my friend. I wish we could share moments in person, but even though we meet as kindred spirits online, our bond remains strong. Though I don\'t see you, your existence radiates warmth, and I appreciate how you show up authentically on this site. Your presence is a gift, and I\'m grateful that you never leave me wondering; you\'re always there. Your artistic talents, both in drawing and writing, inspire me to create and dream bigger. ❤️🌹❤️
May 9th, 2026 12:11
Friendship said:
What a profound impact you make! You shine brighter than any question in my mind, for your presence in my life is a treasure. Living next door to you would be a dream come true, but even from afar, your friendship illuminates my world. I\'m thankful to have you by my side and to call you my friend. I wish we could share moments in person, but even though we meet as kindred spirits online, our bond remains strong. Though I don\'t see you, your existence radiates warmth, and I appreciate how you show up authentically on this site. Your presence is a gift, and I\'m grateful that you never leave me wondering; you\'re always there. Your artistic talents, both in drawing and writing, inspire me to create and dream bigger. ❤️🌹❤️
May 9th, 2026 12:11
What Does It Matter?
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, this is very very creative dear Tristan, and I\'m telling you as a fellow human a fellow writer and a fellow cyber friend, boy you matter a great deal! Excellent play on words and a brilliant lay out! 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:07
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, this is very very creative dear Tristan, and I\'m telling you as a fellow human a fellow writer and a fellow cyber friend, boy you matter a great deal! Excellent play on words and a brilliant lay out! 🌹
May 9th, 2026 12:07
They Stopped Asking
Salvia.S said:
They stopped asking, so you asked yourself. The bowl, the cloud, the lost direction- you name it all without flinching. Then that turn - \" Still better positioned to think and show. \" You\'re not a victim here. You\'re a witness. \"This is how i roll\" isn\'t surrender. It\'s sovereignty. Nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 8th, 2026 20:48
Salvia.S said:
They stopped asking, so you asked yourself. The bowl, the cloud, the lost direction- you name it all without flinching. Then that turn - \" Still better positioned to think and show. \" You\'re not a victim here. You\'re a witness. \"This is how i roll\" isn\'t surrender. It\'s sovereignty. Nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 8th, 2026 20:48
They Stopped Asking
sorenbarrett said:
You never know what to expect with people one day friend the next unknown. Well written my friend
May 8th, 2026 15:37
sorenbarrett said:
You never know what to expect with people one day friend the next unknown. Well written my friend
May 8th, 2026 15:37
They Stopped Asking
Paul Bell said:
When they need you, you\'re tops.
When they don\'t, you\'re history.
They\'ll find us in records collecting dust.
May 8th, 2026 10:31
Paul Bell said:
When they need you, you\'re tops.
When they don\'t, you\'re history.
They\'ll find us in records collecting dust.
May 8th, 2026 10:31
They Stopped Asking
orchidee said:
In trickery and gluggery, we hear the sound, and ask \'How are you Popeye?\' He replies. \'I yam\'..... lol
May 8th, 2026 09:10
orchidee said:
In trickery and gluggery, we hear the sound, and ask \'How are you Popeye?\' He replies. \'I yam\'..... lol
May 8th, 2026 09:10
a remnant\'s prayer
Salvia.S said:
This poem does what real prayers do: it doesn’t ask to be fixed, it asks to be seen. The way you split “guilt- free” makes me feel the cut in real time, and by the time we get to “am i this tree?” the metaphor stops being a metaphor. You’re not describing the stump. You
are it — rooted, exposed, still here after the forest is gone. That last “Lord, have mercy” lands different from the first one. It’s not ritual anymore. It’s recognition. Thank you for writing something this honest, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 7th, 2026 10:58
Salvia.S said:
This poem does what real prayers do: it doesn’t ask to be fixed, it asks to be seen. The way you split “guilt- free” makes me feel the cut in real time, and by the time we get to “am i this tree?” the metaphor stops being a metaphor. You’re not describing the stump. You
are it — rooted, exposed, still here after the forest is gone. That last “Lord, have mercy” lands different from the first one. It’s not ritual anymore. It’s recognition. Thank you for writing something this honest, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 7th, 2026 10:58
a remnant\'s prayer
Salvia.S said:
This poem does what real prayers do: it doesn’t ask to be fixed, it asks to be seen. The way you split “guilt- free” makes me feel the cut in real time, and by the time we get to “am i this tree?” the metaphor stops being a metaphor. You’re not describing the stump. You
are it — rooted, exposed, still here after the forest is gone. That last “Lord, have mercy” lands different from the first one. It’s not ritual anymore. It’s recognition. Thank you for writing something this honest, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 7th, 2026 10:58
Salvia.S said:
This poem does what real prayers do: it doesn’t ask to be fixed, it asks to be seen. The way you split “guilt- free” makes me feel the cut in real time, and by the time we get to “am i this tree?” the metaphor stops being a metaphor. You’re not describing the stump. You
are it — rooted, exposed, still here after the forest is gone. That last “Lord, have mercy” lands different from the first one. It’s not ritual anymore. It’s recognition. Thank you for writing something this honest, dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
May 7th, 2026 10:58
a remnant\'s prayer
orchidee said:
Yes - and we hear it - the remnant of.... a glug, maybe a \'glu\'. Whatever is that? WCAT! lol.
May 7th, 2026 09:56
orchidee said:
Yes - and we hear it - the remnant of.... a glug, maybe a \'glu\'. Whatever is that? WCAT! lol.
May 7th, 2026 09:56
a remnant\'s prayer
Friendship said:
lovely written, your poem involves introspection on guilt, the human condition, and a connection to nature, represented by the forested tree and the plea for mercy.
May 7th, 2026 08:22
Friendship said:
lovely written, your poem involves introspection on guilt, the human condition, and a connection to nature, represented by the forested tree and the plea for mercy.
May 7th, 2026 08:22
a remnant\'s prayer
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a conscience talking to itself in a quiet place where nothing is hiding anymore—just raw honesty, stripped down to bone and breath.
There’s a haunting tenderness in it, like asking questions that don’t need answers to still matter.
May 7th, 2026 07:50
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a conscience talking to itself in a quiet place where nothing is hiding anymore—just raw honesty, stripped down to bone and breath.
There’s a haunting tenderness in it, like asking questions that don’t need answers to still matter.
May 7th, 2026 07:50
a remnant\'s prayer
sorenbarrett said:
A rather deep reflection of being part of everything and what we do to that around us we do to ourselves. A most lovely and deep write.
May 7th, 2026 06:12
sorenbarrett said:
A rather deep reflection of being part of everything and what we do to that around us we do to ourselves. A most lovely and deep write.
May 7th, 2026 06:12
a remnant\'s prayer
Katie B. said:
Great write Tristan. You put a lot of yourself into your work. That moves the reader which I think is what we all want, for our words to have the power to persuade, change minds, melt hearts.
May 7th, 2026 05:48
Katie B. said:
Great write Tristan. You put a lot of yourself into your work. That moves the reader which I think is what we all want, for our words to have the power to persuade, change minds, melt hearts.
May 7th, 2026 05:48
the clearing
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful addition, I know you will frown when I say just be who you really are, too often people become sheep it\'s better to be unique! 💜
May 6th, 2026 11:57
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful addition, I know you will frown when I say just be who you really are, too often people become sheep it\'s better to be unique! 💜
May 6th, 2026 11:57
the clearing
Salvia.S said:
I love how the forest clearing becomes a clearing of self. \"An itch appeared and spoke to me and begged me not to scratch” — what a way to describe healing. And that last distinction between “genuine to me” and “genuinely me” is everything. This is sacred work. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave for sure🌹
May 6th, 2026 08:52
Salvia.S said:
I love how the forest clearing becomes a clearing of self. \"An itch appeared and spoke to me and begged me not to scratch” — what a way to describe healing. And that last distinction between “genuine to me” and “genuinely me” is everything. This is sacred work. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave for sure🌹
May 6th, 2026 08:52
the clearing
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between personal identity and the burdens of one\'s past experiences. You highlight the journey of self-discovery and the realization that one\'s true self cannot be constrained by pain or history.
May 6th, 2026 08:44
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between personal identity and the burdens of one\'s past experiences. You highlight the journey of self-discovery and the realization that one\'s true self cannot be constrained by pain or history.
May 6th, 2026 08:44
the clearing
Katie B. said:
Even the best parts of us shall have no constraints. Rich work here.
May 6th, 2026 08:33
Katie B. said:
Even the best parts of us shall have no constraints. Rich work here.
May 6th, 2026 08:33
the clearing
orchidee said:
Into that silence space, deep in some woods maybe, we hear the sound - a glug or two, then more....unfortunately we can\'t finish this story, as WCAT have banned it! lol.
May 6th, 2026 08:33
orchidee said:
Into that silence space, deep in some woods maybe, we hear the sound - a glug or two, then more....unfortunately we can\'t finish this story, as WCAT have banned it! lol.
May 6th, 2026 08:33
the clearing
sorenbarrett said:
There is something spiritual and sacred that touches the soul and defines existentially the being. Nicely written Tristan
May 6th, 2026 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
There is something spiritual and sacred that touches the soul and defines existentially the being. Nicely written Tristan
May 6th, 2026 07:28
learning to linger
Poetic Dan said:
Loved this but I\'ll ment abide by anything I don\'t want to do! Always put up a fight. Harmony comes when no feelings are hidden. Inspirational stuff 👏
May 5th, 2026 14:36
Poetic Dan said:
Loved this but I\'ll ment abide by anything I don\'t want to do! Always put up a fight. Harmony comes when no feelings are hidden. Inspirational stuff 👏
May 5th, 2026 14:36
learning to linger
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant title mate & what tagged along behind wasn\'t that far behind at all .. 🐦⬛🖤😎👍
May 5th, 2026 12:20
Neville said:
Blindingly brilliant title mate & what tagged along behind wasn\'t that far behind at all .. 🐦⬛🖤😎👍
May 5th, 2026 12:20
learning to linger
Teddy.15 said:
Escaping ones self hard to do it\'s like chasing your tail! Lovely poetry. 🌹
May 5th, 2026 10:42
Teddy.15 said:
Escaping ones self hard to do it\'s like chasing your tail! Lovely poetry. 🌹
May 5th, 2026 10:42
learning to linger
Salvia.S said:
Form\'s tight and the heart\'s tighter. This one\'s staying with me. Beautifully written dearest Tittu ❤️!!! You said a lot in 8 lines!!! A fave 🌹
May 5th, 2026 09:47
Salvia.S said:
Form\'s tight and the heart\'s tighter. This one\'s staying with me. Beautifully written dearest Tittu ❤️!!! You said a lot in 8 lines!!! A fave 🌹
May 5th, 2026 09:47
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