Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the tao of burritos
Paul Bell said:
A lyrical trip in this write.
Maybe shouldn\'t mention \'trip\'
I quite like the idea of dying for fame, as long as the royalties reach me in heaven.
July 10th, 2026 14:35
Paul Bell said:
A lyrical trip in this write.
Maybe shouldn\'t mention \'trip\'
I quite like the idea of dying for fame, as long as the royalties reach me in heaven.
July 10th, 2026 14:35
the tao of burritos
orchidee said:
Good write T. And of course, at the end of the day for a certain one - well, all day - spinach! lol.
July 10th, 2026 12:38
orchidee said:
Good write T. And of course, at the end of the day for a certain one - well, all day - spinach! lol.
July 10th, 2026 12:38
the tao of burritos
Syd said:
Hi Tristan. I haven\'t been back on this site regularly for very long, but this is definitely one of my favourite writes from you. I\'ll certainly be reading more of your back catalogue and keeping up to date with your new material.
I\'m no stranger to psychedelics (not so much now but when I was a little younger) so this was right up my street. I\'ve read Timothy Leary, Huxley\'s Heaven and Hell (and The Doors of Perception is never far from my mind whenever The Doors are mentioned), so a lot of these references landed for me.
Very much enjoyed. I like your use of alliteration in the third stanza. I use it whenever I can too.
Great write - Syd 🍄
July 10th, 2026 11:13
Syd said:
Hi Tristan. I haven\'t been back on this site regularly for very long, but this is definitely one of my favourite writes from you. I\'ll certainly be reading more of your back catalogue and keeping up to date with your new material.
I\'m no stranger to psychedelics (not so much now but when I was a little younger) so this was right up my street. I\'ve read Timothy Leary, Huxley\'s Heaven and Hell (and The Doors of Perception is never far from my mind whenever The Doors are mentioned), so a lot of these references landed for me.
Very much enjoyed. I like your use of alliteration in the third stanza. I use it whenever I can too.
Great write - Syd 🍄
July 10th, 2026 11:13
the tao of burritos
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophies like opinions like you know what everybody has one. A fun run through the mind of justification and procrastination to arrive at where we are even if it is eating a burrito
July 10th, 2026 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophies like opinions like you know what everybody has one. A fun run through the mind of justification and procrastination to arrive at where we are even if it is eating a burrito
July 10th, 2026 08:56
bricks
orchidee said:
Good write T. A little-known story was that Popeye was there in those days, with his spinach too! lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:43
orchidee said:
Good write T. A little-known story was that Popeye was there in those days, with his spinach too! lol.
July 9th, 2026 11:43
bricks
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most witty piece with devious meaning
July 9th, 2026 10:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a most witty piece with devious meaning
July 9th, 2026 10:26
bricks
sorenbarrett said:
Save on expense I say no straw for the bricks. What you say they crumble, don\'t mumble, you say they were made by hicks. Excuse the rambling Tristan couldn\'t help myself. The poem has deeper meaning I think. My mind takes me in different directions one rebuilding what we destroy in war is good for the economy of nations and private companies but expenses in the national economy leaves a deficit. Two if applied personally this also applies. Well written my friend and for its cleverness a fave
July 9th, 2026 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Save on expense I say no straw for the bricks. What you say they crumble, don\'t mumble, you say they were made by hicks. Excuse the rambling Tristan couldn\'t help myself. The poem has deeper meaning I think. My mind takes me in different directions one rebuilding what we destroy in war is good for the economy of nations and private companies but expenses in the national economy leaves a deficit. Two if applied personally this also applies. Well written my friend and for its cleverness a fave
July 9th, 2026 09:00
no thing
cellinic said:
Magically and substantially marked and depicted line from the verge of depersonalisation to being oneself...
July 9th, 2026 05:46
cellinic said:
Magically and substantially marked and depicted line from the verge of depersonalisation to being oneself...
July 9th, 2026 05:46
no thing
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully captures the transformative journey of self-acceptance, illuminating the struggle for validation and the liberating realization that true worth emerges from embracing one\'s authentic self, tapping into themes of identity, vulnerability, and the profound desire for meaningful connection.🙏❤️🙏🌹
July 8th, 2026 12:07
Friendship said:
Your poem beautifully captures the transformative journey of self-acceptance, illuminating the struggle for validation and the liberating realization that true worth emerges from embracing one\'s authentic self, tapping into themes of identity, vulnerability, and the profound desire for meaningful connection.🙏❤️🙏🌹
July 8th, 2026 12:07
no thing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
we cant change our nature, nor should we my friend
July 8th, 2026 11:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
we cant change our nature, nor should we my friend
July 8th, 2026 11:52
no thing
Paul Bell said:
I think we spend our life reinventing ourselves.
January the 1st, is our ultimate reinventing time, usually finished by January the 2nd.
Why are we never content.
July 8th, 2026 11:27
Paul Bell said:
I think we spend our life reinventing ourselves.
January the 1st, is our ultimate reinventing time, usually finished by January the 2nd.
Why are we never content.
July 8th, 2026 11:27
no thing
orchidee said:
A Mr P Solus poem is: \'Something\' - a 3,476 verse poem on spinach, of course! lol.
July 8th, 2026 10:12
orchidee said:
A Mr P Solus poem is: \'Something\' - a 3,476 verse poem on spinach, of course! lol.
July 8th, 2026 10:12
no thing
sorenbarrett said:
So much time spent on being something that we are not when all we need to realize is that we are who we are and though we may polish it the stone is set with its flaws and beauty. Well written my friend
July 8th, 2026 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
So much time spent on being something that we are not when all we need to realize is that we are who we are and though we may polish it the stone is set with its flaws and beauty. Well written my friend
July 8th, 2026 08:56
no thing
Teddy.15 said:
The problem is you tried in the first place, being you is what makes you special! 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:26
Teddy.15 said:
The problem is you tried in the first place, being you is what makes you special! 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:26
no thing
arqios said:
And you are to those that truly accept you all that you ever need to be. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:46
arqios said:
And you are to those that truly accept you all that you ever need to be. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:46
every. single. day
Friendship said:
Your poem resonates deeply as a profound journey of self-discovery intertwined with unbridled optimism, and yet, it inspires a sense of hopeful anticipation within me. You eloquently convey a powerful message of unwavering hope and resilience, gently reminding readers that even amidst life\'s darkest moments, there is always a radiant possibility of joy and illumination on the horizon.
July 7th, 2026 21:15
Friendship said:
Your poem resonates deeply as a profound journey of self-discovery intertwined with unbridled optimism, and yet, it inspires a sense of hopeful anticipation within me. You eloquently convey a powerful message of unwavering hope and resilience, gently reminding readers that even amidst life\'s darkest moments, there is always a radiant possibility of joy and illumination on the horizon.
July 7th, 2026 21:15
every. single. day
arqios said:
everyday, my friend. S.A.D. has been somewhat turbulent this winter/year 🙏🏻🕊️
July 7th, 2026 14:38
arqios said:
everyday, my friend. S.A.D. has been somewhat turbulent this winter/year 🙏🏻🕊️
July 7th, 2026 14:38
every. single. day
orchidee said:
Yes, and every single day, Popeye says \'Spinach, please!\' lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:35
orchidee said:
Yes, and every single day, Popeye says \'Spinach, please!\' lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:35
every. single. day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me says there is light at the end of the tunnel that beyond the darkness there is hope. Well written my friend.
July 7th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me says there is light at the end of the tunnel that beyond the darkness there is hope. Well written my friend.
July 7th, 2026 09:04
every. single. day
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
every cloud has a silver lining my friend
July 7th, 2026 08:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
every cloud has a silver lining my friend
July 7th, 2026 08:23
mountain fox
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a lonely weight in these few lines, capturing that strange feeling of being caught between leaving and belonging.
The cardboard mountain is a powerful image—temporary walls holding the heavy search for a place to finally call home.
July 7th, 2026 07:58
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a lonely weight in these few lines, capturing that strange feeling of being caught between leaving and belonging.
The cardboard mountain is a powerful image—temporary walls holding the heavy search for a place to finally call home.
July 7th, 2026 07:58
mountain fox
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem is about your own experience of being out of place or disconnected from a sense of home. The imagery you painted of a \"cardboard mountain fox\" suggests fragility and artificiality, emphasizing themes of impermanence and the longing for stability amid the relentless passage of time. I am here for you, my friend. Hang in there, it will work out over time.❤️🙏🌹🙏
July 6th, 2026 16:43
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem is about your own experience of being out of place or disconnected from a sense of home. The imagery you painted of a \"cardboard mountain fox\" suggests fragility and artificiality, emphasizing themes of impermanence and the longing for stability amid the relentless passage of time. I am here for you, my friend. Hang in there, it will work out over time.❤️🙏🌹🙏
July 6th, 2026 16:43
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