Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
Paul Bell said:
Devil worship is Monday at the office.
Come Friday, we utter the immortal words. Thank god for that.
They all repent in the end.
October 18th, 2026 13:39
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
sorenbarrett said:
We all defend what we feel and see failing to understand that others are looking from a different perspective. One has to ask why do we always have to be right. A good write my friend
October 18th, 2026 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
We all defend what we feel and see failing to understand that others are looking from a different perspective. One has to ask why do we always have to be right. A good write my friend
October 18th, 2026 07:44
The Devil\'s Faithfuls
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A clear precise message of hypocrisy in this piece my friend
October 18th, 2026 05:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A clear precise message of hypocrisy in this piece my friend
October 18th, 2026 05:26
beneath the veil
orchidee said:
What is Fall? = Autumn in the UK!
Is that Popeye in disguise, in some old dusty mask?
Argh! Monday approaching again. lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:27
orchidee said:
What is Fall? = Autumn in the UK!
Is that Popeye in disguise, in some old dusty mask?
Argh! Monday approaching again. lol.
October 17th, 2026 10:27
beneath the veil
Lorenz said:
The transition into the sign of scorpio is becoming noticeable !
October 17th, 2026 10:21
Lorenz said:
The transition into the sign of scorpio is becoming noticeable !
October 17th, 2026 10:21
beneath the veil
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark Indeed, and under the ash they still find remains. Ghastly and very clever. 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:22
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark Indeed, and under the ash they still find remains. Ghastly and very clever. 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:22
beneath the veil
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
The autuminal reaper casts its mists of death with neither let nor hinder, faceless and still in plain sight, the soul knows. Two powerfull snippets of verse.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:15
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
The autuminal reaper casts its mists of death with neither let nor hinder, faceless and still in plain sight, the soul knows. Two powerfull snippets of verse.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 09:15
beneath the veil
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece, death is the certainty
October 17th, 2026 08:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece, death is the certainty
October 17th, 2026 08:55
beneath the veil
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it. Autumn or Fall is a Dark, Miserable time of year. The Years nearly over, the Credits about to Roll , and those Early Nights will now descend.
Good Write.
October 17th, 2026 08:48
Kevin Hulme said:
Like it. Autumn or Fall is a Dark, Miserable time of year. The Years nearly over, the Credits about to Roll , and those Early Nights will now descend.
Good Write.
October 17th, 2026 08:48
the bone ball
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Tristan,
A rave in the charnel house - shake, rattle and bones, a noisy lot. You\'re in the groove, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:39
Tony Grannell said:
Good day, Tristan,
A rave in the charnel house - shake, rattle and bones, a noisy lot. You\'re in the groove, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 17th, 2026 08:39
beneath the veil
Salvia.S said:
Love the logic here, the more you shroud death, the more you confirm it. Fall doesn\'t hide the death, it is the veil. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 17th, 2026 06:31
Salvia.S said:
Love the logic here, the more you shroud death, the more you confirm it. Fall doesn\'t hide the death, it is the veil. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 17th, 2026 06:31
beneath the veil
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and clever this combination of the two is a dark dive into life and death. Nicely done Tristan it is quite a feat to find a word with so many syllables in a senryu. Loved it
October 17th, 2026 05:54
sorenbarrett said:
Seasonal and clever this combination of the two is a dark dive into life and death. Nicely done Tristan it is quite a feat to find a word with so many syllables in a senryu. Loved it
October 17th, 2026 05:54
the bone ball
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem conveys a sense of unity among the dead (\"we skeletons all belong\"), implying that death is a shared experience that connects all beings.
October 16th, 2026 11:37
Friendship said:
I enjoy your humor. Your poem conveys a sense of unity among the dead (\"we skeletons all belong\"), implying that death is a shared experience that connects all beings.
October 16th, 2026 11:37
the bone ball
Paul Bell said:
Dem bones, dem bones on the dance floor, it\'s a ballroom blitz.
Death on the dance floor, Paul has flipped.
October 16th, 2026 10:14
Paul Bell said:
Dem bones, dem bones on the dance floor, it\'s a ballroom blitz.
Death on the dance floor, Paul has flipped.
October 16th, 2026 10:14
the bone ball
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading Mondays. lol.
And now my poem: \'The curse of the Were-Sailor (pronounce as \'where\' as in sense of \'Werewolf\'), Popeyeus, featuring spinach\' - of course! lol.
And Ol\' Tom\'s and Obi\'s antics are pretty scary too!
October 16th, 2026 10:00
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading Mondays. lol.
And now my poem: \'The curse of the Were-Sailor (pronounce as \'where\' as in sense of \'Werewolf\'), Popeyeus, featuring spinach\' - of course! lol.
And Ol\' Tom\'s and Obi\'s antics are pretty scary too!
October 16th, 2026 10:00
the bone ball
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Tristan I remember well in dance there is a move that is called the death drop. Shake those bones. A fun read my friend
October 16th, 2026 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Good one Tristan I remember well in dance there is a move that is called the death drop. Shake those bones. A fun read my friend
October 16th, 2026 09:20
still life
arqios said:
Wow. I got a contrast and double entendre from that stillness! 🙏🏻🕊️
October 16th, 2026 06:40
arqios said:
Wow. I got a contrast and double entendre from that stillness! 🙏🏻🕊️
October 16th, 2026 06:40
flea market faith
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Reminds me of the bible, \' a house of prayer to a den of robbers but not as drastic. The wants of man delving into the selfishness of his own mania abandoning the essence of his own soul. Excellent haiku.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 14:24
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Reminds me of the bible, \' a house of prayer to a den of robbers but not as drastic. The wants of man delving into the selfishness of his own mania abandoning the essence of his own soul. Excellent haiku.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 14:24
still life
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To wander casually into mayhem. This haiku has a real eastern flavour to it, not many western poets achieve that, so, very well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 13:44
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To wander casually into mayhem. This haiku has a real eastern flavour to it, not many western poets achieve that, so, very well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
October 15th, 2026 13:44
still life
Paul Bell said:
The calm before the storm.
A nice day for walking, can also be a nice day for getting shot.
October 15th, 2026 13:11
Paul Bell said:
The calm before the storm.
A nice day for walking, can also be a nice day for getting shot.
October 15th, 2026 13:11
still life
Teddy.15 said:
lol an ironic haiku so very you. 🤣 Tristan you are a hoot! Halloween is coming and I usually dress up like a chair so I don\'t have to answer the door lol 🤣
October 15th, 2026 11:59
Teddy.15 said:
lol an ironic haiku so very you. 🤣 Tristan you are a hoot! Halloween is coming and I usually dress up like a chair so I don\'t have to answer the door lol 🤣
October 15th, 2026 11:59
still life
sorenbarrett said:
Even the calm and beautiful is punctuated with the terrible and ugly. Nice contrast my friend. The pairing of the two makes this a powerful piece.
October 15th, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
Even the calm and beautiful is punctuated with the terrible and ugly. Nice contrast my friend. The pairing of the two makes this a powerful piece.
October 15th, 2026 08:43
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