Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Orange Ordinance
sorenbarrett said:
A fun satire here and I will have one to follow up with tomorrow Tristan
April 16th, 2026 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
A fun satire here and I will have one to follow up with tomorrow Tristan
April 16th, 2026 10:19
The Orange Ordinance
orchidee said:
Yes, and now a poem about a Green one - from eating too much spinach! The WCAT one. lol.
April 16th, 2026 10:06
orchidee said:
Yes, and now a poem about a Green one - from eating too much spinach! The WCAT one. lol.
April 16th, 2026 10:06
The Orange Ordinance
Friendship said:
Enjoy your humor, Yes, we have a very foolish leader......👍
Your poem revolves around the absurdity and irony of power dynamics, particularly in the context of religious authority and societal roles. It presents a satirical take on a figure (\"a large and orange dope\") who embodies characteristics of a tyrannical or foolish leader, juxtaposed against sacred institutions like the Pope. The poet touches on themes of authority, mockery of power, and the ludicrous nature of certain societal tropes.
April 16th, 2026 09:07
Friendship said:
Enjoy your humor, Yes, we have a very foolish leader......👍
Your poem revolves around the absurdity and irony of power dynamics, particularly in the context of religious authority and societal roles. It presents a satirical take on a figure (\"a large and orange dope\") who embodies characteristics of a tyrannical or foolish leader, juxtaposed against sacred institutions like the Pope. The poet touches on themes of authority, mockery of power, and the ludicrous nature of certain societal tropes.
April 16th, 2026 09:07
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Tristan what an exquisite piece of poetry and music 🌹 bravo! 💐
April 15th, 2026 23:03
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Tristan what an exquisite piece of poetry and music 🌹 bravo! 💐
April 15th, 2026 23:03
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful combination, a person of many talents. Wish i had musical ability because sometimes it can bring a poem to life and give it that feeling you are looking for and when writing it gives so many more possibilities. Very creative and interesting write and combo, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 14:15
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful combination, a person of many talents. Wish i had musical ability because sometimes it can bring a poem to life and give it that feeling you are looking for and when writing it gives so many more possibilities. Very creative and interesting write and combo, pleasure to read.
April 15th, 2026 14:15
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
orchidee said:
Ohh, I was carried away with this, until...... another duet appeared - a glugging sound, Popeye and Ol\' Tom - ruined everything! lol.
I\'m not surprised you can\'t keep up with comments, with that incessant glugging going on. lol.
April 15th, 2026 12:23
orchidee said:
Ohh, I was carried away with this, until...... another duet appeared - a glugging sound, Popeye and Ol\' Tom - ruined everything! lol.
I\'m not surprised you can\'t keep up with comments, with that incessant glugging going on. lol.
April 15th, 2026 12:23
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
NinjaGirl said:
The combination of the song and of the poem is quite comforting. Though perhaps intended to be a little uneasy, I find comfort in it and I think that\'s a beautiful thing.
April 15th, 2026 11:00
NinjaGirl said:
The combination of the song and of the poem is quite comforting. Though perhaps intended to be a little uneasy, I find comfort in it and I think that\'s a beautiful thing.
April 15th, 2026 11:00
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem appears to be an artistic expression of the complexity of human emotions, particularly how beauty and sadness often coexist. I love how you invite readers to contemplate their own experiences of loss and the solace that can be found in music and nature.
April 15th, 2026 10:44
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem appears to be an artistic expression of the complexity of human emotions, particularly how beauty and sadness often coexist. I love how you invite readers to contemplate their own experiences of loss and the solace that can be found in music and nature.
April 15th, 2026 10:44
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
Katie B. said:
Tristan, this is just beautiful. What an eloquent way to describe playing the piano. You play don\'t you?
April 15th, 2026 07:46
Katie B. said:
Tristan, this is just beautiful. What an eloquent way to describe playing the piano. You play don\'t you?
April 15th, 2026 07:46
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
sorenbarrett said:
Music and poetry both evoke feelings deeply buried and most lovely when combined in song
April 15th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Music and poetry both evoke feelings deeply buried and most lovely when combined in song
April 15th, 2026 06:28
Nocturne in D Minor: Dolorous Duet
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you, Mutley, for the fave, my friend! I hope you enjoy both poem and the music.
April 15th, 2026 06:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you, Mutley, for the fave, my friend! I hope you enjoy both poem and the music.
April 15th, 2026 06:26
Cracks Reveal
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve always believed that curiosity and asking questions leads to intelligence but what do I know. 🤣
or uncontainable treasure
beaming in regal radiance
Love this!
April 15th, 2026 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve always believed that curiosity and asking questions leads to intelligence but what do I know. 🤣
or uncontainable treasure
beaming in regal radiance
Love this!
April 15th, 2026 01:31
Cracks Reveal
Friendship said:
Well written, a poem of questions. Your poem revolves around the nature of questions and the pursuit of truth. Your asking questions is a part of understanding our realities, and even when those questions are difficult, they can lead to profound revelations. This poem also touches on the themes of vulnerability and the inherent value within brokenness, highlighting that the imperfections we carry can reveal treasures within us.
April 14th, 2026 18:11
Friendship said:
Well written, a poem of questions. Your poem revolves around the nature of questions and the pursuit of truth. Your asking questions is a part of understanding our realities, and even when those questions are difficult, they can lead to profound revelations. This poem also touches on the themes of vulnerability and the inherent value within brokenness, highlighting that the imperfections we carry can reveal treasures within us.
April 14th, 2026 18:11
Cracks Reveal
sorenbarrett said:
Cracks reveal the inner parts of a vessel but also the refractions of outer light. A wonderful poem Tristan that has deep meaning to those that takde the time to reflect (pun intended)
April 14th, 2026 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
Cracks reveal the inner parts of a vessel but also the refractions of outer light. A wonderful poem Tristan that has deep meaning to those that takde the time to reflect (pun intended)
April 14th, 2026 09:53
Cracks Reveal
orchidee said:
Good write T.
We only need the slightest crack in a curtain, to discover Popeye\'s antics. What are they? WCAT of course! lol.
April 14th, 2026 08:08
orchidee said:
Good write T.
We only need the slightest crack in a curtain, to discover Popeye\'s antics. What are they? WCAT of course! lol.
April 14th, 2026 08:08
Exactly
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and defiant—cuts straight through the noise of outside judgment.
The grit lands clean: autonomy claimed without apology.
April 14th, 2026 07:13
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and defiant—cuts straight through the noise of outside judgment.
The grit lands clean: autonomy claimed without apology.
April 14th, 2026 07:13
Exactly
NinjaGirl said:
I find it\'s usually judgement disguised as advice, too.
April 13th, 2026 23:49
NinjaGirl said:
I find it\'s usually judgement disguised as advice, too.
April 13th, 2026 23:49
What They Called Her
NinjaGirl said:
\"Eternity’s eye remembers\"
Justice will be served one day...I cannot wait.
April 13th, 2026 23:38
NinjaGirl said:
\"Eternity’s eye remembers\"
Justice will be served one day...I cannot wait.
April 13th, 2026 23:38
Exactly
cellinic said:
A bit provocative, but very important and crucial statement. A fave, my friend!!
April 13th, 2026 19:26
cellinic said:
A bit provocative, but very important and crucial statement. A fave, my friend!!
April 13th, 2026 19:26
Exactly
sorenbarrett said:
So many presumptions based upon how we feel not how others feel. Nicely done Tristan
April 13th, 2026 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
So many presumptions based upon how we feel not how others feel. Nicely done Tristan
April 13th, 2026 14:12
Exactly
orchidee said:
Doh! One has sneaked in again - clue: glug! Popeye says he knows exactly what is best for him, but WCAT, we can\'t say what it is! heehee.
April 13th, 2026 09:35
orchidee said:
Doh! One has sneaked in again - clue: glug! Popeye says he knows exactly what is best for him, but WCAT, we can\'t say what it is! heehee.
April 13th, 2026 09:35
Exactly
arqios said:
Exactly? Lounge seat directors, backseat drivers, legislative backbenchers, bleacher coaches….
April 13th, 2026 07:53
arqios said:
Exactly? Lounge seat directors, backseat drivers, legislative backbenchers, bleacher coaches….
April 13th, 2026 07:53
Exactly
Friendship said:
A powerful statement, your words focus on the dynamics of communication and the frustration that arises when one individual tries to impose their beliefs or understanding on another. It raises questions about knowledge, authority, and the subjective nature of experience. I love how some people presume to know what is best for me! We live in a world where others think their way is the best, yet they could never be open-minded to others.
April 13th, 2026 07:41
Friendship said:
A powerful statement, your words focus on the dynamics of communication and the frustration that arises when one individual tries to impose their beliefs or understanding on another. It raises questions about knowledge, authority, and the subjective nature of experience. I love how some people presume to know what is best for me! We live in a world where others think their way is the best, yet they could never be open-minded to others.
April 13th, 2026 07:41
Exactly
Abdullah123 said:
Great message, written brilliantly. I think i might just memorize this poem and use it sometime, exactly as is. With the pauses and everything.😅😇
April 13th, 2026 07:31
Abdullah123 said:
Great message, written brilliantly. I think i might just memorize this poem and use it sometime, exactly as is. With the pauses and everything.😅😇
April 13th, 2026 07:31
Exactly
Katie B. said:
Love it! How does someone else presume to know what\'s best for me. I am the only one that knows what\'s best for me. I don\'t need outside input. It is most insulting when someone tells you what\'s best for you. Well done and a fave!
April 13th, 2026 07:25
Katie B. said:
Love it! How does someone else presume to know what\'s best for me. I am the only one that knows what\'s best for me. I don\'t need outside input. It is most insulting when someone tells you what\'s best for you. Well done and a fave!
April 13th, 2026 07:25
The Civilized? Schema
Priya Tomar said:
Philosophical poem .
Every person should commit to inner calm... my fave line .
Nicely written .
April 12th, 2026 21:08
Priya Tomar said:
Philosophical poem .
Every person should commit to inner calm... my fave line .
Nicely written .
April 12th, 2026 21:08
The Civilized? Schema
Teddy.15 said:
Philosophy can be so sweet. This is beautiful dear Tristan 🌹
April 12th, 2026 12:41
Teddy.15 said:
Philosophy can be so sweet. This is beautiful dear Tristan 🌹
April 12th, 2026 12:41
The Civilized? Schema
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Popeye don\'t know about Biaxial Parallaxes. He only knows about one thing (mainly) and WCAT of what it is! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Popeye don\'t know about Biaxial Parallaxes. He only knows about one thing (mainly) and WCAT of what it is! lol.
April 12th, 2026 10:22
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