Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
proximity
orchidee said:
Oh no! The proximity - nearness - of a glug! We know who! lol.
May 26th, 2026 14:11
orchidee said:
Oh no! The proximity - nearness - of a glug! We know who! lol.
May 26th, 2026 14:11
proximity
Katie B. said:
Powerful write Tristan. It is the weak, those that are in proximity to power and also need to belong. To be something bigger than themselves. Just my interpretation.
May 26th, 2026 14:10
Katie B. said:
Powerful write Tristan. It is the weak, those that are in proximity to power and also need to belong. To be something bigger than themselves. Just my interpretation.
May 26th, 2026 14:10
proximity
sorenbarrett said:
If I remember right he had his head on some rocks before that dream. Anticipation works for children why not for adults when they expect to catch the droppings of the powerful. Indeed proximity to power does turn one into a wallflower out of fear of ruffling feathers. A most interesting write my friend
May 26th, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
If I remember right he had his head on some rocks before that dream. Anticipation works for children why not for adults when they expect to catch the droppings of the powerful. Indeed proximity to power does turn one into a wallflower out of fear of ruffling feathers. A most interesting write my friend
May 26th, 2026 12:59
moving beyond
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet strength in this—no bitterness, just someone walking forward without asking for acknowledgment.
Feels like closure earned the hard way… a steady grace that doesn’t need permission to keep moving.
May 26th, 2026 07:16
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet strength in this—no bitterness, just someone walking forward without asking for acknowledgment.
Feels like closure earned the hard way… a steady grace that doesn’t need permission to keep moving.
May 26th, 2026 07:16
moving beyond
David Wakeling said:
Wow a powerful interaction.Surpising ending.But i suppose most relationships break up eventually.Sad but intense.Enjoyable read
May 25th, 2026 18:27
David Wakeling said:
Wow a powerful interaction.Surpising ending.But i suppose most relationships break up eventually.Sad but intense.Enjoyable read
May 25th, 2026 18:27
moving beyond
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition without acknowledgement it leaves a cold feel and then the response that one is getting beyond that. Moving on is the thing to do.
May 25th, 2026 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition without acknowledgement it leaves a cold feel and then the response that one is getting beyond that. Moving on is the thing to do.
May 25th, 2026 09:54
moving beyond
Friendship said:
A powerful poem for me, been there. Your poem revolves around an encounter with someone from the past, emphasizing feelings of rejection, the weight of unspoken words, and the liberation that comes from self-acceptance and resilience.
May 25th, 2026 08:04
Friendship said:
A powerful poem for me, been there. Your poem revolves around an encounter with someone from the past, emphasizing feelings of rejection, the weight of unspoken words, and the liberation that comes from self-acceptance and resilience.
May 25th, 2026 08:04
The Third Baptism
Teddy.15 said:
I love the power you bring to this theme, I\'d rather be dipped in chocolate by the way 🤣
May 25th, 2026 00:10
Teddy.15 said:
I love the power you bring to this theme, I\'d rather be dipped in chocolate by the way 🤣
May 25th, 2026 00:10
The Third Baptism
David Wakeling said:
Okay so dark thoughts going on here.So deep and important.Very cleverly written
May 24th, 2026 18:18
David Wakeling said:
Okay so dark thoughts going on here.So deep and important.Very cleverly written
May 24th, 2026 18:18
The Third Baptism
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the idea that true freedom in Christ cannot be achieved by coercive or manipulative means in the context of religious conversion.
May 24th, 2026 16:38
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the idea that true freedom in Christ cannot be achieved by coercive or manipulative means in the context of religious conversion.
May 24th, 2026 16:38
The Third Baptism
sorenbarrett said:
Forcing a square peg into a round hole is never advisable. Trying to make a sober man out of an unwilling drunkard does not work. Forcing the mind even by sword is a false conversion. Well written Tristan
May 24th, 2026 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Forcing a square peg into a round hole is never advisable. Trying to make a sober man out of an unwilling drunkard does not work. Forcing the mind even by sword is a false conversion. Well written Tristan
May 24th, 2026 10:21
The Third Baptism
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, and a meaningful message
May 24th, 2026 09:51
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
good write my friend, and a meaningful message
May 24th, 2026 09:51
The Third Baptism
orchidee said:
And now Popeye\'s book \'The baptism of spinach\' - whatever that means?! lol.
May 24th, 2026 09:30
orchidee said:
And now Popeye\'s book \'The baptism of spinach\' - whatever that means?! lol.
May 24th, 2026 09:30
The Third Baptism
arqios said:
Not the cat, one can surmise. Many a false conversation result from that systemic coercion. Powerful stuff, Tittu 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
Not the cat, one can surmise. Many a false conversation result from that systemic coercion. Powerful stuff, Tittu 🕊️🙏🏻
May 24th, 2026 08:25
The Recipe
David Wakeling said:
Time to send out for take away this political meal may be to strong for some. A powerful thoughtful piece, Got me thinking
May 23rd, 2026 18:21
David Wakeling said:
Time to send out for take away this political meal may be to strong for some. A powerful thoughtful piece, Got me thinking
May 23rd, 2026 18:21
The Recipe
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye has the recipe for spinach pie. lol.
May 23rd, 2026 12:00
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye has the recipe for spinach pie. lol.
May 23rd, 2026 12:00
The Recipe
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in metaphor and wording it is a satirical recipe for a food that I am allergic to and can\'t stomach. It makes me ill (not the poem the recipe) A fave my friend
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
Clever in metaphor and wording it is a satirical recipe for a food that I am allergic to and can\'t stomach. It makes me ill (not the poem the recipe) A fave my friend
May 23rd, 2026 10:40
The Recipe
Friendship said:
This was hard for me today. I am going to try! Your poem \"Cancel culture casserole\" explores cancel culture as a form of social oppression. The poet uses the metaphor of cooking to illustrate how misinformation and suppression of dissenting opinions create a toxic societal environment.
May 23rd, 2026 08:59
Friendship said:
This was hard for me today. I am going to try! Your poem \"Cancel culture casserole\" explores cancel culture as a form of social oppression. The poet uses the metaphor of cooking to illustrate how misinformation and suppression of dissenting opinions create a toxic societal environment.
May 23rd, 2026 08:59
The Recipe
arqios said:
650 Kelvinn more like! In today\'s language in the end, we are all cooked 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:25
arqios said:
650 Kelvinn more like! In today\'s language in the end, we are all cooked 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:25
lamb of god
orchidee said:
And spinach with everything, says the glugging one! lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:22
orchidee said:
And spinach with everything, says the glugging one! lol.
May 22nd, 2026 10:22
lamb of god
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark tone, may I say well done. On the other hand it is rare where I have been guilty of roasting it. Maybe overdone. A rack of lamb old scratch would love. I personally love lamb chops myself, but then I have been called the devil many times. A wonderful play on words here my friend a fave
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem carries a dark tone, may I say well done. On the other hand it is rare where I have been guilty of roasting it. Maybe overdone. A rack of lamb old scratch would love. I personally love lamb chops myself, but then I have been called the devil many times. A wonderful play on words here my friend a fave
May 22nd, 2026 08:40
Shifting Spring
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful and emotional dialogue here.Very moving mi amigo.Enjoyable read with teh fish alive again
May 21st, 2026 19:23
David Wakeling said:
Some beautiful and emotional dialogue here.Very moving mi amigo.Enjoyable read with teh fish alive again
May 21st, 2026 19:23
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