Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Sea of Dreams
orchidee said:
I got in a huff about some hymns / choruses containing words like \'Hey\' and \'Whoa\' - far too \'common\' for middle to upper class folk! heehee.
The sort of things Popeye says? lol.
July 11th, 2025 10:54
orchidee said:
I got in a huff about some hymns / choruses containing words like \'Hey\' and \'Whoa\' - far too \'common\' for middle to upper class folk! heehee.
The sort of things Popeye says? lol.
July 11th, 2025 10:54
Sea of Dreams
Tony Grannell said:
Love the poem, love the song, love the video and love the voice. Four loves, what more can I say, my friend.
You are keeping well, I trust,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 10:40
Tony Grannell said:
Love the poem, love the song, love the video and love the voice. Four loves, what more can I say, my friend.
You are keeping well, I trust,
Tony.
July 11th, 2025 10:40
Sea of Dreams
Poetic Licence said:
Loved it the video really brought the song to life, I find it slightly dark and haunting but at the same time touching and beautiful, fantastic
July 11th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
Loved it the video really brought the song to life, I find it slightly dark and haunting but at the same time touching and beautiful, fantastic
July 11th, 2025 10:38
Sea of Dreams
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess the funniest part to me is that both my parents were dreamers, yielding the world no less than seven dreamers to carry on the torch, yet I never considered that death played an integral role in the whole affair. I mean, I guess it was the death of the lives they\'d been raised to live, yet after that I flounder. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2025 09:41
Cheeky Missy said:
I guess the funniest part to me is that both my parents were dreamers, yielding the world no less than seven dreamers to carry on the torch, yet I never considered that death played an integral role in the whole affair. I mean, I guess it was the death of the lives they\'d been raised to live, yet after that I flounder. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 11th, 2025 09:41
Sea of Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
I must say Tristan that your video was most impressive, great editing and what a voice. A fave for sure
July 11th, 2025 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
I must say Tristan that your video was most impressive, great editing and what a voice. A fave for sure
July 11th, 2025 09:38
Sea of Dreams
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible video, music that accentuates every line. Death personified? Loved it!
July 11th, 2025 09:12
Bella Shepard said:
Incredible video, music that accentuates every line. Death personified? Loved it!
July 11th, 2025 09:12
Sea of Dreams
arqios said:
Your song/poem carries a haunting sense of invitation—offering both comfort and eerie surrender. Freaky Friday was one of our childhood favourites....🕊️🙏🏻
July 11th, 2025 08:21
arqios said:
Your song/poem carries a haunting sense of invitation—offering both comfort and eerie surrender. Freaky Friday was one of our childhood favourites....🕊️🙏🏻
July 11th, 2025 08:21
The Storm
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
vivid imagery. pretty much sums up my inner turmoil when it comes to writing poetry lol. a fave!!
July 10th, 2025 15:24
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
vivid imagery. pretty much sums up my inner turmoil when it comes to writing poetry lol. a fave!!
July 10th, 2025 15:24
The Storm
orchidee said:
I jumped off a cliff (did I?) then rebounded up again. Someone had put a giant bouncy castle at the foot of the cliff! LOL.
Ohh, eat some spinach - you\'ll feel better. :)
July 10th, 2025 12:57
orchidee said:
I jumped off a cliff (did I?) then rebounded up again. Someone had put a giant bouncy castle at the foot of the cliff! LOL.
Ohh, eat some spinach - you\'ll feel better. :)
July 10th, 2025 12:57
The Storm
Damaso said:
I feel a film reel unwinding in fits and starts, like an old engine running steadily. Different, striking images keep me from resting, and I start the next line again. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 10:37
Damaso said:
I feel a film reel unwinding in fits and starts, like an old engine running steadily. Different, striking images keep me from resting, and I start the next line again. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 10:37
The Storm
arqios said:
Wow, my 15-year old self wrote mostly like a 12-year old inebriated on Kool Aid, man! I was scratching my head attempting to reconstruct the lost bits of my early poems just a few hours ago. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:47
arqios said:
Wow, my 15-year old self wrote mostly like a 12-year old inebriated on Kool Aid, man! I was scratching my head attempting to reconstruct the lost bits of my early poems just a few hours ago. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 10th, 2025 09:47
The Storm
Caring dove said:
I like your writing .. I think that sometimes life can feel so horrible and painful ( and go through awful things .. ( I have )
That it can feel like bad weather .. and we don’t see things get better ( even tho they might be going to )
I like the rhyming in this nice flow to your words
I like the idea of relating weather to emotions or life
July 10th, 2025 09:26
Caring dove said:
I like your writing .. I think that sometimes life can feel so horrible and painful ( and go through awful things .. ( I have )
That it can feel like bad weather .. and we don’t see things get better ( even tho they might be going to )
I like the rhyming in this nice flow to your words
I like the idea of relating weather to emotions or life
July 10th, 2025 09:26
The Storm
Doggerel Dave said:
Daffinateley overthinking at age 15, Tristan. With age comes wisdom (or so I\'m led to believe - though sometimes I find that hard to accept) and to prove it - you\'re here!☺️
Top notch rhymery, BTW👍
July 10th, 2025 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Daffinateley overthinking at age 15, Tristan. With age comes wisdom (or so I\'m led to believe - though sometimes I find that hard to accept) and to prove it - you\'re here!☺️
Top notch rhymery, BTW👍
July 10th, 2025 08:13
The Storm
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended or not metaphor comes through strong to me. Life is a storm and there are dead ends it appears amidst threats. Sometimes it seems easier to end life than to face its perils. I love the way you left this question hanging and so the reader too is left hanging on this question. A lovely write for such a young age.
July 10th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Whether intended or not metaphor comes through strong to me. Life is a storm and there are dead ends it appears amidst threats. Sometimes it seems easier to end life than to face its perils. I love the way you left this question hanging and so the reader too is left hanging on this question. A lovely write for such a young age.
July 10th, 2025 07:59
The Storm
Poetic Licence said:
Travelling through the storm of of life up to that point, how anger when not managed can lead you into some troubled weather, glad the weather got better in the end, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 07:54
Poetic Licence said:
Travelling through the storm of of life up to that point, how anger when not managed can lead you into some troubled weather, glad the weather got better in the end, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 07:54
It Shant Be In Vain
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t tell me a thing about flies that as a resident of Australia I don\'t know already. Though to be absolutely, utterly honest, as more specifically a resident of Sydney, not even the bloody flies can find an affordable square inch.....
PS: Integration of picture and verse ain\'t so\' bad\' ya know.....
July 9th, 2025 19:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t tell me a thing about flies that as a resident of Australia I don\'t know already. Though to be absolutely, utterly honest, as more specifically a resident of Sydney, not even the bloody flies can find an affordable square inch.....
PS: Integration of picture and verse ain\'t so\' bad\' ya know.....
July 9th, 2025 19:11
It Shant Be In Vain
Tony Grannell said:
A bug punctuates the penultimate line of your poem with its life - what a way to go and certainly not in vain. Forever in your poem, a fine resting place indeed - hahaha! Well done, Tristan.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 15:18
Tony Grannell said:
A bug punctuates the penultimate line of your poem with its life - what a way to go and certainly not in vain. Forever in your poem, a fine resting place indeed - hahaha! Well done, Tristan.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 15:18
Between the Lines
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
publication is exceedingly difficult, and, though I haven\'t attempted to publish anything if my own, I\'m sure rejection must sting. another reason why I love this site, though; you don\'t need a fancy publisher... just you and your work, and that\'s beautiful. it\'s also such a blessing to have others read your work and enjoy it. enjoyed the read! a fave, as well.
July 9th, 2025 11:11
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
publication is exceedingly difficult, and, though I haven\'t attempted to publish anything if my own, I\'m sure rejection must sting. another reason why I love this site, though; you don\'t need a fancy publisher... just you and your work, and that\'s beautiful. it\'s also such a blessing to have others read your work and enjoy it. enjoyed the read! a fave, as well.
July 9th, 2025 11:11
Between the Lines
Neville said:
Jeez T if I had faves then this would surely feature .. Some things are crying out to be said .. this is one such thing .. I do award stars tho\' ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
July 9th, 2025 11:10
Neville said:
Jeez T if I had faves then this would surely feature .. Some things are crying out to be said .. this is one such thing .. I do award stars tho\' ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
July 9th, 2025 11:10
Between the Lines
orchidee said:
Boohoo, I never knew ya disliked my poems so much! heehee.
July 9th, 2025 10:48
orchidee said:
Boohoo, I never knew ya disliked my poems so much! heehee.
July 9th, 2025 10:48
Between the Lines
Poetic Licence said:
A defiant message to all, if everyone wrote to please everyone there would be nothing out there, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 10:37
Poetic Licence said:
A defiant message to all, if everyone wrote to please everyone there would be nothing out there, lovely write, enjoyed the read
July 9th, 2025 10:37
Between the Lines
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Minor update in progress. Final version coming soon once the server stops trying to block from making it. Egads. 🙄
July 9th, 2025 10:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Minor update in progress. Final version coming soon once the server stops trying to block from making it. Egads. 🙄
July 9th, 2025 10:00
Between the Lines
sorenbarrett said:
Too true at least so it was with Eugene Bullard the black swallow of death. After submitting his biography he was told that it was too unbelievable and would not be published. Indeed it was too unbelievable but was all true. He seems to have been the black Forest Gump. Love the read it brought that back to mind, rejection does not always mean inferior it can mean that it is simply too good to be accepted.
July 9th, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Too true at least so it was with Eugene Bullard the black swallow of death. After submitting his biography he was told that it was too unbelievable and would not be published. Indeed it was too unbelievable but was all true. He seems to have been the black Forest Gump. Love the read it brought that back to mind, rejection does not always mean inferior it can mean that it is simply too good to be accepted.
July 9th, 2025 09:29
Between the Lines
Cheeky Missy said:
Every contest I\'ve entered earns me nothing but chagrin, whence it\'s pointless wasting the half pennies to have my work bound and printed since obviously nobody wants it. Let us expire with the rest of humanity and...presto! Our work may well be revered. Only when we\'re six feet under, mind you. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I love, love, LOVE it!
July 9th, 2025 09:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Every contest I\'ve entered earns me nothing but chagrin, whence it\'s pointless wasting the half pennies to have my work bound and printed since obviously nobody wants it. Let us expire with the rest of humanity and...presto! Our work may well be revered. Only when we\'re six feet under, mind you. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a deliciously familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I love, love, LOVE it!
July 9th, 2025 09:19
Between the Lines
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Those gatekeepers don\'t know good shit when they see it and particularly this one. You should send it to them - hahaha! I really enjoyed this one; you never let the reader down.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 08:50
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Those gatekeepers don\'t know good shit when they see it and particularly this one. You should send it to them - hahaha! I really enjoyed this one; you never let the reader down.
All the best,
Tony.
July 9th, 2025 08:50
Between the Lines
arqios said:
Oh dear, been there and have had that done to me in parallel forms. Gatekeepers don\'t own the place but they do brandish the keys quite wilfully. You know there are enough of us about to put out an independent label (if it were like a Motown story) mmm...
July 9th, 2025 08:46
arqios said:
Oh dear, been there and have had that done to me in parallel forms. Gatekeepers don\'t own the place but they do brandish the keys quite wilfully. You know there are enough of us about to put out an independent label (if it were like a Motown story) mmm...
July 9th, 2025 08:46
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