Comments received on poems by Antoinette



Who am I?
WG7 said:

You are whomever you want to be. Don\'t live in the dark. Come on out, and you\'ll find yourself. It takes a while, but you will find yourself.

February 15th, 2017 17:40

Who am I?
Antoinette said:



February 15th, 2017 11:05

Dear Mother
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ANTOINETTE ~ a very powerful and poignant second poem. All of us who are old enough to have cut the \"umbilical\" can empathise ! All Mothers are possessive and molding and want us to be just like them and don\'t want to let go until we are. I live separate but go every Sunday for lunch and that now satisfies her . \"All Young People wanna break free from the constrictions and anachronisms of Home\" Yours BRIAN

February 5th, 2017 10:21

Dear Mother
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing ANTOINETTE ~ a very powerful and poignant second poem. All of us who are old enough to have cut the \"umbilical\" can empathise ! All Mothers are possessive and molding and want us to be just like them and don\'t want to let go until we are. I live separate but go every Sunday for lunch and that now satisfies her . \"All Young People wanna break free from the constrictions and anachronisms of Home\" Yours BRIAN

February 5th, 2017 10:21

Dear Mother
Tony36 said:

Wonderfully written and expressed Great write

February 4th, 2017 15:25

Dear Mother
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This poem, as I read it, is both the expression of the need to get out from under the overly-protective and scrutinizing wings of your mother, and also an expression of the desire to be accepted and loved by the one who carried you in her womb. Great write! Welcome to MPS. Look forward to reading more! :)

February 4th, 2017 12:12

Painter.
Hopey_xx said:

This is great!

February 2nd, 2017 12:41

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