Comments received on poems by Byepolarbear



Bring on Summer
Augustus said:

Like the way you brought children into it as they are a large part of the brightness in our lives as the grey wet dreary clouds fade. Kudos.

March 12th, 2017 18:59

Bring on Summer
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 12th, 2017 13:19

Bring on Summer
JJCooke said:

Nice flow, enjoyable read.

March 12th, 2017 13:16

Waterside
Augustus said:

Struck at a loss of words for this mind catching, emotion tugging poem. Kudos.

March 11th, 2017 15:43

Waterside
MendedFences27 said:

The blues personified, immortal as we\'ve all assumed, and now a stranger by the waterside. A brilliant piece of work. Loved every line of it. - Phil A.

March 11th, 2017 15:28

Waterside
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Love this
Great
Wordplay you could say
Looks good on the page
Twists beautifully, a snap shot in time that floats away on little cloud
Bra bloody Vo

March 11th, 2017 09:38

In Time
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 10th, 2017 10:26

In Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write, so much meaning and emotion in these words.

March 10th, 2017 02:40

In Time
Augustus said:

I believe that it hurts more than an arrow to the chest. At least that heals. It helps to write about it. Hugs. Well done.

March 9th, 2017 19:52

Yellow
Augustus said:

Nice analogy.

March 7th, 2017 11:45

Yellow
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 7th, 2017 08:30

My f...... cat
Augustus said:

Welcome to MPS. Personally I prefer not using the real curse word so I am happy with that, but some would argue with me. Nicely done.

March 6th, 2017 18:55

My f...... cat
Allan J. Renaldo said:

This is really amazing!

March 6th, 2017 15:55