Silhouette
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and good message.

March 7th, 2017 02:42

Stardust
Fay Slimm. said:

I like the flow to this romantic lament - written in free style the essence of love which is forbidden comes through each line as it ends in a sad goodbye . Good read.

March 5th, 2017 12:04

Breathe
Augustus said:

Welcome to MPS. Love, inspiration, and communication go both ways. I like that you included \"sing\". When you are in love you feel like bursting out into song. Good write.

March 4th, 2017 18:40

Breathe
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 4th, 2017 18:05