Comments received on poems by Aamina
who did you think i am?
dusk arising said:
Why should the reader think you are male?
Maybe it\'s the way you write gives the reader your feminine aura.
June 11th, 2019 16:39
dusk arising said:
Why should the reader think you are male?
Maybe it\'s the way you write gives the reader your feminine aura.
June 11th, 2019 16:39
Cherish It
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANTINODE ~ Thanks for your first Poem which took us from the Age of Innocence (0 to 16 ?) to the realities of the World of Work ! I can empathise (I\'m 35 this Year) and I have been working (and studying) for 19 years ~ I\'m an Applied Scientist and my preferences are Chemistry ~ Physics ~ Maths ~ Biology ~ Earth Sciences ~ Psychology in that order ~ OK ! I am engaged so my innocence and degrees of freedom are being eroded but I still enjoy some of the pleasures you describe in verses 1 to 3. How one copes in the \"World of Work\" depends on ones JOB (I Teach Applied Science in a College to 16+ Vocational Students) and ones COLLEAGUES (mine are excellent) so my experience is ~ life can be bearable ~ when you have to grow up and enter the \"Real World\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN MPS works by mutually reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ B !
June 4th, 2018 18:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ANTINODE ~ Thanks for your first Poem which took us from the Age of Innocence (0 to 16 ?) to the realities of the World of Work ! I can empathise (I\'m 35 this Year) and I have been working (and studying) for 19 years ~ I\'m an Applied Scientist and my preferences are Chemistry ~ Physics ~ Maths ~ Biology ~ Earth Sciences ~ Psychology in that order ~ OK ! I am engaged so my innocence and degrees of freedom are being eroded but I still enjoy some of the pleasures you describe in verses 1 to 3. How one copes in the \"World of Work\" depends on ones JOB (I Teach Applied Science in a College to 16+ Vocational Students) and ones COLLEAGUES (mine are excellent) so my experience is ~ life can be bearable ~ when you have to grow up and enter the \"Real World\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN MPS works by mutually reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ B !
June 4th, 2018 18:27
