Comments received on poems by Jayden

Simple-Man87 said:

I\'m trying to figure out if this is a good guy or bad guy.

I love this poem though.

August 18th, 2017 13:33

It\'s kind of funny
Nameless said:

Beautifully written and very down to earth; raw emotions. Loved it.

April 12th, 2017 22:57

It\'s kind of funny
kiersten said:

I love this

April 12th, 2017 19:30


WELCOME JAYDEN ~ Thanks for you first poem ~ which (as you say) is kinda sad ~ but in my experience redeemable ! When I was 17 it was a betwixt and between time ~ still a student and not much independence and everybody seemed to be moving away from me ! Like you say ~ i was just a memory in the minds of those i used to hang with. I was studying Science and I got a job (as a process control Chemist) and studied part~time for degree.Be at Work & College gave me lots more friends and I was earning money ! I am now a teacher of Applied Science and love my JOB and have my own Flat ! I.m not married (yet) but i have regular GF and I\'m much more happier and focussed than when I was 17 ! Hope this helps ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

April 8th, 2017 17:13

LukeMorrison said:

The message in the metaphors is conveyed beautifully in this poem. Really resonates with me

April 8th, 2017 00:50