Wall by Raven333



  • Justa_Geezer

    What is your name on allpoetry.com then Raven ? My email if you would like to correspond is [email protected]

      • Raven333

        I am moonbaby805... my email is [email protected]

        • Justa_Geezer

          Wow, I can really assimilate with this poem of yours... Very Lonely

          You know,
          I sit here all day
          I sit here all night,
          I sit here by myself
          Sometimes I wish,
          I had someone
          To which I could,
          Invite.
          The loneliness,
          Overwhelms me
          I start to talk,
          To myself.
          I know it's starting
          To affect my health.
          People say,
          ' Hey just call me'
          But I know
          That's not true.
          These people don't want,
          To be bothered
          Am so tired,
          Of feeling blue.
          I fight the tears
          When I feel them,
          Coming.
          I get used to
          Cuddling with myself.
          My life has gotten
          So bad,
          I know I should
          Just hang it all,
          Up on a shelf.
          How come you don't put your others on here, you are a real wordsmith ! Dave.

          • Raven333

            Well thank you very much but I do have to say my fellow poet, my friend Gusta Geezer posted this on my wall... thank you

            • Justa_Geezer

              Thats not one of mine, is yours !

              • Justa_Geezer

                Maybe we really should start that whatsapp phone group, to help us overcome that loneliness !

                • Justa_Geezer

                  I thought this might tickle your laughing buds ! Lyrics of a song by Noel Murphy !


                  Dear Sir, I write this note to you to tell you of my plight,

                  For at this time of writing I am not a pretty sight,

                  My body is all black and blue, my face a deathly grey,

                  And I write this note to say why Paddy's not at work today,

                  Whilst working on the fourteenth floor some bricks I had to clear,

                  To throw them down from such a height was not a good idea,

                  The foreman wasn't very pleased, he being a awkward sod,

                  He said I'd have to cart them down the levels in my hod,

                  Now clearing all those bricks by hand it was so very slow,

                  So I hoisted up a barrel and secured the rope below,

                  But in my haste to do the job I was too blind to see,

                  That a barrel full of building bricks was heavier than me,

                  So when I untied the rope, the barrel fell like lead,

                  And clinging tightly to the rope I started up instead,

                  I shot up like a rocket till to my dismay I found,

                  That half way up I met the bloody barrel coming down,

                  The barrel broke my shoulder as to the ground it sped,

                  And when I reached the top I banged the pulley with my head,

                  I hung on tightly, numb with shock from this almighty blow,

                  And the barrel spilled out half the bricks fourteen floors below,

                  Now when these bricks had fallen from the barrel to the floor,

                  I then outweighed the barrel and so started down once more,

                  Still clinging tightly to the rope, my body raked with pain,

                  When half way down I met the bloody barrel once again,

                  The force of this collision halfway up the office block,

                  Caused multiple abrasions and a nasty state of shock,

                  Still clinging tightly to the rope I fell towards the ground,

                  And landed on the broken bricks that were all scattered round,

                  I lay there moaning on the ground, I thought I'd passed the worst,

                  When the barrel hit the pulley wheel and then the bottom burst,

                  A shower of bricks rained down on me, I hadn't got a hope,

                  As I lay there bleeding on the ground I let go the bloody rope,

                  The barrel then was heavier, it started down once more,

                  And landed right across me as I lay upon the floor,

                  It broke three ribs and my left arm and I can only say,

                  That I hope you'll understand why Paddy's not at work today.

                  • Raven333

                    LOL, that was a great one!!! That poor soul really didn't have a good now didn't he... thanks so much for sharing that..

                    • Justa_Geezer

                      Hi Raven, sorry I've been missing a while, I have had that covid, but am starting to feel a lot better. I hope you never had too many problems with twister season, I know its been pretty bad out there in places. You stay well and away from these bugs, talk soon...." X " Mwa Dave !

                    • Justa_Geezer

                      What's happened to our Raven,
                      Did she go away on holiday,
                      Did she run to some safe haven,
                      She's been missing many a day.

                      Did cupid come and ring that bell,
                      Did she meet that nice old friend,
                      Did things for them turn out well,
                      Hope she's found a happy end !'

                        • Raven333

                          Oh my dear friend, I am crying trying to write.. means so much. sorry I haven't been around but don't want to bore you with details so just say I have been extremely sad and an emotional wreck for the last 3 weeks but I have finally pulled myself up and to see this makes me feel I have worth... I thank you deeply for thinking of me but promise I will and am returning... means alot, almost there my friend..

                          • Justa_Geezer

                            I am so pleased to be hearing from you Raven, just to know you are still about. In times like you have just been through, just pop on here and make a comment, so we all know you are still with us ! As to worth, you have that in abundance my friend ! " X " Mwa.



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