OH MY, MASAOKA SHIKI STUFF IS REALLY DEEP! LOVE HOW HE USES NATURE TO PROVOKE THOUGHT. DOES ANYONE ELSE FEEL THE SADNESS IN HIS WORDS? OR IS IT JUST ME MISSING THE POINT?
Honestly, the poem was kinda dull. Not much to it really. The bit about "clouds torn apart" seemed a bit overdone. Not much color or excitement in the language. Needs more punch in my opinion! 👀 🍂
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Comments2OH MY, MASAOKA SHIKI STUFF IS REALLY DEEP! LOVE HOW HE USES NATURE TO PROVOKE THOUGHT. DOES ANYONE ELSE FEEL THE SADNESS IN HIS WORDS? OR IS IT JUST ME MISSING THE POINT?
Honestly, the poem was kinda dull. Not much to it really. The bit about "clouds torn apart" seemed a bit overdone. Not much color or excitement in the language. Needs more punch in my opinion! 👀 🍂