Short and sweet

Poetic Dan

I'm heading off to dream world, I won't remember a thing. But from the moment I wake up, I know what I'll be missing.

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 31st, 2018 02:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: When you're in a relationship its good to have time apart, it will show you the depth of your heart and reassuring the soul it is what you want.
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  • sylviasearcher

    But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful punctuation of feeling somehow more free?

    • Poetic Dan

      I understand that so well but maybe its a message to try and put them both closer together.
      Appreciate your comment

      • Poetic Dan

        Wow, I've just read your words on my fusion poem.
        Inspirational, I felt a chill all over. Thank you so so much for your input

        • sylviasearcher

          Thanks Dan, i am not happy with my last couple of lines... Their rhythm but you can't edit it.

          Perhaps it was because I wanted so much to end in a hopeful note but there is a jerkiness within my soul at the moment when I think of such things as hopefulness, healing and purpose.

          I really believe that the sun conscious manifests in writing.

          Sometimes I like to leave the awkward bits in as I believe that there is meaning there. I think I can tell when I read and write the bits that are raw and real and the bits that we really want to be so but it's just not part of our being in that moment...

          Sorry I've waffled...

          Your poems are so hopeful and full of light.

          My best poems are tortured and forlorn! I get tired of my tragic self!

        • kevin browne

          You won't miss a thing, my friend. Dreaming is okay and sometimes they show the light of your true existence when you wake. Waking up is okay too, but allow those dreams to create whatever it is they create. With you and your dreams as we read them make us believe the things you think we wouldn't normally thing. It's called intelligence and you have bucket loads of it so get writing and show us what you're made of.

        • orchidee

          You'll miss my singing if you're asleep fast enough (in deep sleep)!

        • Goldfinch60

          That which you have been missing will come to life for so that you will live your dreams.



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